tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2860731905013172722..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: deep watersgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-92016421031142487082012-06-25T09:25:42.268-07:002012-06-25T09:25:42.268-07:00Mysterious writing so we can all imagine our own s...Mysterious writing so we can all imagine our own scenarios.<br><br>You really excel at this style of writing.<br><br>I love how you do this.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11381170601250147862012-06-15T06:46:39.221-07:002012-06-15T06:46:39.221-07:00Gautami,Read 2 poems now. Though both seem to have...Gautami,<br><br>Read 2 poems now. Though both seem to have commonality - Love, but differ a lot.<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49708534971775972082012-06-14T15:31:38.146-07:002012-06-14T15:31:38.146-07:00sweet escape. sweet surrender. nicely done!sweet escape. sweet surrender. nicely done!anitamombanitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03705021153044549156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38915817523134484122012-06-13T22:10:31.455-07:002012-06-13T22:10:31.455-07:00You quench the thirst of grey cells... imagination...You quench the thirst of grey cells... imagination....I couldn't hold myself from following your blog...Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62919413078825626982012-06-13T15:12:45.161-07:002012-06-13T15:12:45.161-07:00Sounds like revenge is best served cold indeed. I ...Sounds like revenge is best served cold indeed. I also hear a note of Medea in this. The ending is chilling.chazinatorhttp://metanoeticpoetics.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30155550193495211742012-06-13T13:15:28.194-07:002012-06-13T13:15:28.194-07:00I read this as a metaphor for the ending of a rela...I read this as a metaphor for the ending of a relationship. You've done a good job of creating atmosphere and a bit of mystery. Enjoyed it, Gautami.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16827696041262745042012-06-12T18:35:48.369-07:002012-06-12T18:35:48.369-07:00well-written poem and you paint wonderful images w...well-written poem and you paint wonderful images with your words....joannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77572886501339537372012-06-12T18:05:15.891-07:002012-06-12T18:05:15.891-07:00This oozes a desperate strength and a promise of n...This oozes a desperate strength and a promise of not giving up. Love that part in the end with the quotation marks, wow...you hit it out of the park.Herotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61282764838661699092012-06-11T18:21:19.763-07:002012-06-11T18:21:19.763-07:00A great vignette, beautifully written.A great vignette, beautifully written.Walt Wojtanikhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02723314300320671675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76845431581250767922012-06-11T08:59:04.024-07:002012-06-11T08:59:04.024-07:00Loved that this can be interpreted in many ways, t...Loved that this can be interpreted in many ways, there in lies the beauty of it.Vikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37379639402373601362012-06-11T06:58:16.973-07:002012-06-11T06:58:16.973-07:00Nice one, Gautami.Love the photo, too.=)Nice one, Gautami.<br>Love the photo, too.<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56391814079186256222012-06-11T05:21:46.877-07:002012-06-11T05:21:46.877-07:00I love the ambiguity. Excellent write, Gautami.I love the ambiguity. Excellent write, Gautami.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55451955793944771022012-06-11T05:10:38.049-07:002012-06-11T05:10:38.049-07:00I love the images I see when I read this poem.I love the images I see when I read this poem.Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25799800037387580252012-06-11T01:15:22.374-07:002012-06-11T01:15:22.374-07:00Very deep food for thought on this lovely poem!Very deep food for thought on this lovely poem!Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75836784981846191102012-06-10T20:56:31.093-07:002012-06-10T20:56:31.093-07:00There is definitely mystery...perhaps poetic justi...There is definitely mystery...perhaps poetic justice to see the one forsaking being swallowed in deep water.Susie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61243499596555346172012-06-10T17:42:52.309-07:002012-06-10T17:42:52.309-07:00Oh, I so love that you picked this photo of mine t...Oh, I so love that you picked this photo of mine to use with the wordle words this week...they really fit the image amazingly well. This is such a sensory piece and your closing stanza in quotations is very effective...brings your poem another whole layer of meaning. Great job!Hannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-125024683761038842012-06-10T16:38:51.784-07:002012-06-10T16:38:51.784-07:00Are you that vessel?~AmesAre you that vessel?~AmesAmeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37745936647970549852012-06-10T16:05:21.289-07:002012-06-10T16:05:21.289-07:00Yes, some mystery here. I could feel the mud, and ...Yes, some mystery here. I could feel the mud, and the poem made me wonder about the story behind it.Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89070928087779843252012-06-10T15:59:13.848-07:002012-06-10T15:59:13.848-07:00Sad and poignant, with a hint of darkness in the f...Sad and poignant, with a hint of darkness in the final, italicized lines. Did the ship sink? And did the narrator derive some sinister satisfaction from that? Many unanswered questions here...Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.com/2012/06/10/willow/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38539783522792465472012-06-10T12:59:42.003-07:002012-06-10T12:59:42.003-07:00I enjoyed the mystery in this. Lovely image painti...I enjoyed the mystery in this. Lovely image painting as well.Peggyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32121305474797160682012-06-10T12:13:44.248-07:002012-06-10T12:13:44.248-07:00Interesting poem. Is the vessel and person drowned...Interesting poem. Is the vessel and person drowned or have they gone to sea?<br><br>~Naila Moon<br><br>http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/06/having-it-alla-story-106-words-only.htmlNaila Moonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14085797149191658262noreply@blogger.com