tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4420009934909900774..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: hanging from the buckle to dancegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26782729400827396942013-11-13T19:37:26.760-08:002013-11-13T19:37:26.760-08:00our words dance where our feet can gain no purchas...our words dance where our feet can gain no purchase... I Liked this and how you linked verse and dance.billgncshttp://bwfiction.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13022819466411784962013-11-13T08:27:37.429-08:002013-11-13T08:27:37.429-08:00The opening two lines of this poem are just plain ...The opening two lines of this poem are just plain "brilliant." And I don't utter that lightly. Opening lines can either make or break a poem, motivate or demotivate the reader. Excellent conception for your open stich. Bravo!emmett wheatfallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8481967643508023112013-11-13T07:34:59.526-08:002013-11-13T07:34:59.526-08:00Ah yes, when we dance, we live.Ah yes, when we dance, we live.Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2500961172090682302013-11-12T01:45:56.452-08:002013-11-12T01:45:56.452-08:00Like your take on the creative process.Like your take on the creative process.irenehttp://orangeisafruit.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3261376369157444222013-11-11T18:55:33.419-08:002013-11-11T18:55:33.419-08:00love it.....nicely writtenlove it.....nicely writtenpoga poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2833337499145287332013-11-11T17:02:46.268-08:002013-11-11T17:02:46.268-08:00Seems you and your muse are definitely in step...b...Seems you and your muse are definitely in step...beautiful pieceSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88828228666380547012013-11-11T16:05:15.318-08:002013-11-11T16:05:15.318-08:00What's applicable to one art is applicable to ...What's applicable to one art is applicable to all. I liked this.<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7089773324237215632013-11-11T14:43:09.657-08:002013-11-11T14:43:09.657-08:00wonderful poem...your muse will always have a plac...wonderful poem...your muse will always have a place to hang...Robert Bournehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60665828658160700492013-11-11T10:24:22.902-08:002013-11-11T10:24:22.902-08:00lovely words-and the image of a buckle.lovely words-and the image of a buckle.Kathe W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67517931181147597622013-11-11T09:23:57.645-08:002013-11-11T09:23:57.645-08:00Love the notion of your poems humming songs...mine...Love the notion of your poems humming songs...mine is about writing poetry, as well...Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7197869924214890002013-11-11T08:41:33.381-08:002013-11-11T08:41:33.381-08:00I really enjoyed this!I really enjoyed this!Helenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31795131541359081392013-11-11T08:20:45.990-08:002013-11-11T08:20:45.990-08:00This is remarkable. Your poems certainly do hum!This is remarkable. Your poems certainly do hum!Other Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47867997667163026592013-11-11T04:45:08.846-08:002013-11-11T04:45:08.846-08:00I like how you connect words, poems with dance...n...I like how you connect words, poems with dance...nice point of view.humbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68630777486595898252013-11-10T23:01:12.399-08:002013-11-10T23:01:12.399-08:00I am sure many of have done just that in rearrangi...I am sure many of have done just that in rearranging the words in a stanza until they feel just right. I like the use of the dancer for as writers we always have words dancing before us almost enticing us to use them.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31301746237651015812013-11-10T21:10:13.384-08:002013-11-10T21:10:13.384-08:00I take down one of the poems,rearrange the words t...I take down one of the poems,<br>rearrange the words to gain a new one<br>This one is awesome. rearranging to form a new one.Kalpana Solsihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60334793103193156442013-11-10T15:35:23.770-08:002013-11-10T15:35:23.770-08:00buckling poems to the wall is an interesting image...buckling poems to the wall is an interesting image. Love the final stanza. Thank you.dshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45429020819839630602013-11-10T15:17:53.751-08:002013-11-10T15:17:53.751-08:00neat! always hang up your draft poems, you may not...neat! always hang up your draft poems, you may not know when you need it. :)dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25889912529237018072013-11-10T14:40:08.359-08:002013-11-10T14:40:08.359-08:00Rearranging the words to get a new poem sounds lik...Rearranging the words to get a new poem sounds like fun. Sabra Bowershttp://sabrabowers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46081853366218850482013-11-10T13:51:53.147-08:002013-11-10T13:51:53.147-08:00I like your idea of reworking the words of a poem ...I like your idea of reworking the words of a poem into a new one - I might try this!Robyn Greenhousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27930619273157727892013-11-10T13:04:11.425-08:002013-11-10T13:04:11.425-08:00Beautifully done. Love the dancing!Beautifully done. Love the dancing!Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87255973824754161622013-11-10T11:05:18.824-08:002013-11-10T11:05:18.824-08:00Love your muse!Love your muse!Mademoiselle Modellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77302403579785887432013-11-10T10:01:43.570-08:002013-11-10T10:01:43.570-08:00The buckle is fantastic! Like the poems themselves...The buckle is fantastic! Like the poems themselves mustn't be nailed down.Kathy B.http://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.ca/2013/11/a-failed-photograph-of-night-sky.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58502938348136593992013-11-10T09:30:23.254-08:002013-11-10T09:30:23.254-08:00esymodeA light, breezy voice that still can carry ...esymodeA light, breezy voice that still can carry heavier thoughts!MarianVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15082225086439064044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49153481581523737932013-11-10T08:52:44.318-08:002013-11-10T08:52:44.318-08:00you and your muse stepping the 'lightfantastic...you and your muse stepping the 'light<br>fantastic' how wonderful<br><br><br>much love...<br>Gillena Coxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55816934075806984942013-11-10T08:44:20.088-08:002013-11-10T08:44:20.088-08:00well done, like the 'hanging' poemswell done, like the 'hanging' poemsawakenedwordshttp://awakenedwords.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com