tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3611815719652911040..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: flinching fiercelygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12326618362653960782010-04-30T20:02:29.368-07:002010-04-30T20:02:29.368-07:00I have been to the emporiums in India. Most impre...I have been to the emporiums in India. Most impressive and interesting place to spend a day. Your poem is real in the sense of imagery it protrays.Loch Robhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35834421714748555752010-04-26T17:41:46.060-07:002010-04-26T17:41:46.060-07:00hmmm...some innocence, some love, some hurt feelin...hmmm...some innocence, some love, some hurt feelings, some wishful thinking all portrayed here!<br><br>nice one Gautami!Amityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71264271959169749332010-04-26T07:03:28.646-07:002010-04-26T07:03:28.646-07:00Old Griiz must apologize..read your post early Sun...Old Griiz must apologize..read your post early Sunday and was sure I commented becasue I also like the saffron dreams and the dizzy eyes.<br>Guess I Old Grizz is getting old and confused..must have a dizzy mindsg beattyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11652753521018832572010-04-25T22:46:53.494-07:002010-04-25T22:46:53.494-07:00So much color and raw emotion. I love the line, &q...So much color and raw emotion. I love the line, "my eyes get dizzy"...gabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4851034729168480552010-04-25T17:41:18.990-07:002010-04-25T17:41:18.990-07:00I love your choice of words in this - the emotion ...I love your choice of words in this - the emotion surely resonates!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14169023614628305712010-04-25T15:48:35.036-07:002010-04-25T15:48:35.036-07:00What a lovely poem! I, too, enjoyed how you used ...What a lovely poem! I, too, enjoyed how you used "fissures."Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85927876794035244062010-04-25T14:33:13.231-07:002010-04-25T14:33:13.231-07:00I liked your poem and your use of fissures. That i...I liked your poem and your use of fissures. That is tripping me up for OSI.Tammy Brierlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23583405114692211902010-04-25T11:59:54.441-07:002010-04-25T11:59:54.441-07:00I like the narrative here... it could be comical o...I like the narrative here... it could be comical or really profound, or both. Clever and engaging way to combine a couple different prompts into one! :)namingconstellationshttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18150267002121304232010-04-25T08:09:06.205-07:002010-04-25T08:09:06.205-07:00I made a short story with those prompts - such an ...I made a short story with those prompts - such an interesting collection of words. I loved this, pictured you eating toast by the window watching an early morning storm :)Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77117226070060951632010-04-25T07:30:09.746-07:002010-04-25T07:30:09.746-07:00"fierce rain" what a great writer...beau..."fierce rain" what a great writer...beautiful poem!Sandra (if)http://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44806544058257666582010-04-25T05:36:52.890-07:002010-04-25T05:36:52.890-07:00Wow, I'm impressed. You used all the words; I...Wow, I'm impressed. You used all the words; I managed only three. But, isn't it amazing what quirky combinations we can come up with? I like the image of you playing with a tendril of your hair. But, a sad ending...hope you are okay!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45727253141276082302010-04-25T02:08:06.905-07:002010-04-25T02:08:06.905-07:00Well done, to be sure. Just thinking of all those ...Well done, to be sure. Just thinking of all those trips to the emporium I have taken that I might skirt the fissures in my life.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3428558944783279982010-04-25T00:48:39.374-07:002010-04-25T00:48:39.374-07:00I love wordles. Amazing what you can get out of th...I love wordles. Amazing what you can get out of them.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3182648994345268752010-04-24T21:45:13.378-07:002010-04-24T21:45:13.378-07:00Bristling emotion in this that seems to culminate ...Bristling emotion in this that seems to culminate with "festering fissures"! Dramatic poem!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82272707008923059682010-04-24T21:26:42.101-07:002010-04-24T21:26:42.101-07:00You got them all in... and it made sense - well do...You got them all in... and it made sense - well done!Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19984261259045381382010-04-24T11:20:30.215-07:002010-04-24T11:20:30.215-07:00I like "saffron dreams."I like "saffron dreams."Billhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45351121935591563652010-04-24T08:46:40.278-07:002010-04-24T08:46:40.278-07:00You used all the words with skill, wove them toget...You used all the words with skill, wove them together to create a beautiful poem. Great writing!Jane Doehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75959186476979374612010-04-24T00:13:46.630-07:002010-04-24T00:13:46.630-07:00Great use of works indeed. You really put a great ...Great use of works indeed. You really put a great scene together, especially with that first stanza!brooklynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05626217934299271389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54262874130317858552010-04-23T15:00:07.656-07:002010-04-23T15:00:07.656-07:00love the way you used all the words - and they wor...love the way you used all the words - and they worked together in a beautiful, subtle way - when I saw the list, I just wanted to throw my hands up and quit - wonderful job!Lani Johttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04985571983198292185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33161943625156529622010-04-23T12:25:01.043-07:002010-04-23T12:25:01.043-07:00Excellent use of the words, a very enjoyable poem....Excellent use of the words, a very enjoyable poem.Eryl Shieldshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06008344023000459577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67233711477623632152010-04-23T09:34:53.201-07:002010-04-23T09:34:53.201-07:00Gautami,Got link to your space from comment at one...Gautami,<br><br>Got link to your space from comment at one of the spaces I visit regularly. Read all available poems. I feel glad to have visited you. Good poems with lots of emotions, though mostly sad. Have you thought of having collection of your poems published? How is your PC now? I know it is so frustrating when lots of ideas are churning in mind but you can not put them down for this lack of support. <br><br>Do visit me, if you find time and give your views.<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18183188848511632002010-04-23T03:21:31.829-07:002010-04-23T03:21:31.829-07:00I like it I always do, although for the life of me...I like it I always do, although for the life of me, I don't understand, is it a challenge?Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38198794963470522282010-04-22T10:15:49.734-07:002010-04-22T10:15:49.734-07:00Impressive little poem Triptoes!Good use of the wo...Impressive little poem Triptoes!<br>Good use of the words.Rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81174292307719660712010-04-22T09:48:32.006-07:002010-04-22T09:48:32.006-07:00Sometimes I need excuses to stay productive... emp...Sometimes I need excuses to stay productive... emporium visits, watching something trashy on TV, coffee with a friend... and my productivity sores.<br><br>Love the combinations of words and tone here? Exceptional.<br><br>THANK YOU!<br><br><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/04/napowrimo-day-22-poem-squall-blows.html" rel="nofollow"> My Day 22 Poem is "Squall Blows" </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.com