tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5044666926486715302..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: hypothesisgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23495056216744598802006-08-01T11:15:00.000-07:002006-08-01T11:15:00.000-07:00But don't forget, I was reacting to the poem-i...But don't forget, I was reacting to the poem-itself - how the lines affected me - and not to any actual relationship of yours, which obviously I don't know anything about and wouldn't dream of "analyzing!"Dariushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05334850087376561181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63695076819506653212006-07-31T21:46:00.000-07:002006-07-31T21:46:00.000-07:00Sounds to me like if you were hiding and disguisin...Sounds to me like if you were hiding and disguising gut-wrenching feelings and hurting inside, and pretending not to be hurt by not showing your pain, and returning again and again for more of the same, and feeling sad...<br><br>...that you were giving a whole lot more than you were getting or should have expected to get.<br><br>OK, you were in a black mood. But how did you cope? What answers did you need or find in life's book?Within Withouthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14053550976947793329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5021492970359856892006-07-31T10:59:00.000-07:002006-07-31T10:59:00.000-07:00I wouldn't change a thing..the heart wants wha...I wouldn't change a thing..the heart wants what the heart wants.<br><br>You said that you were in a black mood when you wrote this. My neice just returned from a year in India and brought me a movie named BLACK by Sanjay Leela Bhansali. Have you seen it? I really liked Amitabh Bachchan is he a big star?Homo Escapeonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09321864117075753776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33959706272057199042006-07-30T10:11:00.000-07:002006-07-30T10:11:00.000-07:00keshi: why do we want love to be returned? thats n...keshi: why do we want love to be returned? thats not what i meant here. ..<br><br>percival: i am so glad you are back...dancing with joy..<br><br>liquid plastic: i agree. poetry is very personal. we do not need critiques.<br><br>i have seen light after the darkness. thats what matters.<br><br>darius: well, i don't know how to answer you... maybe you are right...who knows? love has many manifestations...maybe it was not love.. i really don't care any more..<br><br>as i said i wrote that long time back..couldn't post it before this. .gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19704510503952417012006-07-30T09:48:00.000-07:002006-07-30T09:48:00.000-07:00Makes me think of the differences between love and...Makes me think of the differences between love and other forms of psychological attachment - not meant, of course, to cast aspersions on any actual relationship you're referring to, just looking at the lines.Dariushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05334850087376561181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61132892870409320412006-07-29T10:48:00.000-07:002006-07-29T10:48:00.000-07:00No critique is necessary for poetry, because it sp...No critique is necessary for poetry, because it speaks from the individual heart, and who, other than yourself can say what you feel...<br><br>Sometimes, others might not agree, but it is in darkness that we find our light. So creating there is as natural as breathing.<br><br>Thanks for visiting me. - AmiasLiquidplastichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16698218834309702851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88276109139143808212006-07-28T09:30:00.000-07:002006-07-28T09:30:00.000-07:00It's all right.I have returned from fishing.It's all right.<br><br>I have returned from fishing.Percivalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05459731277147243660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17911000501193380092006-07-28T05:50:00.000-07:002006-07-28T05:50:00.000-07:00**loving you mindlessly is no crime why do i then ...**loving you mindlessly is no crime why do i then feel so sad? why does the pain<br>is such that i feel numb? <br><br>cos the love u r giving may not be returned the way it should be...<br><br>Keshi.Keshihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11552028676876233885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83713165788149154492006-07-27T03:42:00.000-07:002006-07-27T03:42:00.000-07:00thanks ghost. you haven't been here for long. ...thanks ghost. you haven't been here for long. welcome back!<br><br>don: when i wrote it i was in a very emotional, charged state. never came back to edit it as i couldn't do that.. thanks.<br><br>samuru999: thanks. am trying to stabilize myself now..gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56576006828319874822006-07-26T15:05:00.000-07:002006-07-26T15:05:00.000-07:00I liked it very much!As Don said... lots of feelin...I liked it very much!<br>As Don said... lots of feeling!samuru999http://www.blogger.com/profile/10510680641298962638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27515400846076685262006-07-26T13:18:00.000-07:002006-07-26T13:18:00.000-07:00Gautami...I really like it. Lots of feeling.Gautami...I really like it. Lots of feeling.Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04340003618821001342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56922813340988213632006-07-26T05:22:00.000-07:002006-07-26T05:22:00.000-07:00nice one...nice one...Ghost Particlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15513765462689523499noreply@blogger.com