tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3959145273539821384..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Autumn nights............elemental feelingsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49700305063802933792005-10-27T10:55:00.000-07:002005-10-27T10:55:00.000-07:00Thanks Gulnaaz.I like it, Manoj.Thanks eotr, you a...Thanks Gulnaaz.<br><br>I like it, Manoj.<br><br><br>Thanks eotr, you are welcome to return. And get your friends to. Great party we can have here!<br><br>deb, its ok. Thanks. there is nothing to forgive. smiles, please.<br><br>Ah Just a human, what can I say.....you are good too...:)<br><br><br>Gautamigautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55871747491729409832005-10-27T05:55:00.000-07:002005-10-27T05:55:00.000-07:00why autumn nights?why not dusk or dawn?and why a b...why autumn nights?<br>why not dusk or dawn?<br><br>and why a body?<br>why not mind?<br><br>i enter your eyes... glide through your imagination and feel the breeze of your thoughts.<br><br>#######################<br><br>BTW - excellent work of words<br><br>My version:<br><br>juicy body soft as cushion<br>every bite sweet as heaven<br><br>ah the fruits of nature<br>i am biting into sex<br><br>#############################Just A Humanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16356397348312660630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82250114398087631922005-10-26T20:12:00.000-07:002005-10-26T20:12:00.000-07:00I apologize for my other deragatory comment. The c...I apologize for my other deragatory comment. The content struck a little too close to home. <br>You are a gifted poet and have a beautiful soul. Please forgive me.Debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12181494794469232035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2528048460257315832005-10-26T11:47:00.000-07:002005-10-26T11:47:00.000-07:00This is a good poem. I never equated autumn with s...This is a good poem. I never equated autumn with sex--what a metaphor! Glad to meet you and will return!Enemy of the Republichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01787023963138761863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68917989519953007942005-10-26T10:49:00.000-07:002005-10-26T10:49:00.000-07:00On cool autumn nightsThe sweet taste of marlboroas...On cool autumn nights<br>The sweet taste of marlboro<br>as I kiss the fire<br>:-)<br><br>M.voidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01049002833788287896noreply@blogger.com