tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post304932920698924183..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: distractingly disjointedgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58789539297708887072008-11-20T06:23:00.000-08:002008-11-20T06:23:00.000-08:00i liked the imagery you used. very striking.i liked the imagery you used. very striking.niyohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17079530266648829107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62753345206922101582008-11-18T12:46:00.000-08:002008-11-18T12:46:00.000-08:00I really love the haiku-like feel of the first two...I really love the haiku-like feel of the first two stanzas, how you "transformed" flowers into letters. Thank you for sharing this piece!<br><br>Also, I want to thank you for visiting my poetry journal. :)<br><br>http://alotus-poetry.livejournal.comAmbiguityLotushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18621200921395444392008-11-18T12:21:00.000-08:002008-11-18T12:21:00.000-08:00transformation of a relationship... well donetransformation of a relationship... well donepolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49780098542062529972008-11-17T02:49:00.000-08:002008-11-17T02:49:00.000-08:00Love this Gautami, Time has made you a stranger! N...Love this Gautami, Time has made you a stranger! Now there's a very true thought.SweetTalkingGuyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59145620425614119652008-11-16T19:38:00.000-08:002008-11-16T19:38:00.000-08:00yes. well put!yes. well put!Jennifer Hickshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18351458993630972607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72734418353025770472008-11-16T10:05:00.000-08:002008-11-16T10:05:00.000-08:00Keepsakes of memories are hard to ignore. Well do...Keepsakes of memories are hard to ignore. Well done, Tami!Tammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-452002616110612052008-11-16T07:51:00.000-08:002008-11-16T07:51:00.000-08:00Our souls are not so elastic as to stretch and be ...Our souls are not so elastic as to stretch and be ignored. Excellent piece!!Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69485587355518519212008-11-15T23:37:00.000-08:002008-11-15T23:37:00.000-08:00I like that "a predicament, which is embarass...I like that "a predicament, which is embarassingly embracing me..."<br><br>I did a poem too.<br><br>Have a wonderful week.<br>NamasteFranceshttp://blogforth.com/2008/11/16/sunday-scribblings-stranger/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37061286675363939592008-11-15T19:49:00.000-08:002008-11-15T19:49:00.000-08:00Time can do that - strangers to friends and back a...Time can do that - strangers to friends and back again. Nice work!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45075826201287390222008-11-15T17:01:00.000-08:002008-11-15T17:01:00.000-08:00nice piece. It is always hard to ignore when bein...nice piece. It is always hard to ignore when being drawn.myrtle beached whalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18338457419555984753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62992388634831561492008-11-15T15:21:00.000-08:002008-11-15T15:21:00.000-08:00Very nicely done!Very nicely done!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27297962060959127012008-11-15T14:54:00.001-08:002008-11-15T14:54:00.001-08:00Lovely piece!Lovely piece!Lillyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08065006273091905792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23871955881158204322008-11-15T14:54:00.000-08:002008-11-15T14:54:00.000-08:00Simply beautifulSimply beautifulkeithsramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90518211871883329282008-11-15T14:37:00.000-08:002008-11-15T14:37:00.000-08:00Always those reminders of things we try not to rem...Always those reminders of things we try not to remember.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41979323440306183012008-11-15T14:06:00.000-08:002008-11-15T14:06:00.000-08:00Embracing while trying to escape by ignoring. That...Embracing while trying to escape by ignoring. <br><br>That is so beautiful, so very true.<br><br>And I loved your image of the letter beside the poem.<br><br>Very powerful. And very moving.Jeaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17482528482559445943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10914215979684610082008-11-15T13:47:00.000-08:002008-11-15T13:47:00.000-08:00Love that image of the flowers at the beginning!An...Love that image of the flowers at the beginning!<br><br>Another intriguing poem!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54717758069049481212008-11-15T12:52:00.000-08:002008-11-15T12:52:00.000-08:00They say time heals all wounds, but it also pulls ...They say time heals all wounds, but it also pulls us apart, changes us, and shapes us. Interesting take on the prompt, G.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36256223439063013152008-11-15T08:45:00.000-08:002008-11-15T08:45:00.000-08:00Nice piece of writing. BJNice piece of writing. BJB. Roanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73757232388343912182008-11-15T08:24:00.000-08:002008-11-15T08:24:00.000-08:00very nice! :)very nice! :)~*sis*~http://www.blogger.com/profile/00198638022437836488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34477570963661007442008-11-15T07:56:00.000-08:002008-11-15T07:56:00.000-08:00thats one situation I hate to be in cos I have had...thats one situation I hate to be in cos I have had enough of it already :(Arvhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00537617826418052413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39915001703491597172008-11-15T06:52:00.000-08:002008-11-15T06:52:00.000-08:00We are often pulled this way and that.We are often pulled this way and that.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32765557500728802902008-11-15T06:12:00.000-08:002008-11-15T06:12:00.000-08:00well said, appreciated!wishes!devikawell said, appreciated!<br><br>wishes!<br>devikaDevikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com