tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3814399612850336989..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: embracing weedsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75772090573313469422010-11-14T16:48:52.378-08:002010-11-14T16:48:52.378-08:00What an unsettling and lovely use of these prompt ...What an unsettling and lovely use of these prompt words.<br><br>I wrote this prompt in honor of Mr. Jenny's and my 11th Anniversary which was on this Saturday! And this was such a wonderful read that it was like an Anniversary gift.<br><br>Thank you for linking.<br><br>Wow.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20401864189877022212010-11-10T10:02:38.633-08:002010-11-10T10:02:38.633-08:00Gorgeous. And as someone else said, unsettling. Wo...Gorgeous. And as someone else said, unsettling. Wonderfully extraordinary.evenstarwenhttp://evenstarwen.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85667367529108898222010-11-09T20:11:42.319-08:002010-11-09T20:11:42.319-08:00This gave me the chills. So poignant and sad. Vict...This gave me the chills. So poignant and sad. Victorialiv2write2dayhttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91848950783227063522010-11-09T08:36:59.087-08:002010-11-09T08:36:59.087-08:00Wonderful and mysterious.Wonderful and mysterious.Giovannihttp://giovannicucullo.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63179936395949259122010-11-08T14:18:28.923-08:002010-11-08T14:18:28.923-08:00You have an exceptional way with words.You have an exceptional way with words.G.K. Asantehttp://seenmissing.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34124843351510212782010-11-08T09:42:12.335-08:002010-11-08T09:42:12.335-08:00wow! incredible writing. left me with an eerie fee...wow! incredible writing. left me with an eerie feeling i won't shake for awhile.RockiBottomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04326290443800066850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49135757543506531532010-11-07T18:23:30.679-08:002010-11-07T18:23:30.679-08:00Very mooving and provocativeVery mooving and provocativeJudiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61080231867380060782010-11-07T18:12:23.155-08:002010-11-07T18:12:23.155-08:00What a sad piece. Very masterfully woven tale.What a sad piece. Very masterfully woven tale.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62408812458252442072010-11-07T08:04:44.767-08:002010-11-07T08:04:44.767-08:00I had to read this through again, very moving. And...I had to read this through again, very moving. And you set the scene beautifully, I can see it in my mind's eye. Very original take on the prompt. KatKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14311808290306256872010-11-07T05:37:19.598-08:002010-11-07T05:37:19.598-08:00Haunting piece, Guatami. Beautifully written and e...Haunting piece, Guatami. Beautifully written and evocative.Cherylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77132329439415285722010-11-07T05:29:21.904-08:002010-11-07T05:29:21.904-08:00Very moving. I had to read it a number of times. W...Very moving. I had to read it a number of times. Well written.jfb57http://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47501747966893407662010-11-07T01:00:35.896-08:002010-11-07T01:00:35.896-08:00That was so emotional . Mine is where I hope to be...That was so emotional . Mine is where I hope to be in 11 years My divorce is imminent so I need to prepare to not look backTracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17104766436816377485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65108597233987678672010-11-06T20:21:46.485-07:002010-11-06T20:21:46.485-07:00I could feel the weight of emotion. love it!I could feel the weight of emotion. love it!Traceyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04323319590464560620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3623264876122952532010-11-06T19:55:41.788-07:002010-11-06T19:55:41.788-07:00Beautiful and sad, you're so good with that tw...Beautiful and sad, you're so good with that twist at the endsagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45221578715923225232010-11-06T16:27:54.234-07:002010-11-06T16:27:54.234-07:00Very unusual lines and full of emotion....Very unusual lines and full of emotion....Bookiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65367260531912190372010-11-06T12:11:13.845-07:002010-11-06T12:11:13.845-07:00Very moving. You words have certainly set me mind ...Very moving. You words have certainly set me mind alive with wonder and possibilities.<br><br>MalisaMalisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02716280057476425463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69363197274753814152010-11-06T11:50:11.887-07:002010-11-06T11:50:11.887-07:00Great job! Love the raucous breathing, and still t...Great job! Love the raucous breathing, and still thinking about her closed eyes being strung together.June Freaking Cleaverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02516002280882854450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86670778132732199632010-11-06T10:06:08.189-07:002010-11-06T10:06:08.189-07:00Unsettling. And disturbing.(the qualities of many ...Unsettling. And disturbing.<br><br>(the qualities of many a good Centus)<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5947269278407094462010-11-06T08:58:59.309-07:002010-11-06T08:58:59.309-07:00This was so moving and thought provoking. I know ...This was so moving and thought provoking. I know it's a poem but I would love to hear much more about this relationship. Good job.Vikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14851240410986824692010-11-06T08:39:18.887-07:002010-11-06T08:39:18.887-07:00Hi Gautami, this was incredible . very nice .Hi Gautami, this was incredible . very nice .Jackiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08031465320721586310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37492691744955482192010-11-06T08:28:18.360-07:002010-11-06T08:28:18.360-07:00I love this one. You have such a way with words, G...I love this one. You have such a way with words, Gautami! Such beautiful poetry :)Susan B. Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15061596156521953005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51317276056552584542010-11-06T06:59:58.355-07:002010-11-06T06:59:58.355-07:00Full of feelings Gautami..you always throw surpris...Full of feelings Gautami..you always throw surprises.. thanks..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.com