tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3966321914563276180..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: now the waiting.....gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60070309493668632632010-01-16T18:56:26.960-08:002010-01-16T18:56:26.960-08:00you capture him perfectly...the smell, the tattoos...you capture him perfectly...the smell, the tattoos, the hat..<br><br>you write so vividly, I love it. <br><br>Am never disappointed here. <br><br>Mine is up too. <br>Bella :)bellasishttp://bellasis.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31925742266719093012010-01-15T20:33:19.522-08:002010-01-15T20:33:19.522-08:00Oooh yes I know the type of guy you talk about. An...Oooh yes I know the type of guy you talk about. And I know that waiting and listening too....linda mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17426368991644308588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51481246701862874652010-01-14T16:34:31.033-08:002010-01-14T16:34:31.033-08:00the sound of a truck moving on is sometimes painfu...the sound of a truck moving on is sometimes painful...a most enjoyable post!!!one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/01/14/burning-col/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68606046311396970372010-01-14T05:14:21.633-08:002010-01-14T05:14:21.633-08:00Sometimes you just don't know until it is gone...Sometimes you just don't know until it is gone.Lisa at Greenbowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07743973292900758183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87595444519693000372010-01-13T20:43:10.518-08:002010-01-13T20:43:10.518-08:00Oh Tami, you've got this lady hooked up with a...Oh Tami, you've got this lady hooked up with a real man fellow! <br>I hope he doesn't have a girl at every dock like the sailors have one in every port. <br>That could slow him down in getting back to her!<br><br>This is good using all three prompts. I like to keep my things separate, food, prompts and kinds of poems, etc.<br><br>Thanks for peeking on my Haiku Bones, here is <a href="http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/search/label/One%20Single%20Impression" rel="nofollow">Jim's OSI</a> <br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27192743982789859132010-01-13T14:14:12.035-08:002010-01-13T14:14:12.035-08:00Nicely put Tami. I like it!MelanieNicely put Tami. I like it!<br><br><br><br>MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67811007510142867882010-01-13T14:07:27.365-08:002010-01-13T14:07:27.365-08:00I like the comment verification. It tells me that ...I like the comment verification. It tells me that the great horror of The Singularity has not come yet.Walky Sotohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15198157332087886423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22316620758091042642010-01-13T01:45:43.958-08:002010-01-13T01:45:43.958-08:00you spin my head right round and round!I am sorry ...you spin my head right round and round!<br><br>I am sorry for the late arrival to Sunday Scribblings but I had to pay you a visit :)<br><br>Happy SS<br><br><a href="http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/01/extreme-caution.html" rel="nofollow">Extreme 'Caution'</a>Americanising Desihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9908219150931124462010-01-12T19:41:36.704-08:002010-01-12T19:41:36.704-08:00'his crooked hatthe smell of gasolinehis brusq...'his crooked hat<br>the smell of gasoline<br>his brusque caring'<br><br>What a tough/tender man.Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4296976903652702922010-01-12T18:41:33.895-08:002010-01-12T18:41:33.895-08:00I have known this kind of longing. It can be very ...I have known this kind of longing. It can be very sad and painful. Your poem is so well done. Thanks.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3323301228577874362010-01-12T15:59:00.987-08:002010-01-12T15:59:00.987-08:00I know his kind - once ran into a young ruffian of...I know his kind - once ran into a young ruffian of similar description on a visit to the states. I was then staying with a copper who resided in the Bronx...Percy Bisque Silleyhttp://percybisque.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40959336652607159182010-01-12T14:07:10.552-08:002010-01-12T14:07:10.552-08:00earthly and passionate ....so human...!earthly and passionate ....so human...!ifhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87306437613281092402010-01-12T07:21:22.560-08:002010-01-12T07:21:22.560-08:00Enjoyed this very much. Very strong, emotional im...Enjoyed this very much. Very strong, emotional images. Thank you for sharing it.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88972553928016746992010-01-12T07:15:17.224-08:002010-01-12T07:15:17.224-08:00hey, wonder if your trucker was driving the truck ...hey, wonder if your trucker was driving the truck in my haikuArtist Victoria O'Neillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00483045888226597565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38951169596885974152010-01-12T02:04:52.923-08:002010-01-12T02:04:52.923-08:00Ah yes, great poem, reminds me of things and peopl...Ah yes, great poem, reminds me of things and people....WrightStuffhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16684505907887354154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77956440905976323532010-01-12T00:53:46.129-08:002010-01-12T00:53:46.129-08:00i love how you write, you know that, alone persona...i love how you write, you know that, alone personally I prefer being alone ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9041415156511371652010-01-11T20:09:28.848-08:002010-01-11T20:09:28.848-08:00This moves like a story and yes, I remember your e...This moves like a story and yes, I remember your earlier trucker poems!Jeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73568992098841044692010-01-11T19:07:25.524-08:002010-01-11T19:07:25.524-08:00this for me at least, is a new side of you :)this for me at least, is a new side of you :)Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77260579164787954162010-01-11T17:35:07.211-08:002010-01-11T17:35:07.211-08:00We only know the value or worth of a person or thi...We only know the value or worth of a person or thing when they're gone!<br><br>Very nicely written Gautami!!!Amityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9964846176456618282010-01-11T15:03:23.694-08:002010-01-11T15:03:23.694-08:00Some people are only ever conspicuous by their abs...Some people are only ever conspicuous by their absence.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86161851330189524642010-01-11T11:57:33.879-08:002010-01-11T11:57:33.879-08:00Hi Guatami,This journey with the trucker is really...Hi Guatami,<br><br>This journey with the trucker is really rich, and it's intriguing to see how you incorporate the prompts into this narrative. Nicely done.madeline d. murrayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13956396508529229674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23928724023914385732010-01-11T11:30:13.618-08:002010-01-11T11:30:13.618-08:00I remembered an early truck poem, but never knew y...I remembered an early truck poem, but never knew you had some many. Well done, Gautamisagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90335307689475660922010-01-11T08:33:27.316-08:002010-01-11T08:33:27.316-08:00Then go she must..JaeThen go she must..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76058700351009492572010-01-11T07:14:51.582-08:002010-01-11T07:14:51.582-08:00Hi Gautami, so the narrator is missing the trucker...Hi Gautami, so the narrator is missing the trucker and has taken up curtain twitching. Phew!<br><br>soMe fOOtpRinTS > ><br><a href="http://naisaiku.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The NaiSaiKu Challenge?</a><br><br><a href="http://theamericansandwich.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The American Sandwich game..</a> <br><br><3UAndy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.com