tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3197649614515721750..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: abstracted---Fiction Friday/Friday 5gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50096379505554588952007-12-04T12:19:00.000-08:002007-12-04T12:19:00.000-08:00beautiful...the angst of life well portrayed...had...beautiful...the angst of life well portrayed...had to read it a couple of times to fully understand your story...it was well worth the effort...LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31231737492099519892007-12-04T10:13:00.000-08:002007-12-04T10:13:00.000-08:00you chose a diffidult assignment and did a great j...you chose a diffidult assignment and did a great job as usual.polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38374119666931249602007-12-02T19:20:00.000-08:002007-12-02T19:20:00.000-08:00Very nice. I liked how he find another let out for...Very nice. I liked how he find another let out for grief, better than keeping it all inside. Thank you.ULnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58871092501840356332007-12-02T00:47:00.000-08:002007-12-02T00:47:00.000-08:00not bad, kinda downer, but i'm diggin' it....not bad, kinda downer, but i'm diggin' it.Lancelothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15832239920913999873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31296252782252955882007-12-01T10:19:00.000-08:002007-12-01T10:19:00.000-08:00Nice take on the prompt and using it in conjunctio...Nice take on the prompt and using it in conjunction with the Fiction Friday prompt...tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70117745576830191552007-12-01T07:41:00.000-08:002007-12-01T07:41:00.000-08:00Gautami, is this a form of sonnet? Just curious.Th...Gautami, is this a form of sonnet? Just curious.<br><br>The painter has abandoned music because it is too painful for him after losing his lover - that is a very anguished image. <br><br>Great job with some tough words. i had to look up duple too.Mariacristinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04498327260166892705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66922468491509936812007-12-01T05:31:00.000-08:002007-12-01T05:31:00.000-08:00I agree with Sage. You seem to have no trouble wr...I agree with Sage. You seem to have no trouble writing anything down and giving it life. Your words are always so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your poem. Also, thank you for stopping by Poefusion. I hope to see you their again. Keep up the good work.<br><br>Utenzi, feel free to stop by Poefusion anytime. If I haven't already commented on your piece I would like to see it. Where can it be found? Thank you for stopping by.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79172668109890082192007-12-01T05:12:00.000-08:002007-12-01T05:12:00.000-08:00i always find friday five to be quite challenging....i always find friday five to be quite challenging.. i am not one to use a lot of imagery,, i am more emotionally based,, but sometimes these words force it out of you... great write....paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55701856464740425622007-12-01T00:23:00.000-08:002007-12-01T00:23:00.000-08:00I think I've only done Friday 5 once--and it w...I think I've only done Friday 5 once--and it was on somebody else's blog not mine. My vocabulary is pretty good but 'duple' was a new one for me. I had to look it up. I suppose that's where the word 'duplicity' comes from.<br><br>Michele sent me over to admire your prose.utenzihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15988445461413550750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32368929492223248112007-11-30T09:48:00.000-08:002007-11-30T09:48:00.000-08:00I think Rose might have had it. But that's goo...I think Rose might have had it. But that's good because your work does quite nicely reflect the theme. I was afraid the theme didn't really come across in mine, because it's grant that throws Glory off of her game... you know... waking up in a brand new world aside and all.<br><br>Nicely done, Gautami.Square1http://www.blogger.com/profile/07497081826047619051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51317157105487030862007-11-30T08:49:00.000-08:002007-11-30T08:49:00.000-08:00but its good, maybe abstract poetry just comes whe...but its good, maybe abstract poetry just comes when you dont prepare for it, and you are not confined to elements to be used. how do you confine poetry? :)Ghost Particlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42342075125491221782007-11-30T06:51:00.000-08:002007-11-30T06:51:00.000-08:00you seem to come up with these poems so effortless...you seem to come up with these poems so effortlessly--they're so deep and draw on a wealth of wordssagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81514270363011961732007-11-30T06:22:00.000-08:002007-11-30T06:22:00.000-08:00Hi Gautami,I did Sunday Scribblings this week. Per...Hi Gautami,<br><br>I did Sunday Scribblings this week. <br><br>Perhaps the prompt itself has thrown you off your game? I like the first stanza. :)<br><br><a href="http://dewyknickers.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">Rose</a><br><br>xoRose Dewy Knickersnoreply@blogger.com