tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3609042406541787296..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: rosy maskgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51584332610381437922010-04-24T18:26:08.836-07:002010-04-24T18:26:08.836-07:00Hi Tami, very nice!Hi Tami, very nice!Tammy Brierlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86558342339942510702010-04-24T11:46:47.545-07:002010-04-24T11:46:47.545-07:00truly a paradox. such beauty wearing a crown of t...truly a paradox. such beauty wearing a crown of thornsgabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32158761549713455972010-04-23T02:27:46.168-07:002010-04-23T02:27:46.168-07:00Very true. Nicely done.Very true. Nicely done.BlueMisthttp://everythingincoherrent.wordpress.com/2010/04/23/mask-3/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55776287428946047052010-04-22T08:24:41.685-07:002010-04-22T08:24:41.685-07:00Life is very sad and fleeting. Love comes and goes...Life is very sad and fleeting. Love comes and goes before you realize it was the one true love<br>Beautiful.<br><br><br>MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10399475178838318442010-04-22T03:48:50.698-07:002010-04-22T03:48:50.698-07:00beautiful one Gautami....:)i like how u did the pr...beautiful one Gautami....:)<br><br>i like how u did the prompt..., it's just simply amazing!<br><br>and some of your followers just made some more wonders, isn't it?<br><br>thanks for supporting my prompt!<br><br>AmityAmityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10201816667750988912010-04-21T18:46:08.391-07:002010-04-21T18:46:08.391-07:00such a sweet melody to this poem. very beautiful i...such a sweet melody to this poem. very beautiful imagery, great use of alliteration. i like it :) also interesting to see how it reads backwards, very nice. reminds me of something silly i wrote once (a form of poetry that someone i knew made up):<br><br>Baiser Immortel / Immortal Kiss<br><br><br>His rose lips wet, his heartbeat still<br>Absent regret, leans in to kill<br>A suck so tame, her skin so sweet<br>Love bite does claim, her life complete<br>As ivory seeks deeper lust<br>He hungrily devours thus<br>And penetrates, down to the soul<br>Reveals the fate, by moon-light stole <br>By moon-light stole, revealing fate<br>Down to her soul, he penetrates<br>Devouring, so hungrily<br>Seeks deeper lust, with ivory<br>Her life complete, love bite does claim<br>Her skin so sweet, a suck so tame<br>Leans in to kill, absent regret<br>His heartbeat still, his rose lips wetdorinnyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18287923169420830693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58441760452344573962010-04-21T18:11:56.320-07:002010-04-21T18:11:56.320-07:00This was lovely...something so beautiful and maske...This was lovely...something so beautiful and masked as well- perfetPattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88898561020052753862010-04-21T08:21:14.642-07:002010-04-21T08:21:14.642-07:00lovely wordsmany have wondered at the rose behind ...lovely words<br>many have wondered at the rose behind the thorns<br>perhaps so that we approach with presence and appreciation.Tammie Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85993588942948849622010-04-20T19:04:47.657-07:002010-04-20T19:04:47.657-07:00beautiful words that caught me in a twist. always...beautiful words that caught me in a twist. always wondered why those thorns were there.sg beattyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54813685824945105442010-04-19T22:09:36.876-07:002010-04-19T22:09:36.876-07:00The rose is a bit of a paradox, isn't it?The rose is a bit of a paradox, isn't it?Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13488832807528327012010-04-19T05:47:37.682-07:002010-04-19T05:47:37.682-07:00hm people do that dont they, hide their pain behin...hm people do that dont they, hide their pain behind thorns. <br><br>love the poemUnderstanding Alicehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05150753279967941766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80499856161848354432010-04-18T20:50:50.905-07:002010-04-18T20:50:50.905-07:00a mask....a way to protect......a mask....a way to protect......Sandra (if)http://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14621481863679928732010-04-18T19:38:18.393-07:002010-04-18T19:38:18.393-07:00Very nice, and I like that B pointed out it can be...Very nice, and I like that B pointed out it can be read in both directions. Doubly cool!namingconstellationshttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13672210581031105202010-04-18T19:10:50.320-07:002010-04-18T19:10:50.320-07:00balance in everything. point and counterpoint. b...balance in everything. point and counterpoint. beautifully done.Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25875931905706982312010-04-18T16:39:22.079-07:002010-04-18T16:39:22.079-07:00A lovely poem about wonder and beauty, protection ...A lovely poem about wonder and beauty, protection and pain.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/stories/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30157560667341676222010-04-18T14:22:33.477-07:002010-04-18T14:22:33.477-07:00Beautiful tale of what it feels like to be wearing...Beautiful tale of what it feels like to be wearing a mask. The mask doesn't change things but it gives us a place to hide from the rest. :)<br>..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50824296913205263082010-04-18T12:08:24.462-07:002010-04-18T12:08:24.462-07:00Now do it in reverse Quatami.I wonder whybehind th...Now do it in reverse Quatami.<br><br>I wonder why<br>behind the mast of thorns<br>the rose hides its pain<br><br>we sing paeans to it<br><br>fires our love<br>its wholeness<br>touches our soul<br>the subtle scent<br><br>into our being<br>tender gentleness<br>the delicate petal<br>velvety soft.<br><br>It read beautifully either way. Thank you.<br><br>bbhttp://www.retireinstyleblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29365416518514676062010-04-18T11:42:54.264-07:002010-04-18T11:42:54.264-07:00is it rose season in Dehli? I like the images--th...is it rose season in Dehli? I like the images--the feel and smellsagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64652182770660503502010-04-18T08:07:17.079-07:002010-04-18T08:07:17.079-07:00A wonderfully gentle, yet vivid, poem. The scent o...A wonderfully gentle, yet vivid, poem. The scent of roses wafted across my imagination while reading it.MissMelisshttp://www.missmeliss.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69149551945952202342010-04-18T07:42:11.597-07:002010-04-18T07:42:11.597-07:00so much easier to share pleasure than pain? n'...so much easier to share pleasure than pain? n'est-ce pas ma chere?Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11839944112644396012010-04-18T06:15:13.943-07:002010-04-18T06:15:13.943-07:00Very beautiful and thought provoking.Very beautiful and thought provoking.Denise Moncriefhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06793221574604284282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15739602215541280112010-04-18T05:50:42.047-07:002010-04-18T05:50:42.047-07:00A soft and delicate poem. The visual image and me...A soft and delicate poem. The visual image and metaphor of the rose and thorns is excellent.Loch Robhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72078005703530600482010-04-18T05:27:35.353-07:002010-04-18T05:27:35.353-07:00You have me wondering why, too. Beautifully done.You have me wondering why, too. Beautifully done.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52231603102184674942010-04-18T05:13:33.181-07:002010-04-18T05:13:33.181-07:00It makes you think...and do a lot of human compari...It makes you think...and do a lot of human comparisons. Thanks for the lovely poem.Lilibethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53552654055584119352010-04-18T01:56:11.047-07:002010-04-18T01:56:11.047-07:00lovely work.lovely work.Aayushi Mehtahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08360324719537614250noreply@blogger.com