tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4936475061098584604..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: glaring nightmaregautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47346916355057886272009-09-25T13:00:33.214-07:002009-09-25T13:00:33.214-07:00Your writings are so completely raw and honest. I...Your writings are so completely raw and honest. I appreciate them.<br><br>My favorite lines:<br><i>let's be friends, sickens me<br>on the sidewalks I spill my guts out<br>people stare and you glare</i>Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29315005121863588542009-09-23T12:57:17.704-07:002009-09-23T12:57:17.704-07:00Wow gautami,another superb one from you....Reminds...Wow gautami,another superb one from you....<br>Reminds me of some things in the past.songofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37946409383552124872009-09-22T22:00:02.796-07:002009-09-22T22:00:02.796-07:00good one!good one!J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31473813246469351202009-09-22T09:14:48.549-07:002009-09-22T09:14:48.549-07:00Sometimes we feel like we are left behind...that h...Sometimes we feel like we are left behind...that happens in some parts of life:)cyclopsevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82134269696923646632009-09-21T21:18:14.628-07:002009-09-21T21:18:14.628-07:00Protest just walks and runs through this one. Bril...Protest just walks and runs through this one. Brilliant as usualJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10521491668784982262009-09-21T20:11:39.349-07:002009-09-21T20:11:39.349-07:00Well written. I can relate.Well written. I can relate.venus66http://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83083821248716005492009-09-21T17:49:14.266-07:002009-09-21T17:49:14.266-07:00You write beautifully! "My boots refuse to g...You write beautifully! "My boots refuse to go another step" I can picture that in so many ways-love it!Annehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06195528409761980551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11985020709122999272009-09-21T13:51:12.080-07:002009-09-21T13:51:12.080-07:00A raw spilling of emotional protest! Quite disturb...A raw spilling of emotional protest! Quite disturbing! A dramam in poetry!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50771269331452596452009-09-21T12:21:28.668-07:002009-09-21T12:21:28.668-07:00'let's be friends, sickens me on the sidew...'let's be friends, sickens me <br>on the sidewalks I spill my guts out <br>people stare and you glare'<br><br>This is so raw.Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21323584908436598602009-09-21T10:36:40.980-07:002009-09-21T10:36:40.980-07:00Yes, this struck me. Friendship does have holes an...Yes, this struck me. Friendship does have holes and sometimes we tumble into them. Sad. True friends are hard to come by.Mary333http://www.blogger.com/profile/06618318192221168152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17852807566324336612009-09-21T10:21:08.482-07:002009-09-21T10:21:08.482-07:00Tami my friend excellent as always. I would say to...Tami my friend excellent as always. I would say to you dump him!!!<br>Love is hard to find and harder to find true love. Well done my friend.<br><br><br>love-Melanie-bhdBeloved Haiku Dreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66095968658775060072009-09-21T10:10:43.061-07:002009-09-21T10:10:43.061-07:00Such a beautiful piece, I love these lines,'ca...Such a beautiful piece, I love these lines,<br><br>'calls for friendship has holes<br>as wide as craters<br>as deep as viper's pit'Jane Doehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81322241389257968692009-09-21T08:28:49.502-07:002009-09-21T08:28:49.502-07:00One feels the deep frustration because of someone&...One feels the deep frustration because of someone's unwillingness to make a commitment. Excellent portrayal of walking and going nowhere fast - for both. Well done Guatami.Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56450690513024253212009-09-21T08:13:37.939-07:002009-09-21T08:13:37.939-07:00one step and the next will get you to where you...one step and the next will get you to where you're going...one of my favourite sentence in a book called 'Swan Song'...applies here somewhat ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59210527414473974052009-09-21T07:21:56.347-07:002009-09-21T07:21:56.347-07:00"walk...walk...thats all you do..expect me to..."walk...walk...thats all you do..<br>expect me to follow you through"...a sense of deja vu fills me. Nicely written Gautami.swapnaphttp://swapnap.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34589013536513647012009-09-21T06:02:12.982-07:002009-09-21T06:02:12.982-07:00A poem that really FEELS.Beautiful!A poem that really FEELS.<br>Beautiful!Vita Stunderhttp://vitastunder.blogspot.com/2009/09/now-begins-with-you.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78555810585263941052009-09-21T01:36:53.490-07:002009-09-21T01:36:53.490-07:00beautiful dear..many of us do follow someone who i...beautiful dear..many of us do follow someone who is goin nowwhere:)...<br><br>loved this poem:)..Yellow Tuliphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01976804180920335379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2198696177769713562009-09-21T00:38:50.454-07:002009-09-21T00:38:50.454-07:00Many of us seem to keep on walking to nowhere.Many of us seem to keep on walking to nowhere.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56846591138564348812009-09-20T22:20:57.409-07:002009-09-20T22:20:57.409-07:00No committment...he's walking without getting ...No committment...he's walking without getting anywhere.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com