tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post4027334331075634131..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: fluted----Writers Islandgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-225859986188285222008-01-24T11:16:00.000-08:002008-01-24T11:16:00.000-08:00"fluted patterns on the minaret.."what a..."fluted patterns on the minaret.."<br><br>what a beautiful descriptive introduction...good poem.rebeccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15229529425738885842008-01-24T08:41:00.000-08:002008-01-24T08:41:00.000-08:00Almost melodic in flow! Enjoyable!Almost melodic in flow! Enjoyable!giggleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52918722105968259252008-01-24T03:07:00.000-08:002008-01-24T03:07:00.000-08:00yes, sometimes things awe us so much that the only...yes, sometimes things awe us so much that the only response is to go and eat something!Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42229571417748786302008-01-23T20:50:00.000-08:002008-01-23T20:50:00.000-08:00hello from michele.hello from michele.Davidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02690273066219097101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60032273341883996862008-01-22T19:37:00.000-08:002008-01-22T19:37:00.000-08:00I agree with what everyone else has said, I love t...I agree with what everyone else has said, I love the mix of the old and the new in this. Great piece!Karinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84680601887708597242008-01-22T18:17:00.000-08:002008-01-22T18:17:00.000-08:00I really liked this Gautami... lyrical and flowing...I really liked this Gautami... lyrical and flowing.<br><br>"arches over alcoves, tapering towards the sky" This line was a treat to speak and to hear.Rob Kistnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75789805070965580402008-01-22T17:25:00.000-08:002008-01-22T17:25:00.000-08:00hey this was too good...starting off in the air an...hey this was too good...<br><br>starting off in the air and getting called back to earth bu hunger pangs...<br><br>that's a fork in the road indeed!Thinking aloudhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23169701459863627082008-01-22T13:06:00.000-08:002008-01-22T13:06:00.000-08:00Love the comparison of old architecture and modern...Love the comparison of old architecture and modern fast food in your piece - well done!paris parfaithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76123977635851299172008-01-22T13:01:00.000-08:002008-01-22T13:01:00.000-08:00Beautiful words how man is pondering about works o...Beautiful words how man is pondering about works of art and than his instincts call him back to the basics. Great piece of writingMarjahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32605720536202309652008-01-22T12:10:00.000-08:002008-01-22T12:10:00.000-08:00Hindsight will not remember the fast food! Nifty p...Hindsight will not remember the fast food! Nifty poem and a wise twist!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9525018847590909902008-01-22T11:16:00.000-08:002008-01-22T11:16:00.000-08:00Grandiose daydreams of work avoidance, supplanted ...Grandiose daydreams of work avoidance, supplanted by the more immediate need to satisfy physical hunger. Your poems are priceless.Herb Urbanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88957220957482214872008-01-22T11:15:00.000-08:002008-01-22T11:15:00.000-08:00beautifulbeautifulKai C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34541616914348278752008-01-22T10:59:00.000-08:002008-01-22T10:59:00.000-08:00Lovely description of the monument.Lovely description of the monument.Richardwww.bundleofhiss.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58896784654542548292008-01-22T10:35:00.000-08:002008-01-22T10:35:00.000-08:00A wry smile twisted my lips at the end. All the g...A wry smile twisted my lips at the end. All the grand thinking and then the tummy growls and fast food it is. Talk about dry humor! Masterful!Mary Timmehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75846216022634591312008-01-22T09:57:00.000-08:002008-01-22T09:57:00.000-08:00oh I would have headed for the nearest food joint ...oh I would have headed for the nearest food joint too!<br>I 2nd ul's comment, I'm always amazed at your mind too!Just Jenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06461423815235750171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18940019887283068952008-01-22T09:05:00.000-08:002008-01-22T09:05:00.000-08:00this starts with such promise enticing the reader ...this starts with such promise enticing the reader on for more.<br><br>you have an interesting take on most things and this is no different.cocaine jesushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00519621428036481426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90396944008640012742008-01-22T06:24:00.000-08:002008-01-22T06:24:00.000-08:00oh Gautami, this is lovely. I am amazed at the way...oh Gautami, this is lovely. I am amazed at the way your mind works.ULhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54863502882497972302008-01-22T06:20:00.000-08:002008-01-22T06:20:00.000-08:00Very present day. Can't stop and admire the ro...Very present day. Can't stop and admire the roses, lunchtime calls. :) I liked the twist at the end, it lifted the poem to another realm.Constancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17964121072645959593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64124849790302813772008-01-22T03:33:00.000-08:002008-01-22T03:33:00.000-08:00it begins in such a place of ornate beauty and end...it begins in such a place of ornate beauty and ends eating fast food... i feel like saying,,, only in america,,, but that wouldn't quite fit would it???paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42524269138541097942008-01-22T02:57:00.000-08:002008-01-22T02:57:00.000-08:00Lovely use of words. Grerat little poemLovely use of words. Grerat little poemkeith hillmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31180469615776549322008-01-22T01:24:00.000-08:002008-01-22T01:24:00.000-08:00Sometimes the purpose only becomes clear with time...Sometimes the purpose only becomes clear with time...Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28573668936748941522008-01-21T13:49:00.000-08:002008-01-21T13:49:00.000-08:00Love the entrance to this, those opening lines.Love the entrance to this, those opening lines.Rethabilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.com