tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post425960534160495780..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: mysticismgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5468047277267164432009-02-15T05:38:00.000-08:002009-02-15T05:38:00.000-08:00Woah!! that was nice..Life indeed is a circle!Woah!! that was nice..<br>Life indeed is a circle!Nairobihttp://songofsea.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18732864013901061642009-02-14T00:38:00.000-08:002009-02-14T00:38:00.000-08:00hidden view conjuresup imagesThoughts are constant...hidden view conjures<br>up images<br>Thoughts are constantly creating.trinitystarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90412886590577538092009-02-13T17:02:00.000-08:002009-02-13T17:02:00.000-08:00A circular poem that leads you back to the beginni...A circular poem that leads you back to the beginning....I loved your train of thought!Fledgling Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26693210742643510792009-02-13T13:04:00.000-08:002009-02-13T13:04:00.000-08:00luv the description of one's thoughts and how ...luv the description of one's thoughts and how they wind through a day...a moment...regardless of validity it exists...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/02/12/afloat/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67124578347827832052009-02-13T09:37:00.000-08:002009-02-13T09:37:00.000-08:00and the circle continues...love thisand the circle continues...<br>love thispolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4015138577109132572009-02-12T23:14:00.000-08:002009-02-12T23:14:00.000-08:00Very clever how you brought the words back in agai...Very clever how you brought the words back in again at the end. A pattern with words.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91448270239925643192009-02-12T20:10:00.000-08:002009-02-12T20:10:00.000-08:00You are so talented. I so enjoy your 3WW's!You are so talented. I so enjoy your 3WW's!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87782826529390543472009-02-12T11:03:00.000-08:002009-02-12T11:03:00.000-08:00Full circle, love it!!!Full circle, love it!!!Vickihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01815757162701151292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55681921976263226532009-02-12T08:01:00.000-08:002009-02-12T08:01:00.000-08:00Fantastic!! Your writing never fails to inspire me...Fantastic!! Your writing never fails to inspire me. Thanks for reading my first 3WW post!Heatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14622264183976650072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1121450866304326952009-02-12T07:10:00.000-08:002009-02-12T07:10:00.000-08:00love how you bring this poem back to the beginning...love how you bring this poem back to the beginning! <br><br>sky is almost bereft<br>of stars, clouds<br>hide it from view<br><br>excellent lines!floretahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43516215941346901542009-02-12T05:43:00.000-08:002009-02-12T05:43:00.000-08:00amazing!!amazing!!Winnie the poohihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7574538164242239052009-02-11T19:24:00.000-08:002009-02-11T19:24:00.000-08:00I liked the circular nature of it, how each stanza...I liked the circular nature of it, how each stanza fed into the next. Overall it felt sort of like a daydream, the kind you have looking out the window during a boring class.desert rathttp://saturdayscribes.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23334922103955304742009-02-11T18:54:00.000-08:002009-02-11T18:54:00.000-08:00Gautami, I love your blog's tagline, "Poe...Gautami, I love your blog's tagline, "Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. Dissect it if you must...just don't expect me to explain it to you.... interpret it how you want to, wish to...."<br><br>I come from a tradition dating to Baruch Spinoza, so while I like to interpret, I also like to enjoy the visceral power and presence of objects, like your poem.<br><br>I very much enjoyed your contribution.Sepiru Chrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24190601541763161182009-02-11T14:43:00.000-08:002009-02-11T14:43:00.000-08:00Cleverly done at the end, there.Cleverly done at the end, there.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79321102564971274022009-02-11T13:13:00.000-08:002009-02-11T13:13:00.000-08:00Great poem, lots of visual for me.Great poem, lots of visual for me.Marianne H. Nielsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14053011503400018095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69753239745851025362009-02-11T12:10:00.000-08:002009-02-11T12:10:00.000-08:00Loop-de-loop. This circular and far reaching chain...Loop-de-loop. This circular and far reaching chain takes one on a mystical ride. Nice.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66751899661922721342009-02-11T11:25:00.000-08:002009-02-11T11:25:00.000-08:00I had to go back and read the title, I thought of ...I had to go back and read the title, I thought of the full moon and the fantasies of what comes out as a result of a full moon. <br>"Mysticism" is the perfect title.<br>Good images.Daily Panichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79280283495590375722009-02-11T11:19:00.000-08:002009-02-11T11:19:00.000-08:00I don't think this was your intent, but I got ...I don't think this was your intent, but I got a picture of a paranoid person in this. I recently had a very strange conversation with someone who I think must have paranoia, and it was clear that her mind went through a cycle very similar to what you've described here. In the end, the thoughts themselves created this odd logical circle. It was one of the strangest, most frustrating conversations I've ever had.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68342277784473595102009-02-11T10:56:00.000-08:002009-02-11T10:56:00.000-08:00Oh, I quite love this.Oh, I quite love this.Noah the Greathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35029394929228568572009-02-11T09:19:00.000-08:002009-02-11T09:19:00.000-08:00SUPERB!!!SUPERB!!!Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.com