tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5134637572656131619..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: a child's playgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40092479648879707032010-09-21T18:25:20.805-07:002010-09-21T18:25:20.805-07:00Short yet full of life.Short yet full of life.cesargealogohttp://cesargealogo.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13337013332232445242010-09-20T12:30:17.340-07:002010-09-20T12:30:17.340-07:00Ending gave me a chill—it begins so sweet and inno...Ending gave me a chill—it begins so sweet and innocent. cheersdustushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59447588796381650892010-09-20T11:34:00.200-07:002010-09-20T11:34:00.200-07:00Brief but pungent. Very effective ... I like it.Ha...Brief but pungent. Very effective ... I like it.<br><br>Happy potluck!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30155807252454930412010-09-20T08:20:23.199-07:002010-09-20T08:20:23.199-07:00Definitely a poem of two halves - both beautifully...Definitely a poem of two halves - both beautifully crafted. I loved "a child dithers".vivinfrancehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41274002861780921672010-09-20T07:23:47.679-07:002010-09-20T07:23:47.679-07:00This started out so sweet and ended on an eerie no...This started out so sweet and ended on an eerie note! Packs a lot in few words.TALONhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2170328941260521902010-09-20T07:21:00.880-07:002010-09-20T07:21:00.880-07:00Wow I love the haunting feel of this :3Wow I love the haunting feel of this :3RiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33385527029297070732010-09-20T06:30:59.468-07:002010-09-20T06:30:59.468-07:00different- very different style- enjoyed it!different- very different style- enjoyed it!fiveloafhttp://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80586101200677544602010-09-20T02:18:18.442-07:002010-09-20T02:18:18.442-07:00deep it is cheers!!!deep it is cheers!!!wiserskydiverhttp://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60281234449429616302010-09-19T19:13:34.959-07:002010-09-19T19:13:34.959-07:00Such depth in your words..very strong and powerful...Such depth in your words..very strong and powerful poem..thank you for linking with Potluck. xxAmandahttp://buttercup600.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62356526520477461172010-09-19T18:51:32.223-07:002010-09-19T18:51:32.223-07:00so very well plotted 160.Thanks for sharing with p...so very well plotted 160.<br>Thanks for sharing with poetry pot luck!Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79490569663810718052010-09-15T17:32:24.277-07:002010-09-15T17:32:24.277-07:00Very nice work. Short poems are difficult. You mas...Very nice work. Short poems are difficult. You mastered the simplicity.beejayjrhttp://beejayjr.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79648305695700708012010-09-15T17:09:00.534-07:002010-09-15T17:09:00.534-07:00Powerful words indeed!Powerful words indeed!Dasuntouchahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70946538221403618532010-09-15T06:11:57.123-07:002010-09-15T06:11:57.123-07:00Sort of innocent and scary all together.Sort of innocent and scary all together.Nessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87484308607330029332010-09-14T16:06:58.507-07:002010-09-14T16:06:58.507-07:00WOW. Everyone has the same take. What it reminde...WOW. Everyone has the same take. What it reminded me of is that the packages of food airlifted to the Middle East were yellow, and so were the bombs, which detonated when touched. That's what I took from it, and that's about as sad as it gets. Was that your intention?sharplittlepencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70740153607450184402010-09-14T08:56:31.316-07:002010-09-14T08:56:31.316-07:00Yikes! That went from sweet to scary with barely ...Yikes! That went from sweet to scary with barely a breath between. Nicely done.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77118417893885373792010-09-14T06:44:39.400-07:002010-09-14T06:44:39.400-07:00I see Susan's point, but I like that a child c...I see Susan's point, but I like that a child can still find joy in the world.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61007948050053345222010-09-14T06:37:25.873-07:002010-09-14T06:37:25.873-07:00It really sucks that there's so much pain hidd...It really sucks that there's so much pain hidden behind innocence...Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6709539024859353982010-09-14T06:32:12.390-07:002010-09-14T06:32:12.390-07:00That was an unexpected ending!That was an unexpected ending!anahttp://theperfectionproject.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7218167297274205452010-09-14T06:29:56.241-07:002010-09-14T06:29:56.241-07:00A brief but so vivid piece of writing. Your final ...A brief but so vivid piece of writing. Your final line anchors the other images with a haunting quality. This is a beautiful poem,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://intuitivepaths.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91799373764018151982010-09-14T06:09:44.782-07:002010-09-14T06:09:44.782-07:00Such atmosphere and depth in so few words..very st...Such atmosphere and depth in so few words..very strong and visual piece..thank you for your vist..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22497953069016191852010-09-14T03:03:09.634-07:002010-09-14T03:03:09.634-07:00Its an awesome poem, great work. hope to see moreIts an awesome poem, great work. hope to see moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85397849464386700322010-09-13T14:16:12.276-07:002010-09-13T14:16:12.276-07:00powerful poem Gautami!Pamelapowerful poem Gautami!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75212687157104637362010-09-13T13:33:54.531-07:002010-09-13T13:33:54.531-07:00You have an ethereal one going here. Thanks for pl...You have an ethereal one going here. Thanks for playing the Sunday 160.Monkey Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.com