tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4953589132379312163..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: when my bones stick into yoursgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-873589755194814962009-09-22T21:19:56.976-07:002009-09-22T21:19:56.976-07:00from desperation leads to hunger"When my bone...from desperation leads to hunger<br>"When my bones stick into yours"<br>yet there is more...gabriellehttp://wildgoosescoopsmoon.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75684551901477080472009-09-22T07:32:44.717-07:002009-09-22T07:32:44.717-07:00beautiful imagery!lovely poem indeedbeautiful imagery!<br><br>lovely poem indeedShraddha@theselfloveprojecthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03301797813495991554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54743458656873767812009-09-21T08:41:42.316-07:002009-09-21T08:41:42.316-07:00I love this one- the desperation/inspiration, the ...I love this one- the desperation/inspiration, the need for each other.carolsnotebookhttp://carolsnotebook.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12241263699326174712009-09-21T07:23:27.749-07:002009-09-21T07:23:27.749-07:00Oh, this is exquisite. Lovely use of words, and a...Oh, this is exquisite. Lovely use of words, and as someone else probably said already, I like the switch in the first pair and last pair of lines. Very nice!namingconstellationshttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72516869072894165682009-09-21T04:58:26.614-07:002009-09-21T04:58:26.614-07:00Delightful. I love how you began and ended this pi...Delightful. I love how you began and ended this piece. Everything in between is wonderful too.Jane Doehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45901527191445276452009-09-21T02:30:38.809-07:002009-09-21T02:30:38.809-07:00I dare say, making love has it's own special f...I dare say, making love has it's own special fog --- and I can image from this poem it was thick indeed.<br><br>I enjoyed this ...Amiashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63652339725664413842009-09-20T21:24:38.104-07:002009-09-20T21:24:38.104-07:00Cloaked in the fog with our bones sticking togethe...Cloaked in the fog with our bones sticking together hanging from the pole. I think we've had it!<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28757681868798754542009-09-20T19:52:31.791-07:002009-09-20T19:52:31.791-07:00Lovely. as usualLovely. as usualJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24517157579823445872009-09-20T19:49:00.261-07:002009-09-20T19:49:00.261-07:00This passion is agonizing, isn't it. Written b...This passion is agonizing, isn't it. Written by somebody who knows exactly what this is like.Andreehttp://meeyauw-pad.blogspot.com/2009/09/one-single-impression-fog.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4893756743672765682009-09-20T19:21:37.685-07:002009-09-20T19:21:37.685-07:00favorite lines:you find me with desperationI find ...favorite lines:<br>you find me with desperation<br>I find you for inspiration<br>good stuff!Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9164499051404588352009-09-20T16:30:58.568-07:002009-09-20T16:30:58.568-07:00I like the couplets that you surrounded your poem ...I like the couplets that you surrounded your poem with. The slight changes twisted the repetition slightly and made for a very good read.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/09/20/cloud-breath/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3640705310746558972009-09-20T15:19:58.295-07:002009-09-20T15:19:58.295-07:00The imagery is indeed and in a word: exquisite. Ni...The imagery is indeed and in a word: exquisite. Nice work Gautami!Geraldinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91545596555800640382009-09-20T13:23:17.933-07:002009-09-20T13:23:17.933-07:00coming in late to say, wow! I love this. It's ...coming in late to say, wow! I love this. It's fabulous. Perhaps even one of my favourites of yours. Great job!sarah haliwellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34431344707378586572009-09-20T13:01:07.371-07:002009-09-20T13:01:07.371-07:00This is exquisite agony, all of it, the deeps of a...This is exquisite agony, all of it, the deeps of art. So many delightfully searing word combinations here! Every line is hot, hot, hot. From out of nowhere, you were delivered a particularly inspired piece this day, I say : )missalisterhttp://missalister.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59751766516298299572009-09-20T12:36:08.020-07:002009-09-20T12:36:08.020-07:00How much closer can two get than bone to bone and ...How much closer can two get than bone to bone and when cloaked in the same fog...neither is ever alone.<br><br>Loved your take here.Maggiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42590877471448047472009-09-20T11:55:05.587-07:002009-09-20T11:55:05.587-07:00You always leave me speechless!You always leave me speechless!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50563902872120001532009-09-20T10:46:13.271-07:002009-09-20T10:46:13.271-07:00'when my bones stick into yours' - terrifi...'when my bones stick into yours' - terrific - ah, the hungers we have...Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58389147528963954182009-09-20T10:18:53.443-07:002009-09-20T10:18:53.443-07:00Beautiful! Nice jobBeautiful! Nice jobSerena Shayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17959664736807639363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49612038975669215742009-09-20T09:44:05.714-07:002009-09-20T09:44:05.714-07:00this is another favorite of your writing. the titl...this is another favorite of your writing. the title is perfect and the poem shows the urgency of desperation/ inspiration coming together. excellent. have a great day.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22341710495314827012009-09-20T05:43:41.265-07:002009-09-20T05:43:41.265-07:00Like the symmetry of the first and last verses! Yo...Like the symmetry of the first and last verses! Your title phrase gives such a clear sense of two people cleaving unto each other with great intensity (desperation/inspiration) -- an almost damaging passion. great work, gautami!Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6008177884503408332009-09-20T05:24:22.712-07:002009-09-20T05:24:22.712-07:00Exquisite indeed, it it's at all possible to h...Exquisite indeed, it it's at all possible to have a favourite here (cause there are so many wonderful ones) This is IT!~ wow good girl ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90401948025995808212009-09-20T04:26:38.863-07:002009-09-20T04:26:38.863-07:00I love the transformative power of mutual hunger a...I love the transformative power of mutual hunger and the belief that it can be satisfied. Love it!SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5939741387229055922009-09-20T03:58:23.684-07:002009-09-20T03:58:23.684-07:00Liked the way you have separated and put forth the...Liked the way you have separated and put forth the first two and last two lines.Good write.swapnaphttp://swapnap.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35283035749110459192009-09-20T02:51:14.857-07:002009-09-20T02:51:14.857-07:00wow...too good dear:)..loved a lot:)wow...too good dear:)..loved a lot:)Yellow Tuliphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01976804180920335379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24878387362055768602009-09-20T01:45:34.080-07:002009-09-20T01:45:34.080-07:00That fog clings to everywhere. Excellently done.That fog clings to everywhere. Excellently done.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com