tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4734325811859383482..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: innardsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29654303202131001502011-11-10T10:44:14.490-08:002011-11-10T10:44:14.490-08:00I like the surprise ending.I like the surprise ending.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55682644087621862982011-11-06T20:35:44.905-08:002011-11-06T20:35:44.905-08:00so awesomeso awesomePoetry of the Dayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11198064593715494884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29980447419154242011-11-06T06:54:05.397-08:002011-11-06T06:54:05.397-08:00Your words found their way to the surface and they...Your words found their way to the surface and they were very good. What descriptive lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58611440965781332562011-11-05T22:10:47.488-07:002011-11-05T22:10:47.488-07:00reminds me of a samuel beckett poem,desolation wit...reminds me of a samuel beckett poem,<br>desolation with strong clarity.Shaunahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21634547825191642162011-11-04T22:57:44.489-07:002011-11-04T22:57:44.489-07:00Nice take on the wordle and on the "operation...Nice take on the wordle and on the "operation" prompt (hope you were doing them both!). This is visceral and heartfelt at once. I really got into the "love connection." Good writing, my dear! Amy<br>http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/11/01/skin-like-a-cloak/sharplittlepencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91338702361356989402011-11-04T06:53:43.395-07:002011-11-04T06:53:43.395-07:00A gruesome tale well penned.A gruesome tale well penned.mjshortshttp://mjshorts.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77189365029112329732011-11-03T23:15:46.513-07:002011-11-03T23:15:46.513-07:00Short and sweet and oh so nice....Short and sweet and oh so nice....Shail Raghuvanshihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05484123238045040778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91157899542411366152011-11-03T19:50:54.619-07:002011-11-03T19:50:54.619-07:00seamless connection... dynamite writing!!!seamless connection... dynamite writing!!!miss piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/11/03/magpie89-typing-still/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33565568126588162252011-11-03T08:42:07.624-07:002011-11-03T08:42:07.624-07:00smart piece.smart piece.The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63305208800877685442011-11-03T02:59:04.866-07:002011-11-03T02:59:04.866-07:00profound and evocative indeed.profound and evocative indeed.L.A Speedwinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07734240100355616049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90232776190830105572011-11-02T14:50:12.482-07:002011-11-02T14:50:12.482-07:00Clever! The writing is accomplished, but at what ...Clever! The writing is accomplished, but at what price. Your conclusions always enhance the poem. I admire that.Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55077486765856735342011-11-02T09:37:44.829-07:002011-11-02T09:37:44.829-07:00I like the image this evokes, Gautami.PamelaI like the image this evokes, Gautami.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83172646262109993942011-11-02T09:16:19.575-07:002011-11-02T09:16:19.575-07:00Dear Gautaumi: Sounds like a case of writer-warri...Dear Gautaumi: Sounds like a case of writer-warrior syndrome! Need another case of beer here! Excellent tale told (unfortunately totalled the dear writer!). Blood letting sounds much easier than "twitching". (nerves still alive and full function!)chiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63955951496268775042011-11-02T05:47:15.237-07:002011-11-02T05:47:15.237-07:00really like that question of why they were the one...really like that question of why they were the one that twitched...and as always your last line pulls us in whole other directions...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52817598476690542142011-11-02T04:22:44.726-07:002011-11-02T04:22:44.726-07:00Well-written...liked it. // Peter.Well-written...liked it. // Peter.juca2http://juca2.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60531828637785466422011-11-02T00:11:25.512-07:002011-11-02T00:11:25.512-07:00Tumbling words are better than ones which remain s...Tumbling words are better than ones which remain stuck. ♥Jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88171962336047474872011-11-01T18:45:07.303-07:002011-11-01T18:45:07.303-07:00Wonderful writing...I really enjoyed the story you...Wonderful writing...I really enjoyed the story you weave in this poem.The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87882183511121149012011-11-01T12:44:04.496-07:002011-11-01T12:44:04.496-07:00What a sharp, well written piece..deeply felt..What a sharp, well written piece..deeply felt..Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70152119241177904202011-11-01T12:29:07.360-07:002011-11-01T12:29:07.360-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.This comment has been removed by the author.H.R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03139937964059566987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5230894190255770802011-11-01T11:43:35.798-07:002011-11-01T11:43:35.798-07:00Remarkable!Remarkable!jabbloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38312738247161817132011-11-01T11:25:15.310-07:002011-11-01T11:25:15.310-07:00Your creative juices really flowed! Great Magpie....Your creative juices really flowed! Great Magpie.Lucy Westenrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25525505248699689142011-11-01T10:13:03.882-07:002011-11-01T10:13:03.882-07:00Very gruesome, vivid and .... yucky! LOLVery gruesome, vivid and .... yucky! LOLDaydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81432876768039624592011-11-01T10:09:24.696-07:002011-11-01T10:09:24.696-07:00Visual and profound.Visual and profound.Laurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68123817009703790902011-11-01T10:01:54.962-07:002011-11-01T10:01:54.962-07:00This is an explosion of creativity!!!This is an explosion of creativity!!!The Old Ravenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17006034426476676212011-11-01T09:54:42.650-07:002011-11-01T09:54:42.650-07:00as tumblewords said it, very profound indeedas tumblewords said it, very profound indeedChristinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.com