tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2659373238621627432..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: patterns don't free usgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68234064401688337932013-04-21T06:53:27.309-07:002013-04-21T06:53:27.309-07:00You sweep us up to this imagined place and make it...You sweep us up to this imagined place and make it realChris Lawrencehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82416918874167392982013-04-20T18:25:15.034-07:002013-04-20T18:25:15.034-07:00I loved your word imagery...(and your title) I loved your word imagery...(and your title) susan m hinckleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10073318305866251569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39366810765387416942013-04-19T14:31:14.111-07:002013-04-19T14:31:14.111-07:00Lovely poem !Lovely poem !ayalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73069336701067091152013-04-19T03:59:36.489-07:002013-04-19T03:59:36.489-07:00Hello, thank you for reading my blog. I love your...Hello, thank you for reading my blog. I love your rooted poem..a theme for this day, a fundamental truth. Your mix of nature and the need to find meaning out of words is beautiful.. thank youTracy Kuhn Greenleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17422064776587522574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26355599738925793852013-04-18T13:10:05.909-07:002013-04-18T13:10:05.909-07:00hi! thanks for stopping by my blog. Sadly I seem t...hi! thanks for stopping by my blog. Sadly I seem to have mistakenly deleted your comment while trying to move it out of my spam box... much appreciated anyway! :)<br><br>Great stuff right here by the way! <br><br>Cheers!<br>FKfestivalkinghttp://festivalking.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44098653218022111552013-04-18T04:10:16.676-07:002013-04-18T04:10:16.676-07:00I like this very much, it is very thought-provokin...I like this very much, it is very thought-provoking.<br><br>The line:<br>escaped words freed me too,<br>really made me sit up and take notice!Dave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71686704165656400182013-04-17T13:11:22.081-07:002013-04-17T13:11:22.081-07:00lovely free words! and thanks for your nice commen...lovely free words! and thanks for your nice comments! Have a splendid day!Kathe W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82274895887183769442013-04-17T10:24:10.233-07:002013-04-17T10:24:10.233-07:00Marvelous!! Love the swirl of words!!"in the ...Marvelous!! Love the swirl of words!!<br>"in the moorings and bearings<br>our feet have to dance their fill" <br>Deeply thought out lines!!<br><br>So rooted and yet so free!!Nankahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37858909667699915612013-04-17T09:13:41.329-07:002013-04-17T09:13:41.329-07:00Amazing. And fun, too.Amazing. And fun, too.mizquicklyhttp://mizquickly.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66268464529140512082013-04-16T21:16:46.389-07:002013-04-16T21:16:46.389-07:00Very cute poem, imagining the words flying free, p...Very cute poem, imagining the words flying free, playing among themselves on the ground. There's a truly a great feeling of ease and freedom if one can have such an attitude.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69032033376216785142013-04-16T18:28:01.381-07:002013-04-16T18:28:01.381-07:00Deeply wonderful, a nice piece, written quite well...Deeply wonderful, a nice piece, written quite well.Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79959556155326262712013-04-16T16:33:49.926-07:002013-04-16T16:33:49.926-07:00Words as living beings. Like the words the got fro...Words as living beings. Like the words the got frozen in the old Paul Bunyon Tales and the lumberjacks thawed them out on the wood stove. Always made me laugh to think of that.<br>Let your words be free and they will serve you.Stormcat Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60520011406463303612013-04-16T12:13:14.332-07:002013-04-16T12:13:14.332-07:00Words, don't escape you, you have a fine grasp...Words, don't escape you, you have a fine grasp over them.himani rawat nayalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08356682434301279963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66586393417871217652013-04-16T09:56:47.283-07:002013-04-16T09:56:47.283-07:00This is lovely is has such a lightness and whimsy,...This is lovely is has such a lightness and whimsy, it really has the sense of a daydreammindlovemiseryhttp://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58437061016041147132013-04-16T09:21:14.787-07:002013-04-16T09:21:14.787-07:00Quite niceQuite nicejayan edakkathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00925742328987361567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51546255975749588632013-04-15T12:27:51.019-07:002013-04-15T12:27:51.019-07:00Love the notion of a few words falling on the grou...Love the notion of a few words falling on the ground...Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42787477032932699762013-04-15T09:32:03.942-07:002013-04-15T09:32:03.942-07:00I liked this very much. (PLease switch off the dr...I liked this very much. (PLease switch off the dreaded word verification. Most bloggers have done)Trellissimohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84407226886122092682013-04-15T07:08:37.081-07:002013-04-15T07:08:37.081-07:00As always beautiful! It has been a while since Iha...As always beautiful! It has been a while since Ihave read your work and I always enjoy it so much. Lisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03181439840148805466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23147037794566673332013-04-15T06:58:19.017-07:002013-04-15T06:58:19.017-07:00Such wisdom and resignation in these words ... I ...Such wisdom and resignation in these words ... I loved this write. It will be one that I return to this week to re-read and re-think. Thank you ...Susan Lindquisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40577650704264728752013-04-15T03:16:55.561-07:002013-04-15T03:16:55.561-07:00This is amazing. Impressive work with imagery and ...This is amazing. Impressive work with imagery and metaphors.. Loved it.Enigmatic Soulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12296215083187569162013-04-15T02:54:07.717-07:002013-04-15T02:54:07.717-07:00cool - this one has a nice classic feel to it -viv...cool - this one has a nice classic feel to it -vivid imagery - tight writing all around!Old Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8399774469848121322013-04-15T01:08:55.429-07:002013-04-15T01:08:55.429-07:00Deep stuff!Deep stuff!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74415943407969644732013-04-14T18:20:13.447-07:002013-04-14T18:20:13.447-07:00just beautiful love how the creation of the poem b...just beautiful<br> love how the creation of the poem becomes the poemRene Foranhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52113021759604941802013-04-14T17:20:43.390-07:002013-04-14T17:20:43.390-07:00Love it! I could imagine this poem in a most visua...Love it! <br>I could imagine this poem in a most visual way....the words on the ground, some happy and chattering like puppies, some scurrying like ants, some still like mushrooms and others inching along like caterpillars soon to transform into something other....<br>I could imagine the sounds they made......morphing in and out of connotation.....laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15038491113092244048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56598895533757766462013-04-14T15:01:36.840-07:002013-04-14T15:01:36.840-07:00Such a fun delightful poem--yet deep as well, that...Such a fun delightful poem--yet deep as well, that takes a talent to do that. Loved the image of words playing in the grass and in the sky :-)SaraVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.com