tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4712136240063705008..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: swirling with eggshells and applesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43007514152748991012009-04-19T12:51:00.000-07:002009-04-19T12:51:00.000-07:00I love spooky poetry like this, and you do it very...I love spooky poetry like this, and you do it very well.sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81408016593539917732009-04-19T01:43:00.000-07:002009-04-19T01:43:00.000-07:00Well done again!! Gautami. You set the bar very hi...Well done again!! Gautami. You set the bar very high.Neverending Storyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18173286368386721724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26894069550220812712009-04-18T11:59:00.000-07:002009-04-18T11:59:00.000-07:00I loved the imagery. Haunting.I loved the imagery. Haunting.<br><br>Phil Thrifthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37361946271793881142009-04-18T08:36:00.000-07:002009-04-18T08:36:00.000-07:00Absolutely love this line:"...your bones danc...Absolutely love this line:"...<i>your bones dance with your liver</i>..." - what an image!<br>Fantastic ending to this captivating piece.Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76216868418509838762009-04-18T05:29:00.000-07:002009-04-18T05:29:00.000-07:00Very dark indeed. The character is alluring and y...Very dark indeed. The character is alluring and you can see why someone would fall into her trap.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/04/17/missing-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4937315665909168182009-04-17T18:28:00.000-07:002009-04-17T18:28:00.000-07:00a chilling tale well done!a chilling tale <br>well done!Christyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13132093297004961252009-04-17T17:52:00.000-07:002009-04-17T17:52:00.000-07:00Intriguing and chilling!Intriguing and chilling!Erin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28883821229997284832009-04-17T14:00:00.000-07:002009-04-17T14:00:00.000-07:00I get a picture of a beautiful woman luring a man ...I get a picture of a beautiful woman luring a man to enticement. When he's completely bewitched is when he "sees" the real her for the first time. Turns out she's a horrid witch in disguise just out of another "beauty treatment." LOL<br><br>GREAT post!<br><br>http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/in-your-absencenapowrimo-17-part-2by-me.htmlLorihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11263049937762463263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9285542783175753622009-04-17T12:53:00.000-07:002009-04-17T12:53:00.000-07:00So that's how you're going to trap me?Scar...So that's how you're going to trap me?<br><br>Scary!Sweet Talking Guy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22117003680925989962009-04-17T12:39:00.000-07:002009-04-17T12:39:00.000-07:00I'm with Watermaid; this is a great line: &quo...I'm with Watermaid; this is a great line: "swirling with eggshells and apples." I'm not sure, either, exactly what it means but the words make a great image.<br><br>I also like the 'fence of deceit." Cool way of writing it!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24464582514782626082009-04-17T12:02:00.000-07:002009-04-17T12:02:00.000-07:00Great poem Gautami! I didn't realize until th...Great poem Gautami! I didn't realize until the end that it was a Witches Cauldron or something similar.jimmmaaahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14794851177961398653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39433723536014210542009-04-17T11:07:00.000-07:002009-04-17T11:07:00.000-07:00dark..."missing it not..."i enjoyed read...dark...<br><br>"missing it not..."<br><br>i enjoyed reading this..bitchyangelhttp://bitchyangel.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40463222675545779582009-04-17T10:38:00.000-07:002009-04-17T10:38:00.000-07:00'Swirling with eggshells and apples' is a ...'Swirling with eggshells and apples' is a terrific line even if I don't know what it means.<br><br>I didn't trust her from the outset.watermaidhttp://watermaid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83946446127518096772009-04-17T10:32:00.000-07:002009-04-17T10:32:00.000-07:00horror at its besthorror at its bestpolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28056194894439923372009-04-17T09:59:00.000-07:002009-04-17T09:59:00.000-07:00Desert Rat: Right after I put that title, I have ...Desert Rat: Right after I put that title, I have been thinking of changing it. Just haven't come up with good one. Maybe I should leave it untitled..gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50206324319006293062009-04-17T09:53:00.000-07:002009-04-17T09:53:00.000-07:00Enticing and creepy. If the title hadn't acte...Enticing and creepy. If the title hadn't acted as a warning, I would have been totally taken in by the cosy corners and lopsided smile, and never seen that last bit coming.desert rathttp://saturdayscribes.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70783270086089361662009-04-17T09:40:00.000-07:002009-04-17T09:40:00.000-07:00Gautami - I was quite taken by this piece. Dark a...Gautami - <br><br>I was quite taken by this piece. Dark and captivating -- well done…<br><br>Come discover what’s <a href="http://www.image-verse.com/gone" rel="nofollow">Gone</a>.rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58182046317291172732009-04-17T09:14:00.000-07:002009-04-17T09:14:00.000-07:00Deliciously horrific - I enjoyed this with shivers...Deliciously horrific - I enjoyed this with shivers down my spine!BooksPleasehttp://www.booksplease.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13608852637179289812009-04-17T05:10:00.000-07:002009-04-17T05:10:00.000-07:00Reading this, I had the sensation I was being lure...Reading this, I had the sensation I was being lured into a black widow's web... nicely donesagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.com