tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5069591544667228513..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: diffusedgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59239410298018265082012-08-13T08:08:29.159-07:002012-08-13T08:08:29.159-07:00Gautami,About one at peace with self told so well....Gautami,<br><br>About one at peace with self told so well.<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28262696971829642142012-08-11T13:06:49.991-07:002012-08-11T13:06:49.991-07:00n air of mystery, as though she doesn't want t...n air of mystery, as though she doesn't want to believe she may have been stood up or rejected. She maintains her cool. The italicized ending, and interpretation of her inmost thoughts, lovely. Great write, Gautami! Peace, AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80931664152249750992012-08-10T19:05:58.592-07:002012-08-10T19:05:58.592-07:00Awesome poem, very nice written. Full of positive ...Awesome poem, very nice written. Full of positive energy and strenghtChèvrefeuillehttp://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.nl/2012/08/tackle-it-tuesday-back-to-basic.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52247384656826838982012-08-08T05:11:40.553-07:002012-08-08T05:11:40.553-07:00I love the tie in with the image. I hope her calm...I love the tie in with the image. I hope her calm and solitude was able to show her the path the next morning...Pattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47049250104279217942012-08-07T22:33:33.766-07:002012-08-07T22:33:33.766-07:00I like this, as I am very prone to tuning someone ...I like this, as I am very prone to tuning someone out :)<br><br>Was wondering about you during the power outage. Hope you weren't too inconvenienced.Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83176066289638913772012-08-07T19:15:16.540-07:002012-08-07T19:15:16.540-07:00Oh it's funny what will fascinate us at the mo...Oh it's funny what will fascinate us at the most bizarre moments... anything to escape I guess. Nice write!pandamoniumcathttp://pandamoniumcat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22798940131054531112012-08-07T17:30:16.760-07:002012-08-07T17:30:16.760-07:00Your opening line just grabs me, with the bellowin...Your opening line just grabs me, with the bellowing curtain...her calm is rich as well throughout. Nicely done!Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65085540143703892712012-08-06T23:16:13.528-07:002012-08-06T23:16:13.528-07:00"what is behind the bellowing curtainsshe ask..."what is behind the bellowing curtains<br>she asks to herself..<br>her mind has zoomed out her companion's voice . . ."<br><br>You sketch this in so beautifully with questions and assertions, and the wish for solitude, that I believe you whole-heartedly. I have been there!Susanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25825222284742226412012-08-06T19:52:25.962-07:002012-08-06T19:52:25.962-07:00Solitude can truly be a blessed thing.Solitude can truly be a blessed thing.razzamadazzlehttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68210198762233994162012-08-06T19:31:34.420-07:002012-08-06T19:31:34.420-07:00I love the last line.=)I love the last line.<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77507389244103475002012-08-06T15:04:29.398-07:002012-08-06T15:04:29.398-07:00I love the notion of a curtain bellowing...perhaps...I love the notion of a curtain bellowing...perhaps in song?Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78654615235309638802012-08-06T08:02:07.203-07:002012-08-06T08:02:07.203-07:00I really enjoyed how you kept going back to the cu...I really enjoyed how you kept going back to the curtains, and wondering what was better out there. Well done.Buddah Moskowitzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24587551568152078432012-08-06T07:32:00.808-07:002012-08-06T07:32:00.808-07:00This is beautiful. I love the many layers suggest...This is beautiful. I love the many layers suggested by so few words. Well done!Barbara The Healthy Nuthttp://www.barbarathehealthynut.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68940215234323665892012-08-06T04:48:21.789-07:002012-08-06T04:48:21.789-07:00I love the curtains- I used them in a slightly dif...I love the curtains- I used them in a slightly different way, as I was so often outdoors looking in!<br>I can relate to her angst.izzyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67991019481282436892012-08-06T03:17:38.322-07:002012-08-06T03:17:38.322-07:00He probably won't even notice she has lost con...He probably won't even notice she has lost contact with him; he must be boring!oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9083864430357065122012-08-05T22:35:49.519-07:002012-08-05T22:35:49.519-07:00I love how she tries to focus on something simple ...I love how she tries to focus on something simple to stay calm throughout the period.Dana Dampierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32385333094829221212012-08-05T16:30:13.161-07:002012-08-05T16:30:13.161-07:00I love the sense of calm and solitude you have cre...I love the sense of calm and solitude you have created with your words here, Gautami. The end quote emphasizes the aloof feeling. Lovely work. Thank you for sharing.Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80777861918386604052012-08-05T15:01:59.506-07:002012-08-05T15:01:59.506-07:00she is so cool....and unafraid, as I might be abou...she is so cool....and unafraid, as I might be about the 'bellowing curtains'...joannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10100099729012432952012-08-05T13:19:33.619-07:002012-08-05T13:19:33.619-07:00Finding one's own calm centre is good trick, i...Finding one's own calm centre is good trick, if you can do it...Jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8236115411598557992012-08-05T10:32:16.913-07:002012-08-05T10:32:16.913-07:00Oh, the blessed calm....Oh, the blessed calm....Catfish Taleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15168156842238803689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58482628279710476702012-08-05T09:33:46.710-07:002012-08-05T09:33:46.710-07:00I hope her story has a happy ending :)Lovely inter...I hope her story has a happy ending :)<br>Lovely interpretation of the prompt.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com