tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post3056788764502616847..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: powdered charcoal--half a poemgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29162352289777331922008-08-25T02:54:00.000-07:002008-08-25T02:54:00.000-07:00scary!!nice attempt but :)scary!!<br>nice attempt but :)"SunShine"http://www.blogger.com/profile/05578478396891876966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14859604318922344402008-08-24T17:26:00.000-07:002008-08-24T17:26:00.000-07:00Yikes! Creepy. nice image!Yikes! Creepy. nice image!DJParehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04029267667550203879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69877028979653866412008-08-24T07:46:00.000-07:002008-08-24T07:46:00.000-07:00That is superb. "Half a poem," eh? Wonde...That is superb. "Half a poem," eh? Wonderful.Patoishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30246298148385376372008-08-24T01:24:00.000-07:002008-08-24T01:24:00.000-07:00very vividvery vividCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10139089862319611922008-08-23T19:34:00.000-07:002008-08-23T19:34:00.000-07:00my skin crawls!my skin crawls!Lucyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30929144744028451202008-08-23T12:48:00.000-07:002008-08-23T12:48:00.000-07:00Wonderfully dark and so imotive. A gem.Wonderfully dark and so imotive. A gem.keithsramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38288701046389351592008-08-23T12:34:00.000-07:002008-08-23T12:34:00.000-07:00Pretty intense. Interesting possibilities without ...Pretty intense. Interesting possibilities without punctuation.HLhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09279749015350443608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11636939819316142712008-08-22T16:59:00.000-07:002008-08-22T16:59:00.000-07:00This certainly holds one's attention! Fine te...This certainly holds one's attention! Fine tension between heat and cold.Granny Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15829392517917339262008-08-22T04:56:00.000-07:002008-08-22T04:56:00.000-07:00Very intense viewpoint.Very intense viewpoint.Brianhttp://hummingbunny.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45137809689121257872008-08-22T04:08:00.000-07:002008-08-22T04:08:00.000-07:00Always a twist in the tail........Always a twist in the tail........Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57917062482136845682008-08-22T02:18:00.000-07:002008-08-22T02:18:00.000-07:00Its very creative and originalIts very creative and originalArt and Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18440301734507511922008-08-21T23:55:00.000-07:002008-08-21T23:55:00.000-07:00Confusion, realisation. Quite a sinister atmospher...Confusion, realisation. Quite a sinister atmosphere to it, but the inevitable is taken so casually.<br>The style of this one works for me.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67130897480747608022008-08-21T22:39:00.000-07:002008-08-21T22:39:00.000-07:00Cremation and Drowning has created a wonderful tug...Cremation and Drowning has created a wonderful tug of war for my imagination.<br>Love it.Donnnnnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79460815646868154542008-08-21T15:49:00.000-07:002008-08-21T15:49:00.000-07:00Very dark. I love the shifting between fire and wa...Very dark. I love the shifting between fire and water, heat and cold.Lironewww.wordsthatsing.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78795451312514950782008-08-21T14:59:00.000-07:002008-08-21T14:59:00.000-07:00Love the twist. But, of course! Nicely done!Love the twist. But, of course! Nicely done!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14657760307698863042008-08-21T10:07:00.000-07:002008-08-21T10:07:00.000-07:00Whow! Sinister, and good! Great ending.Whow! Sinister, and good! Great ending.Lenorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47875752844856624012008-08-21T08:42:00.000-07:002008-08-21T08:42:00.000-07:00This gave me goosebumps!This gave me goosebumps!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46292348390548592182008-08-21T08:15:00.000-07:002008-08-21T08:15:00.000-07:00Another great surprise there.Another great surprise there.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67619799904381541732008-08-21T06:25:00.000-07:002008-08-21T06:25:00.000-07:00That was really nice twist at the end. A pretty no...That was really nice twist at the end. A pretty novel idea.Aprameyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07140542224541400285noreply@blogger.com