tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4959104921080367764..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: amnesia--3WW/Cafe Writinggautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21008156028703098972007-12-28T10:20:00.000-08:002007-12-28T10:20:00.000-08:00I cant even pick a favorite line. Its perfect.I cant even pick a favorite line. Its perfect.A Tag Along Travelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00997688533571949049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89614707863676451802007-12-21T14:49:00.000-08:002007-12-21T14:49:00.000-08:00You wrote in a melachonly tone for a heartbroken g...You wrote in a melachonly tone for a heartbroken girl. no child should have to see that!mariacristinahttp://mariacristina.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43161597338827224152007-12-21T10:54:00.000-08:002007-12-21T10:54:00.000-08:00WOW g that was beautifully written...mankind we ca...WOW g that was beautifully written...mankind we can be so cruel...but life is full of grace...LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75717527044226591272007-12-20T21:59:00.000-08:002007-12-20T21:59:00.000-08:00This is finely crafted and very sad, Gautami. I f...This is finely crafted and very sad, Gautami. I feel for the girl.Lightheadedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15438507601416513826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57474996742485967352007-12-20T20:29:00.000-08:002007-12-20T20:29:00.000-08:00Great poem, title is okay too.There's great ad...Great poem, title is okay too.<br>There's great adjectives throughout and wow...what a powerful finish!Jujeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11075945120950670714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58858851096034847482007-12-20T20:08:00.000-08:002007-12-20T20:08:00.000-08:00So well done, Gautami, cut right to my heart. I wa...So well done, Gautami, cut right to my heart. I wanted to pick her up and just hold her and sing quietly beneath her voice. Powerful.<br><br><a href="http://meeaugraphie.com/" rel="nofollow">Marcia (MeeAugraphie)</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18207325986839247192007-12-20T13:51:00.000-08:002007-12-20T13:51:00.000-08:00amnesia would be a blessing in such a situation. H...amnesia would be a blessing in such a situation. How horrible that any child should have to live through such an ordeal. Very well done!<br><br>ChristyChristyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18177980888179765192007-12-20T00:12:00.000-08:002007-12-20T00:12:00.000-08:00Great piece, though hard =(You like a challenge do...Great piece, though hard =(<br>You like a challenge don't you? That's alot of words to fit and you did a fantastic job!<br>Best wishes for 2008Truefaith1963http://www.blogger.com/profile/03026809487740731739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47930676698753603062007-12-19T22:35:00.000-08:002007-12-19T22:35:00.000-08:00That was a shocker of poem, very well-written.--Ga...That was a shocker of poem, very well-written.<br>--GayGayhttp://gay.w.myopenid.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30896607144098826892007-12-19T20:28:00.000-08:002007-12-19T20:28:00.000-08:00Such things do happen. Scary, I know. Especially i...Such things do happen. Scary, I know. <br>Especially in Naxal areas.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45729313793500256082007-12-19T18:01:00.000-08:002007-12-19T18:01:00.000-08:00Oh, what a story. The last line was a shock.Oh, what a story. The last line was a shock.lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23827603275336388982007-12-19T17:17:00.000-08:002007-12-19T17:17:00.000-08:00That last line sure was a shocker, but also made m...That last line sure was a shocker, but also made me sad, reality is sad how much ever we hide from it...thanks again.<br><br><a href="http://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">UL</a>ULnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52657893208693631012007-12-19T14:54:00.000-08:002007-12-19T14:54:00.000-08:00I really hope this wasn't inspired by real lif...I really hope this wasn't inspired by real life. And if it was, I hope it happened to total strangers -- or, on the flip side, to someone whose life you can touch and improve.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71277168037503177892007-12-19T14:33:00.000-08:002007-12-19T14:33:00.000-08:00Well-done piece of horror...shocking last line.Well-done piece of horror...shocking last line.tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37491486609607018342007-12-19T14:26:00.000-08:002007-12-19T14:26:00.000-08:00You and i know this kind ofthing happens, which ma...You and i know this kind ofthing happens, which makes this piece even more profound!Stevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21322404033362431512007-12-19T14:00:00.000-08:002007-12-19T14:00:00.000-08:00Oh, my! What a sad picture. I wish your images w...Oh, my! What a sad picture. I wish your images weren't so good! Well-crafted!Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29764400897109641782007-12-19T13:54:00.000-08:002007-12-19T13:54:00.000-08:00efficient use of so many difficult words.efficient use of so many difficult words.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84463344784357140922007-12-19T13:01:00.001-08:002007-12-19T13:01:00.001-08:00Err, I publish, thinking everyone can read my mind...Err, I publish, thinking everyone can read my mind some weeks. This was well written, just a horrible experience for her.TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58322491638838473992007-12-19T13:01:00.000-08:002007-12-19T13:01:00.000-08:00Oh how horrible! :-/Oh how horrible! :-/TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73535020732094877952007-12-19T11:58:00.000-08:002007-12-19T11:58:00.000-08:00shocking story but well done!shocking story but well done!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41671302762346583272007-12-19T10:49:00.001-08:002007-12-19T10:49:00.001-08:00very nicely combined indeed... lovely poem....&quo...very nicely combined indeed... lovely poem....<br><br><a href="http://why-paisley.com/2007/12/19/fierenza/" rel="nofollow">"fierenza"</a>paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41240153018899768582007-12-19T10:49:00.000-08:002007-12-19T10:49:00.000-08:00RichardWell, that was a shock! Seemed very Indian...<a href="http://web.mac.com/rwellsrwells/iWeb/Site/Welcome.html" rel="nofollow">Richard</a><br><br>Well, that was a shock! Seemed very Indian, though I know it could happen anywhere. I could just see a little person sitting at a dung fire outside a blue tarp tent on the side of a roadway.<br><br>Congratulations on using "effulgent." What a horribly un-euphonic word.rwellsrwellshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17189198787248084987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23651889306917522682007-12-19T09:42:00.000-08:002007-12-19T09:42:00.000-08:00My dear friend, how I wish you were not so far. I ...My dear friend, how I wish you were not so far. I know we would enjoy conversing about a great many things.Brianhttp://hummingbunny.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59267403005934689292007-12-19T09:15:00.000-08:002007-12-19T09:15:00.000-08:00Very well written account of trauma. I hope no chi...Very well written account of trauma. I hope no child will ever again face this.<br><br>Rose<br><br>xo<br><br>My 3WW is up as well. <a href="http://dewyknickers.wordpress.com/2007/12/19/best-wishes/" rel="nofollow">"Signs of the times"</a>Rose Dewy Knickershttp://dewyknickers.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com