tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3932842775935423691..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: when did I forget?gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43229114287944663382011-05-20T20:24:56.238-07:002011-05-20T20:24:56.238-07:00Your poem makes me remember my old bell bottoms an...Your poem makes me remember my old bell bottoms and walking in the night when I was young. I like the line about "in the crescent of your eyes/I find a path in tiny crinkles." Intimate and lovely, this poem is elusive and beautiful.Kathiesbirdshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52486495361560013602011-05-17T22:14:07.771-07:002011-05-17T22:14:07.771-07:00I bet if I stood my old pair of bell bottoms up, t...I bet if I stood my old pair of bell bottoms up, they would take me away...gabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13927705860749259612011-05-16T17:26:01.735-07:002011-05-16T17:26:01.735-07:00I like the imagery and flow in this poem. Clever a...I like the imagery and flow in this poem. Clever and beautiful.The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43327091638623867992011-05-16T07:21:22.580-07:002011-05-16T07:21:22.580-07:00in the crescent of your eyesI find a path in tiny ...<i>in the crescent of your eyes<br>I find a path in tiny crinkles</i> <br><br>I enjoyed it all, but especially loved those lines.Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70757691282866594762011-05-15T07:03:22.628-07:002011-05-15T07:03:22.628-07:00in the crescent of your eyes...beautiful!in the crescent of your eyes...beautiful!sandrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17670821270960081899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79827112352929219222011-05-15T02:24:13.784-07:002011-05-15T02:24:13.784-07:00I enjoyed it....I enjoyed it....Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63605617929692187032011-05-13T23:20:02.499-07:002011-05-13T23:20:02.499-07:00I'm sorry you lost your cento poem. Wot no bac...I'm sorry you lost your cento poem. Wot no back-up? Perhaps it will reappear. But I wouldn't want to have missed this one - Kim has found the right word for it: ENTICING.vivinfrancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7539746310527507402011-05-13T17:00:54.487-07:002011-05-13T17:00:54.487-07:00I lost blogger stuff to. BUT i am glad I read this...I lost blogger stuff to. BUT i am glad I read this. I'm glad the pants still fit, whether figuratively (SP?) or not.<br>Great job.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/pearls-song-voice-is-above.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15292227812700524722011-05-13T16:35:48.547-07:002011-05-13T16:35:48.547-07:00you make the idea of moving in a completely differ...you make the idea of moving in a completely different direction enticing.<br><br>http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/09/courage-in-my-cup/Kim Nelsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19818518182392611992011-05-13T14:26:39.613-07:002011-05-13T14:26:39.613-07:00Love every line here, Gautami. This is a little je...Love every line here, Gautami. This is a little jewel. Sorry about the blogger woes, there's always space at wordpress (hint,hint). <br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87829296145805435352011-05-13T12:57:49.219-07:002011-05-13T12:57:49.219-07:00I love the lines "in the crescent of your eye...I love the lines "in the crescent of your eyes I find a path in tiny crinkles." It's so sweet. I agree with you about Blogger. I lost a bunch of stuff also. Very frustrating.Lolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19197253643055861012011-05-13T11:44:02.185-07:002011-05-13T11:44:02.185-07:00"I find a path in tiny crinkles", I love..."I find a path in tiny crinkles", I love that part, Gautami.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79024660792040280882011-05-13T10:18:50.693-07:002011-05-13T10:18:50.693-07:00I like it, Gautami! It's lovely, particularly ...I like it, Gautami! It's lovely, particularly the second and third stanza lines and the motif of movement and pathways all the way through.margorobyhttp://margoroby.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com