tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4767331046741390525..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: bubblesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52479874609775720732009-04-14T13:52:00.000-07:002009-04-14T13:52:00.000-07:00Hmmm de irony that m goin thru this same situation...Hmmm de irony that m goin thru this same situation....its a bad feelingsongofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4754502877039839862009-04-08T18:21:00.000-07:002009-04-08T18:21:00.000-07:00I love the way you paint a picture of someone goin...I love the way you paint a picture of someone going through a card album! I could see every moment of it and feel the emotion. <br><br>And I also like the way you constructed this by using the last word of one paragraph to begin the next. Very cool!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25393857382828504292009-04-08T02:17:00.000-07:002009-04-08T02:17:00.000-07:00why keep those who won't keep you? I like it....why keep those who won't keep you? I like it.davidearlehttp://davidearle.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66272224417135703912009-04-08T02:12:00.000-07:002009-04-08T02:12:00.000-07:00good !! some people deserve to be thrown !good !! some people deserve to be thrown !Pretty Me!!http://www.blogger.com/profile/06168087298985621198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77969287946599810692009-04-07T18:30:00.000-07:002009-04-07T18:30:00.000-07:00Neat analogy with the bubbles. I like this one Gua...Neat analogy with the bubbles. I like this one Guatami.Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84568081953297669582009-04-06T18:44:00.000-07:002009-04-06T18:44:00.000-07:00Very well done! I liked the flow...Very well done! I liked the flow...Fledgling Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50482107023447210362009-04-06T16:46:00.000-07:002009-04-06T16:46:00.000-07:00Sounds like green bubbles to me. Love it!!Sounds like green bubbles to me. Love it!!Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74777347956218117202009-04-06T13:42:00.000-07:002009-04-06T13:42:00.000-07:00But you didn't throw mine away, did you?But you didn't throw mine away, did you?SweetTalkingGuy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71640403376707498592009-04-06T08:13:00.000-07:002009-04-06T08:13:00.000-07:00I love how you wrapped the narrative back around, ...I love how you wrapped the narrative back around, then gave it a twist. Really love this part:<br><br>'jealousy got you<br>nowhere, but broke us-<br>did you ever care?'Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12177019308709056302009-04-06T07:05:00.000-07:002009-04-06T07:05:00.000-07:00When in doubt, take a photo :) beautifully written...When in doubt, take a photo :) beautifully written!Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70073702990466234052009-04-06T03:23:00.000-07:002009-04-06T03:23:00.000-07:00What to keep and what to throw away. Quite a dilem...What to keep and what to throw away. Quite a dilemma.<br><br><a href="http://watermaid.wordpress.com/2009/04/06/napowrimo-6/" rel="nofollow">Journey to...</a>watermaidhttp://watermaid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77512146278666934292009-04-06T02:58:00.000-07:002009-04-06T02:58:00.000-07:00sounds like the tamil poetry type andhadhi - which...sounds like the tamil poetry type andhadhi - which has paras of poetry where the ending word of the first para will be the beginning word for the next para and so on and the last para will end with the first word of the whole poetry.<br><br>good one.. it flowed with ease..<br><br>-Aiz.dreamscapeshttp://dreamscapes.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35056464758152423382009-04-06T00:46:00.000-07:002009-04-06T00:46:00.000-07:00I love the way you associated this with bubbles.I love the way you associated this with bubbles.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54025555041813204962009-04-05T23:45:00.000-07:002009-04-05T23:45:00.000-07:00Bubbles break and disappear as they appear. Someti...Bubbles break and disappear as they appear. Sometime some people are like that. Good piece.cyclopsevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.com