tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4196701113580305473..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: a subtle hintgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19802823813127539392010-10-18T07:53:51.088-07:002010-10-18T07:53:51.088-07:00I love how similar our thoughts went with this pro...I love how similar our thoughts went with this prompt!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26687113313114812932010-10-10T07:39:21.680-07:002010-10-10T07:39:21.680-07:00Lovely. I could picture the scene from your words...Lovely. I could picture the scene from your words.<br><br>quidquidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06954222271507913856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2186906713516573572010-10-10T07:00:38.308-07:002010-10-10T07:00:38.308-07:00This is a wonderful write. Love and Light, SenderThis is a wonderful write. Love and Light, Sendersenderupwordshttp://senderupwords.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47900089087282915482010-10-09T15:26:50.762-07:002010-10-09T15:26:50.762-07:00i LUV yr response to this week's big tent poet...i LUV yr response to this week's big tent poetry... it is important to read the author's poem only because it adds more to yr own individual poem... whether we piggyback or stand alone it is a beautiful piece... especially so again yr response to imamu's poem kaba...ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/divine-poem-pie/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49428115209723995422010-10-09T05:11:30.385-07:002010-10-09T05:11:30.385-07:00It shudnt be hint,,,its all perfection!!Lovely one...It shudnt be hint,,,its all perfection!!Lovely oneJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16443417880270050412010-10-09T05:10:46.665-07:002010-10-09T05:10:46.665-07:00Hint of perfection. The poemHint of perfection. The poemJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53916033041317344562010-10-08T19:14:21.502-07:002010-10-08T19:14:21.502-07:00I have a fondness for repetition and use it fairly...I have a fondness for repetition and use it fairly often. I really like this piece and how it drives home the point in such a lyrical way.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25391017677579874082010-10-08T13:37:07.357-07:002010-10-08T13:37:07.357-07:00You ARE one of the beautiful people. I am so PROU...You ARE one of the beautiful people. I am so PROUD of you for sharing your poem!Diane Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29981844134840985582010-10-08T12:34:26.129-07:002010-10-08T12:34:26.129-07:00This was wonderful, GautamiThis was wonderful, GautamiMaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31338293677823926602010-10-08T10:34:40.413-07:002010-10-08T10:34:40.413-07:00This worked beautifully, Gautami! I loved it.This worked beautifully, Gautami! I loved it.Christinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06291220353313572984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57292298046278323022010-10-08T08:42:57.566-07:002010-10-08T08:42:57.566-07:00I love this poem Gautami!PamelaI love this poem Gautami!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82121560806049471652010-10-08T08:33:02.367-07:002010-10-08T08:33:02.367-07:00Hint of hard work: more than a hint, I'd say:...Hint of hard work: more than a hint, I'd say: a rhythmic statement! A very clever poem.vivinfrancehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3552543422344443752010-10-08T08:13:16.438-07:002010-10-08T08:13:16.438-07:00The enslaved have a beauty in dignity.The enslaved have a beauty in dignity.Derrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46912668682574111262010-10-08T05:14:35.351-07:002010-10-08T05:14:35.351-07:00Your hinting is lovely.Your hinting is lovely.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76881148618343749932010-10-07T23:48:05.792-07:002010-10-07T23:48:05.792-07:00Lusting for love, very nice.Lusting for love, very nice.nimaruichihttp://nimaruichi.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24200013037744433172010-10-07T23:47:45.300-07:002010-10-07T23:47:45.300-07:00Lusting for love, very nice.Lusting for love, very nice.nimaruichihttp://nimaruichi.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37810409223957214332010-10-07T20:57:11.818-07:002010-10-07T20:57:11.818-07:00I liked the repetition, and the way you used sheen...I liked the repetition, and the way you used sheen. A very nice poem.G. Grahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03689300506694508291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83117469867909238702010-10-07T08:18:33.875-07:002010-10-07T08:18:33.875-07:00love the flow...love the flow...Jinglenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91346487758703969292010-10-06T18:19:02.851-07:002010-10-06T18:19:02.851-07:00Thanks, Gautami. You are the beautiful people....Thanks, Gautami. You are the beautiful people....Writer on Boardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03586187888418224291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24685981597538436202010-10-06T16:57:10.468-07:002010-10-06T16:57:10.468-07:00the repetition really works for me.the repetition really works for me.ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-987809153192142242010-10-06T15:50:39.380-07:002010-10-06T15:50:39.380-07:00In addition to the imagined eye-candy, you deliver...In addition to the imagined eye-candy, you delivered very well on the word-candy. Nicely done as usual.Storm Dwellerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01046582567151111121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8950081384756862112010-10-06T15:48:32.527-07:002010-10-06T15:48:32.527-07:00Nice capture! The repetition works so very well.Nice capture! The repetition works so very well.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37471469938052226402010-10-06T13:18:37.261-07:002010-10-06T13:18:37.261-07:00Lovely piece.Lovely piece.Angelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58530442451257503522010-10-06T09:39:02.731-07:002010-10-06T09:39:02.731-07:00I love how you took lines yet made the poem totall...I love how you took lines yet made the poem totally your own<br>Also love how you use "hint"piahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54395130360390371352010-10-06T09:29:13.594-07:002010-10-06T09:29:13.594-07:00Nicely flowing and with beautiful lines describin...Nicely flowing and with beautiful lines describing hard labor.Nankahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.com