tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2877153973278256612..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: misting marshland-----Sunday Scribblingsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54733433758398401442008-04-21T18:38:00.000-07:002008-04-21T18:38:00.000-07:00"Why can't I keep my mind composed...&quo..."Why can't I keep my mind composed..."<br><br>Indeed.<br><br>Great take on the prompt.<br><br>Blessings,<br>Linda - Nickers and Ink<br><br><br><a href="http://nickersandinkblog.blogspot.com/2008/04/on-guard-limericks-homegrown-for-hearts.html" rel="nofollow">ON GUARD, at Nickers and Ink</a>LN- Nickers and Inkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14891624164014505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90869746421587170762008-04-20T20:59:00.000-07:002008-04-20T20:59:00.000-07:00I love the lakes of the soul image!I love the lakes of the soul image!CHEFDRUCKhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01581859830585809291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33663175834151095592008-04-20T15:49:00.000-07:002008-04-20T15:49:00.000-07:00Nice work, as usual. Lovely layers and an all-cons...Nice work, as usual. Lovely layers and an all-consuming question. Good writing!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7586051196613272592008-04-20T11:29:00.000-07:002008-04-20T11:29:00.000-07:00I like your poem, gautami.I like your poem, gautami.ian russellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11106519805045337505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4088910570162649882008-04-20T05:31:00.000-07:002008-04-20T05:31:00.000-07:00You and your poems are always composed!I like thes...You and your poems are always composed!<br><br>I like these lines, <br><br>"cooling my soul <br>like mist in marshland<br>songs of your spirit <br>stain the lakes of my heart"Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76497710068038120362008-04-19T20:50:00.000-07:002008-04-19T20:50:00.000-07:00I keep returning to the image of "lakes of my...I keep returning to the image of "lakes of my heart". It is so mysterious.AnnieElfhttp://inmidreamz.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71307996113593622002008-04-19T17:54:00.000-07:002008-04-19T17:54:00.000-07:00Little wonder you can't keep you mind composed...Little wonder you can't keep you mind composed...it's floating everywhere!! This is really wonderful.Sherry/Cheriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08271529958269038071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53230353609040770182008-04-19T17:35:00.000-07:002008-04-19T17:35:00.000-07:00"How can you catch a cloud and pin it down?&q..."How can you catch a cloud and pin it down?" The mind is a variable not a constant. Enjoy composing in such a fluid world of ideas. That is the key to the mystery of the universe. Questions! <br><br>Interesting!<br><br>GemmaGreyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7341526591984074752008-04-19T11:57:00.000-07:002008-04-19T11:57:00.000-07:00you always asking for a way to be firmly roooted.....you always asking for a way to be firmly roooted..arboledanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89748220243597204202008-04-19T10:46:00.000-07:002008-04-19T10:46:00.000-07:00some things are too deep to grasp...beautifully wr...some things are too deep to grasp...<br>beautifully written!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85182082908211621822008-04-19T10:07:00.000-07:002008-04-19T10:07:00.000-07:00like mist in marshland--what a beautiful line from...like mist in marshland--what a beautiful line from a beauitful poem!Billyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24776991731169822062008-04-19T07:09:00.000-07:002008-04-19T07:09:00.000-07:00I love the descriptions in the opening--nicely don...I love the descriptions in the opening--nicely donesagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13987948424451854642008-04-19T05:24:00.000-07:002008-04-19T05:24:00.000-07:00touching indeed, gautami, and beautifully written....touching indeed, gautami, and beautifully written.Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55270278298537564302008-04-19T04:41:00.000-07:002008-04-19T04:41:00.000-07:00"songs of your spirit stain the lakes of my h..."songs of your spirit <br>stain the lakes of my heart"<br><br>What a beautiful line! I like this contemplative poem!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9289203873862800012008-04-18T22:35:00.000-07:002008-04-18T22:35:00.000-07:00Interesting and descriptive. I really enjoyed read...Interesting and descriptive. I really enjoyed reading this poem. <br><br>www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79160112504416869762008-04-18T19:24:00.000-07:002008-04-18T19:24:00.000-07:00I would really like to know this too! Very thought...I would really like to know this too! Very thought-provoking.susiejhttp://www.susiej.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55513326889778208252008-04-18T15:22:00.000-07:002008-04-18T15:22:00.000-07:00It is sad. We ride the winds of entropy, singing m...It is sad. We ride the winds of entropy, singing majestically and painting the sky. Hope has to come from outside this realm, that's for sure.Lilibethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45926743004790912842008-04-18T14:56:00.000-07:002008-04-18T14:56:00.000-07:00It fools with the emotions is that bad or good I d...It fools with the emotions is that bad or good I don't know.<br><br>Hauntingly beautiful as always.<br><br>"Don't look on the bright side, there's too much shine, Stand in the shadows where you can clearly see."Stevehttp://rainbowsreflectraysofthesun.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74382692621172566322008-04-18T14:55:00.000-07:002008-04-18T14:55:00.000-07:00Your mind sounded pretty composed to me! Nice one ...Your mind sounded pretty composed to me! Nice one Gautamikeith hillmanhttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/2008/04/composed.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13444805520127473922008-04-18T14:26:00.000-07:002008-04-18T14:26:00.000-07:00Haunting imagery Tami! We all just fake being comp...Haunting imagery Tami! We all just fake being composed. lolTammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67741913351238171062008-04-18T13:40:00.000-07:002008-04-18T13:40:00.000-07:00The mysteries of the universe tend to be reflected...The mysteries of the universe tend to be reflected in the personal. This is a lovely poem.Granny Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44566276695866513982008-04-18T12:56:00.000-07:002008-04-18T12:56:00.000-07:00This reminds me of sitting in my office on damp ni...This reminds me of sitting in my office on damp nights with the window behind me open to the breezes. Every once in a while, I'd feel a cool wet breath on my bare neck, and I'd feel touched by ghosts and souls and beautiful quiet.Cherylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09802599080115527191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60960189771584494062008-04-18T12:37:00.000-07:002008-04-18T12:37:00.000-07:00I love your writing..keep them comingI love your writing..keep them comingNasraiamnasra.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57700205713020836802008-04-18T12:35:00.000-07:002008-04-18T12:35:00.000-07:00I really like the imagery you paint...I really like the imagery you paint...Jo Anne O.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15893357205938906463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45866081174145123492008-04-18T12:28:00.000-07:002008-04-18T12:28:00.000-07:00I love your idea here! well said, too. :)I love your idea here! well said, too. :)J. 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