tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3083968957746137670..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: internalised----3WW and Totally Optional Prompts!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23540687540334920302007-10-17T09:53:00.000-07:002007-10-17T09:53:00.000-07:00I just found the T.O.P. page and plan to play in t...I just found the T.O.P. page and plan to play in the future. I loved the hairline phrase too! Nice to "see" you again.Normahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19731893905143598232007-10-17T05:17:00.000-07:002007-10-17T05:17:00.000-07:00I really enjoyed reading this, my fav line isiniti...I really enjoyed reading this, my fav line is<br><br>initial euphoria receding like hairline<br><br>loved that<br><br>I look forward to reading more<br><br>ChristyChristyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68018153425399697632007-10-15T17:09:00.000-07:002007-10-15T17:09:00.000-07:00P.S. I finally posted today O:)P.S. I <b>finally</b> posted today O:)TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28453667987070807182007-10-15T17:08:00.000-07:002007-10-15T17:08:00.000-07:00ones that camera never captured.Sometimes I think ...<i>ones that camera never captured.<br></i><br><br>Sometimes I think those are the most important pictures we never take.TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79865285748210765102007-10-14T18:09:00.000-07:002007-10-14T18:09:00.000-07:00Often I think that I remember visual things withou...Often I think that I remember visual things without a camera along<br><br>It makes me really look and memorize, but then the camera sees thing I never did so...<br><br>Made me think :) I like thatpiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81966946808770739552007-10-14T16:10:00.000-07:002007-10-14T16:10:00.000-07:00looking inward - like kaliedoscope eyes?looking inward - like kaliedoscope eyes?Proper Joe'shttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72524586361931903382007-10-14T13:24:00.000-07:002007-10-14T13:24:00.000-07:00why is it that we never have a camera when we want...why is it that we never have a camera when we want it...and when we do we cant take the picture that we are feeling!? Wonderful!A Tag Along Travelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00997688533571949049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34116517105696699762007-10-12T08:09:00.000-07:002007-10-12T08:09:00.000-07:00Nice verse Gautami, as always. I finally got anot...Nice verse Gautami, as always. I finally got another 3WW donesagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20042525327702406372007-10-12T03:37:00.000-07:002007-10-12T03:37:00.000-07:00"internal experiments of the soul"though..."internal experiments of the soul"<br>thought provoking.<br><br>"initial euphoria receding like hairline" Classic!!Jujeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11075945120950670714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70523801327935676872007-10-11T19:41:00.000-07:002007-10-11T19:41:00.000-07:00Really loved the ending Gautami. Those are two be...Really loved the ending Gautami. Those are two beautiful lines. And I got a chuckle out of the hairline lineBonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46298912809863277892007-10-11T19:05:00.000-07:002007-10-11T19:05:00.000-07:00exsquisite! You always capture more than a camera...exsquisite! You always capture more than a camera would. Your artistry is divine....Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03165578165979664051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20396457409901052752007-10-11T14:20:00.000-07:002007-10-11T14:20:00.000-07:00Gautami, I have been going through old photographs...Gautami, I have been going through old photographs, so your poem hit home. One of my favorites of yours now.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)http://meeaugraphie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39553690180983835462007-10-11T14:12:00.000-07:002007-10-11T14:12:00.000-07:00It's been said, but I'll say it again: tha...It's been said, but I'll say it again: that last part rocks, and seals the whole (no pun intended) nicely.Rethabilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71486555701473449932007-10-11T13:13:00.000-07:002007-10-11T13:13:00.000-07:00"ignored. ones that camera never captured.&qu..."ignored. ones that camera never captured." is incredible. It gets to the heart of what I read here. Beautiful. And true....debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12737911311583787212007-10-11T10:43:00.000-07:002007-10-11T10:43:00.000-07:00Well I already commented yesterday but I'll co...Well I already commented yesterday but I'll come back to say I still think it's great.Johttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3227696230168174322007-10-11T06:10:00.000-07:002007-10-11T06:10:00.000-07:00Great poem. Can our photos really capture what we...Great poem. Can our photos really capture what we truly feel inside? Keep up the good work.<br><br>Have a nice day.<br>MichelleMichelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27392266008751791942007-10-11T04:08:00.000-07:002007-10-11T04:08:00.000-07:00Photographs are such a fine way of capturing memor...Photographs are such a fine way of capturing memories and reliving them, superb..ULhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77413872723347531872007-10-10T16:13:00.000-07:002007-10-10T16:13:00.000-07:00I like this. I actually understand this better tha...I like this. I actually understand this better than most of the poems/prose you have written. Maybe that's why.<br><br>Great poem!lissahttp://walktotheleft.blogspot.com/2007/10/three-word-wednesday-11.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45870558242795988592007-10-10T15:15:00.000-07:002007-10-10T15:15:00.000-07:00Hi Gautami -- I really like the feeling in this, a...Hi Gautami -- I really like the feeling in this, and I also love the line "ones that camera never captured". Really nice!<br>:)Clarehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46793710493162501012007-10-10T11:59:00.000-07:002007-10-10T11:59:00.000-07:00old photographs can stir so many memories and emot...old photographs can stir so many memories and emotions... love this the way it ispolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27866109298862166562007-10-10T11:53:00.000-07:002007-10-10T11:53:00.000-07:00Some fine lines in this poem! The emotion comes th...Some fine lines in this poem! The emotion comes through loud and clear!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8145478934407372802007-10-10T10:54:00.000-07:002007-10-10T10:54:00.000-07:00receding like hairline - I empathize!!Very nice.Ju...receding like hairline - I empathize!!<br><br>Very nice.<br><br>JustinTruefaith1963http://www.blogger.com/profile/03026809487740731739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21000972001312863132007-10-10T10:46:00.000-07:002007-10-10T10:46:00.000-07:00Very stirring visuals.~SVery stirring visuals.<br>~SShephardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07318615370914088651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45173003255082663092007-10-10T10:05:00.000-07:002007-10-10T10:05:00.000-07:00Very nice.ever changing weather mirrorsbut absorbs...Very nice.<br><br>ever changing weather mirrors<br>but absorbs too, darkest turns to light.<br><br>This is a lovely image.Johttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67395345276012280492007-10-10T09:17:00.000-07:002007-10-10T09:17:00.000-07:00with a knock onto memory.....great visualization!!...with a knock onto memory.....<br><br>great visualization!!!<br><br>thanks!<br><br>-<a href="http://calougee.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"><strong>charles</strong></a>charleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07638508057040121699noreply@blogger.com