tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post330302145871652599..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: metamorphosisgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90708636968352239162011-11-25T23:11:45.253-08:002011-11-25T23:11:45.253-08:00"Honestly" is rather like "Obviousl..."Honestly" is rather like "Obviously" It ususally isn't! Your poem is cleverly ironic - honestly!Lucy Westenrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50235926704824849772011-11-25T17:45:36.387-08:002011-11-25T17:45:36.387-08:00Very well written! A liar is a liar, no matter the...Very well written! A liar is a liar, no matter the spin they try to put on the situation.Mary Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65418047025398819022011-11-22T18:58:49.102-08:002011-11-22T18:58:49.102-08:00thought provoking idea.. nice poem.. :)thought provoking idea.. nice poem.. :)Nenihttp://purple-neni.blogspot.com/2011/11/lady-whom-she-hates.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67642740885641150812011-11-22T17:54:23.037-08:002011-11-22T17:54:23.037-08:00Thought provoking indeed....lovely writing Gautami...Thought provoking indeed....lovely writing Gautami! :-)Carrie Burtthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61726683809840500522011-11-22T02:15:27.673-08:002011-11-22T02:15:27.673-08:00Intriguing topic! Well done.Intriguing topic! Well done.Kayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5268334698851395012011-11-21T23:42:41.773-08:002011-11-21T23:42:41.773-08:00I think the title really works here to make the po...I think the title really works here to make the poem more powerful.M. A. S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31437657640052497562011-11-21T22:50:23.478-08:002011-11-21T22:50:23.478-08:00so is this about a psychopath?so is this about a psychopath?zongrikhttp://zongrik.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2193281566947698282011-11-21T15:55:37.208-08:002011-11-21T15:55:37.208-08:00Gautami, visiting from Imaginary Gardens. If some...Gautami, visiting from Imaginary Gardens. If someone begins a sentence with "Honestly" I tend to be a bit sspicious.. Honesty speaks for itself.stoiMaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48387097958666599352011-11-21T10:02:56.578-08:002011-11-21T10:02:56.578-08:00Thought-provoking....makes me picture politicians....Thought-provoking....makes me picture politicians........Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5973160665122292762011-11-21T09:55:25.161-08:002011-11-21T09:55:25.161-08:00profound! well done.profound! well done.Janethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70212932483239284592011-11-21T08:38:34.596-08:002011-11-21T08:38:34.596-08:00Funny thing about that word, isn't it. You cap...Funny thing about that word, isn't it. You captured these thoughts well.cosmos camihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32327002491187813532011-11-20T20:20:34.946-08:002011-11-20T20:20:34.946-08:00it is a trick,hard to have the notion fixed.powerf...it is a trick,<br>hard to have the notion fixed.<br><br>powerful take.<br>Happy Sunday,<br><br><br>Do link to poetry picnic today.<br>smiles.Morninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40128646882290219402011-11-20T19:17:59.730-08:002011-11-20T19:17:59.730-08:00This was very good ... the expression upon my face...This was very good ... the expression upon my face was screwing up into an unpleasant look. Very convincing.Old Ravenhttp://ravenpress.wordpress.com/2011/11/20/rattles/#comment-80noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43592858757732727002011-11-20T14:40:58.635-08:002011-11-20T14:40:58.635-08:00That first verse really drew me in. Great writing!...That first verse really drew me in. Great writing!Laura Mariahttp://www.dreamingpaperthoughts.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48842419520851322892011-11-17T15:40:39.427-08:002011-11-17T15:40:39.427-08:00Ouch. Striking and very telling 'Lurking Evil&...Ouch. Striking and very telling 'Lurking Evil'. Politicians and Lovers can look so similar. Nice write!pervagushttp://pervagus.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91105964811351487962011-11-17T15:40:11.973-08:002011-11-17T15:40:11.973-08:00I think (as Brian) we all wear different masks dep...I think (as Brian) we all wear different masks depending on who we interact with and it isn't true deception. For example, we'd behave differently with out family at home than we would professionally, at work.<br>But, I too dislike two faced people, can't trust them at all.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53030227705230240732011-11-17T10:57:32.093-08:002011-11-17T10:57:32.093-08:00Really nice look here. Like the way you put the i...Really nice look here. Like the way you put the idea to verse, thanksFredhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87410344236467717752011-11-17T10:36:22.673-08:002011-11-17T10:36:22.673-08:00Thank you for reading and commenting at my site. ...Thank you for reading and commenting at my site. Glad you liked it. I've followed your link for a return visit. This is covertly powerful. Makes me think about how I speak and the level of honestly behind my own words. Recipe for conspiracy paranoia.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25126382327123079712011-11-17T07:56:34.307-08:002011-11-17T07:56:34.307-08:00Agreed... if you preface your words with honestly ...Agreed... if you preface your words with honestly sometimes, does that mean you're not being honest the others??<br>Hmmm...<br>Nicely done.Becky Sainhttp://bsain.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62123403551258494922011-11-17T07:44:34.954-08:002011-11-17T07:44:34.954-08:00Right on! Donn't bother of the 2-faced individ...Right on! Donn't bother of the 2-faced individual.Not many of them anyway!<br><br>Hankkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61289080978688192792011-11-16T19:36:53.051-08:002011-11-16T19:36:53.051-08:00Dear gautamiSome times honesty is revealed in the ...Dear gautami<br><br>Some times honesty is revealed in the eyes... you just have to look for it... I liked the way you have structured your verse about it.. and the last line was summing it up neatly.. <br>thanks for sharing..<br><br><br>Shashi<br>ॐ नमः शिवाय <br>Om Namah Shivaya<br>http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-where-you-will-go.htmlShashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10502285099854714352011-11-16T02:00:53.627-08:002011-11-16T02:00:53.627-08:00I guess it's a rare individual who treats ever...I guess it's a rare individual who treats everyone the same way, that would mean that no one ever had a bad day ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87817072244564891502011-11-15T20:25:06.323-08:002011-11-15T20:25:06.323-08:00haha Brian made a good point and yeah many are two...haha Brian made a good point and yeah many are two faced, great look at it in your verse.Pat Hatthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67448769723229023132011-11-15T18:43:51.071-08:002011-11-15T18:43:51.071-08:00if you have to tell me you are honest, you are pro...if you have to tell me you are honest, you are probably not...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com