tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4102348820598529756..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Smouldering----Poetry Thursdaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18353951784925007612007-04-15T15:49:00.000-07:002007-04-15T15:49:00.000-07:00Wow this packed a punch!!! Wonderful foreshadowing...Wow this packed a punch!!! Wonderful foreshadowing down the path of revenge! Composed and all!! Well doneā¦<br><br>Peace Gigglesgiggleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75504874951360960772007-04-15T14:06:00.000-07:002007-04-15T14:06:00.000-07:00A person of my own heart. I wrote a similar but t...A person of my own heart. I wrote a similar but totally different poem recently and yours just made my day! I was right there with you, not sure which ending you would chose, and I lived it with you! Brian's title fit well, I am glad you chose it.Marciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12758774449837022092007-04-14T09:37:00.000-07:002007-04-14T09:37:00.000-07:00firebird: I am being persuaded to write a novel us...firebird: I am being persuaded to write a novel using free verse by someone who loves structured poetry. He is a master of the English language. <br><br>I think I will consider his suggestion.<br><br>floots: Well, thanks. Did those claws hurt?<br><br>andrew: Thanks..:D<br><br>borut: The green eyed monster has destroyed many a person.<br><br>fragment: Thanks.<br><br>madd: Blogger is sometimes crazy. You don't worry. Just leave your name after commenting. Thanks!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49161630785803751432007-04-14T06:32:00.000-07:002007-04-14T06:32:00.000-07:00sorry blogger wont let me leave comments unless I ...sorry blogger wont let me leave comments unless I am being anonymous..maybe they know something I don't..:), thanks for the stop by..take care..maddAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63673514620682662372007-04-14T06:30:00.000-07:002007-04-14T06:30:00.000-07:00oh this was so very yummy..your choice of words wo...oh this was so very yummy..your choice of words wonderful..I was in that room watching this tableau of metered revenge...just so wonderfully wicked..loved it..maddAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86259416522763586222007-04-14T05:13:00.000-07:002007-04-14T05:13:00.000-07:00Oh this is wonderful. Very vivid imagery and a ver...Oh this is wonderful. Very vivid imagery and a very vicious ending. Smoldering tension indeed. Perfect.Fragmentsinsighthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12868023154722305400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11807449764857653342007-04-14T01:52:00.000-07:002007-04-14T01:52:00.000-07:00I've been discussing jealousy yesterday!?:) A ...I've been discussing jealousy yesterday!?:) A perfect portrayal ... <br>of a mighty demon!?:)<br><br>BorutAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44069578388795479072007-04-13T22:21:00.000-07:002007-04-13T22:21:00.000-07:00what a story!what a story!J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10893036321536950772007-04-13T21:38:00.000-07:002007-04-13T21:38:00.000-07:00i can feel those claws :)well donei can feel those claws :)<br>well doneflootshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64872437412808498272007-04-13T18:24:00.000-07:002007-04-13T18:24:00.000-07:00This is like a novel--tempting to read between the...This is like a novel--tempting to read between the lines into the rest of the story-- "Tune in for the nest installment to see what happens next!" <br>But then, it stands on its own so well...<br>And I do like the choice of title!firebirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08924005848870170400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68915039928486719852007-04-13T10:31:00.000-07:002007-04-13T10:31:00.000-07:00pat: Thanks. It does, doesn't it?*grin*norma: ...pat: Thanks. It does, doesn't it?<br><br>*grin*<br><br>norma: Thanks. That voice has a mind of its own<br><br>writerwoman: thanks.<br><br>kavi: thanks. Welcome here!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26952289482091133152007-04-13T07:40:00.000-07:002007-04-13T07:40:00.000-07:00That was a neat ! The final twist was awesome !That was a neat ! The final twist was awesome !Kavihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11426040093753611098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43821565314093337262007-04-13T07:35:00.000-07:002007-04-13T07:35:00.000-07:00Intense! Love last few lines.Intense! Love last few lines.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54451093357446548912007-04-13T05:51:00.000-07:002007-04-13T05:51:00.000-07:00I love that spot where the inner iniquitous voice ...I love that spot where the inner iniquitous voice just oozed up with no warning.<br><br>Thanks for joining in on the fun of my parody of bad poetry for PT yesterday. Today, I've let the muse out of the closet.<br><br><a href="http://collectingmythoughts.blogspot.com/2007/04/3695-our-infectious-lifestyle-peter.html" rel="nofollow">Our infectious lifestyle.</a>Normahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82825748612359719492007-04-13T05:24:00.000-07:002007-04-13T05:24:00.000-07:00That was perfect!!! I can see shock turning to ter...That was perfect!!! I can see shock turning to terror. Well done!!Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8975485849316892142007-04-13T03:14:00.000-07:002007-04-13T03:14:00.000-07:00regina: thanks. I was not very happy with it initi...regina: thanks. I was not very happy with it initially as I thought I couldn't do justice to beaman's line.<br><br>rethabile: I am considering that. Smoulldering describes it rather well.<br><br>polona: you too? So...<br><br>ron: thanks.<br><br>tine with wings: Thanks. I will go and chk yours.<br><br>pepek: That sounds good too!!<br><br>sage: Great! Jealousy makes you laugh? Hmmm..:D.I already read yours and left comments.<br><br>rel: Much thanks. I like to write poems with twisted ends.<br><br>deb: Thanks. I never realised I used so many 'V' words. They fit in.<br><br>deborah: Thanks. For saying it is a biting poem. Love the feel!<br><br>steve: thanks. You are dioing great on your blog too. Keep up with the poetry month.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1947734364997188312007-04-12T22:42:00.000-07:002007-04-12T22:42:00.000-07:00Hauntingly, beautiful.Hauntingly, beautiful.Stevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19318225693396799892007-04-12T22:21:00.000-07:002007-04-12T22:21:00.000-07:00What a biting poem ... the poetic bitterness reali...What a biting poem ... the poetic bitterness realised in the last stanza. Brilliant, JPJane Poe (aka Deborah)http://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54674517613351793212007-04-12T21:26:00.000-07:002007-04-12T21:26:00.000-07:00Revenge is sweet in this case. I loved all the &qu...Revenge is sweet in this case. I loved all the "V" words and sounds in this. <br><br>Revenge Unveiled ?...debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67924757394687480132007-04-12T18:36:00.000-07:002007-04-12T18:36:00.000-07:00Gautami,You've portrayed the vivid image of tw...Gautami,<br>You've portrayed the vivid image of twarted lust perfectly here. and the ending was delicious!<br>title: Sublimated Rage.<br>relRemimanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82415506112569336182007-04-12T17:52:00.000-07:002007-04-12T17:52:00.000-07:00Nice "cruel" ending that had me laughing...Nice "cruel" ending that had me laughing. I posted another poem today.sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19925957651342730732007-04-12T16:56:00.000-07:002007-04-12T16:56:00.000-07:00"Boulevard of Time"?"Boulevard of Time"?pepektheassassinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76919265069436902232007-04-12T16:17:00.000-07:002007-04-12T16:17:00.000-07:00Your peom is fantastic- you have such beautiful co...Your peom is fantastic- you have such beautiful control of words!<br><br>By the way, I used your line in my PT poem this week:<br><br><a href="http://afishwithwings.blogspot.com/2007/04/day-12.html" rel="nofollow">here</a>Tina With Wingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00540578091175485758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9337490329629015222007-04-12T12:51:00.000-07:002007-04-12T12:51:00.000-07:00Nicely done! Enjoyed the end so much.Nicely done! Enjoyed the end so much.Ronhttp://ronrussosjournal.com/wordnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50530231739584052702007-04-12T12:33:00.000-07:002007-04-12T12:33:00.000-07:00wow! powerful write! ouch...i kind of like "s...wow! powerful write! ouch...<br>i kind of like "smoldering" too...polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.com