tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post410342397658216798..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Nowhere Land-----sonnet-----Poetry Thursdaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80026866521513468192007-05-13T14:10:00.000-07:002007-05-13T14:10:00.000-07:00Great use of the randomzed words. I especially lik...Great use of the randomzed words. I especially like these lines:<br><br>"ventured he did into serrated land, with so bold<br>mind, all miseries forgotten in his demeanour."<br><br>Very nice!Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71214412902962156672007-05-12T17:54:00.000-07:002007-05-12T17:54:00.000-07:00This is my first exposure to your work, but I hear...This is my first exposure to your work, but I hear a great voice in this poem, articulate and distinctive.joefelsojoefelso.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12065040585058882732007-05-11T21:32:00.000-07:002007-05-11T21:32:00.000-07:00You always intrigue me with the way you weave word...You always intrigue me with the way you weave words in intricate ways...I never heard of this kind of sonnet either...thanks for tapping my brain.<br><br>You have more than a gift of gab, you have a gift of words. thanks for visiting my kiddos. They love to have an audience. Bless you!Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03165578165979664051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75192196968579079502007-05-11T12:34:00.000-07:002007-05-11T12:34:00.000-07:00Gautami, beautiful poem. I love the feeling of not...Gautami, beautiful poem. I love the feeling of nothingness you weave with your random words. Great post. Sorry I am so late with my comments but we switched over to Verizon today and PC was off since last night.<br><br>love-bdBeloved Dreamerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56921385714201141762007-05-11T10:19:00.000-07:002007-05-11T10:19:00.000-07:00nowhere land is a puzzling place(which we all visi...nowhere land is a puzzling place<br>(which we all visit)<br>as you say so well<br>we have to find our own way out<br>cheersflootshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36141056556261817182007-05-11T08:40:00.000-07:002007-05-11T08:40:00.000-07:00hello gautami, so nice to see someone playing with...hello gautami, so nice to see someone playing with a net. loverly...Writer on Boardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03586187888418224291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65301514756114425692007-05-11T08:19:00.000-07:002007-05-11T08:19:00.000-07:00more delightful twists that a knotted cord from he...more delightful twists that a knotted cord from heaven.<br>smashing.cocaine jesushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00519621428036481426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32770730868722633802007-05-11T07:19:00.000-07:002007-05-11T07:19:00.000-07:00powerfulpowerfulmagiceyehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27112237369870927722007-05-11T06:52:00.000-07:002007-05-11T06:52:00.000-07:00andrew: Most this poetry has to rhyme. You and I k...andrew: Most this poetry has to rhyme. You and I know, it doesn't. I always love your very insightful tankas.<br><br>borut: welcome back. You have been missed here. <br><br>steve: Do you really..:D<br><br>catherine: I am now hooked to structure poetry. I can't seem to write in free verse..:(<br><br>pat: Sonnets are most of the times negative ending, true. I try to make those positive.<br><br>tracie: Thanks. You too keep writing and keep posting.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71263622463632275532007-05-11T06:43:00.000-07:002007-05-11T06:43:00.000-07:00gautami... this is BEAUTIFUL... how MOVING... than...gautami... this is BEAUTIFUL... how MOVING... <br>thank you for sharing your words and your heart!<br><br>and THANK YOU so much for you encouragement and kind comments... I have felt very shy about sharing on poetry thursday... I am such a novice and you have been so sweet to stop by and read my verse.<br><br>xoTracie Lyn Huskamphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04310134565653685553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11044594868296318392007-05-11T06:34:00.000-07:002007-05-11T06:34:00.000-07:00The power of positive thinking. Love a happy endin...The power of positive thinking. Love a happy ending sonnet!!Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42921878764488393222007-05-11T03:24:00.000-07:002007-05-11T03:24:00.000-07:00I think you're brave to add the challenge of t...I think you're brave to add the challenge of the sonnet form to the challenge of using the words from the prompt generator. I'm quite impressedCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68824551250437173982007-05-11T03:01:00.000-07:002007-05-11T03:01:00.000-07:00I know what you are saying!I know what you are saying!Stevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43837965020544052642007-05-10T23:56:00.000-07:002007-05-10T23:56:00.000-07:00I really really like it!:)Navigating the unknown.....I really really like it!:)Navigating the unknown...Boruthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58165390835329912552007-05-10T22:13:00.000-07:002007-05-10T22:13:00.000-07:00very nice -- I wish I could rhyme :)very nice -- I wish I could rhyme :)J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42243228440048350962007-05-10T22:07:00.001-07:002007-05-10T22:07:00.001-07:00desert rat: It's my favourite form of sonnets....desert rat: It's my favourite form of sonnets. I only write sonnets in this form. Do write one.<br><br>Thanks for liking the poem.<br><br>paris/tara: thanks!<br><br>chelise: welcome to my blog. Thanks!<br><br>clare: thanks. Do try one. Not as difficult as it seems.<br><br>polona: thanks.<br><br>rob: When I wrote it, I thought it was disjointed. It seems it works for most.<br><br>get zapped: Thanks. It does have an unversal apppeal.<br><br>sage: I know that rather very well.<br><br>tammy: thanks. I have checked your blog and your new template works fine.<br><br>pauline: thanks!<br><br>donn/h.e.: When I wrote it, I was thinking of crash landing on a desert island, all alone. But as I progressed along, it took different meanings. It can be interpreted in so many ways. Abstract to the very mundane. Yours is one of those. Thanks for THAT insight.<br><br>gel: sorry to know about what you went through. All is going to be wll. Good to see you back.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31254736844545906322007-05-10T22:07:00.000-07:002007-05-10T22:07:00.000-07:00rose: I never saw it as a love poem. Thanks for th...rose: I never saw it as a love poem. Thanks for that insight.<br><br>welome: First I welcome you here. Tanks for liking it.<br><br>ghost particle: I got the gift of the gab!!<br><br>rax: Thanks. Never thought of it that way.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69795105196464191832007-05-10T20:44:00.000-07:002007-05-10T20:44:00.000-07:00Nice vocabulary usage within this poetic form. Enj...Nice vocabulary usage within this poetic form. Enjoyed your piece. I always find such varied writing here. It's a joy to read your work.<br><br>(My current post will explain why I've been away from blogland so long.)gel(emerald eyes)http://shadowsinthemoonlight.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30754858925702751062007-05-10T20:17:00.000-07:002007-05-10T20:17:00.000-07:00"each miniscule particle of sand in the deser..."each miniscule particle of sand in the desert<br>pierced like needle into sensitive skin; barrage<br>of it spiralled upwards towards the azure sky"<br><br>I imagined this poor fellow as one of the scientists who had helped develop the Atomic Bomb. Here he was walking through the sand that had turned into glass from the heat of the explosion. He could not stop thinking about the mushroom cloud.<br><br>He felt guilty for unleashing Prometheus but he had to believe that this terrible weapon would bring a sudden end to the War.homo escapeonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64302784281606521142007-05-10T18:08:00.000-07:002007-05-10T18:08:00.000-07:00From all plans gone awry to the last goodbye, you&...From all plans gone awry to the last goodbye, you've painted a journey.Paulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78418438752839727192007-05-10T14:38:00.000-07:002007-05-10T14:38:00.000-07:00Wow! You used these words very nicely. BTW, I got ...Wow! You used these words very nicely. BTW, I got a new template in progress. I hope it's quicker to see.Tammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18031145983329609672007-05-10T13:47:00.000-07:002007-05-10T13:47:00.000-07:00sometimes the way out is hard to find... nicely d...sometimes the way out is hard to find... nicely donesagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63538330846166263592007-05-10T13:13:00.000-07:002007-05-10T13:13:00.000-07:00I love the ending. I am on that path of finding my...I love the ending. I am on that path of finding my way out into the light. Lovely imagery.get zappedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16659942740214251062007-05-10T12:07:00.001-07:002007-05-10T12:07:00.001-07:00Gautami -This is a very engaging piece -- and pier...Gautami -<br><br>This is a very engaging piece -- and piercing look at what it is to be lost, and the blind courage (and fate) it takes to find your way back.<br><br>I liked it!Rob Kistnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18245593312224167622007-05-10T12:07:00.000-07:002007-05-10T12:07:00.000-07:00wow!another masterful poem!wow!<br>another masterful poem!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.com