tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2426432743800165702..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: conflictgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9860570871290554322012-06-10T04:42:06.954-07:002012-06-10T04:42:06.954-07:00This is really beautiful... thank you for sharing!...This is really beautiful... thank you for sharing!<br><br><a href="http://steppingoutofthepage.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Steph @ Stepping Out of the Page</a>Stepping Out of the Pagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01525783027752072399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18606125057380829892012-06-09T08:05:09.888-07:002012-06-09T08:05:09.888-07:00Gautami,Read 5 poems now. Each one stands out and ...Gautami,<br><br>Read 5 poems now. Each one stands out and this one is the best. I hope to see your poems in English course some day.<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57326446561347063322012-06-06T10:33:20.624-07:002012-06-06T10:33:20.624-07:00This evokes a deep wound, a sadness. Why do people...This evokes a deep wound, a sadness. Why do people need to hurt one another?Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79677861749739460922012-06-06T09:12:54.868-07:002012-06-06T09:12:54.868-07:00I like this, especially the ending where you expre...I like this, especially the ending where you express your confidence that he's just being mean, but will read it again. Hope you don't really know anyone this cruel, but I sure like the write.Myrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49330009104455411482012-06-06T05:12:14.226-07:002012-06-06T05:12:14.226-07:00your earnest feelings thread ingold through out yo...your earnest feelings thread in<br>gold through out your poem/plea.<br><br>reminds me of when i allowed someone to chisel away at me.<br><br>fine poem.Paige + Shaunahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12007881602267753588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73260971863489538732012-06-06T03:12:55.038-07:002012-06-06T03:12:55.038-07:00ugh on those that live only to dismantle you know....ugh on those that live only to dismantle you know...not a nice person to have to be around...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43304061998372760202012-06-06T02:18:13.940-07:002012-06-06T02:18:13.940-07:00Love this one. It sings and it stings.Love this one. It sings and it stings.Puja Anandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02582119127299167397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47428156952699248212012-06-05T20:41:03.675-07:002012-06-05T20:41:03.675-07:00chisel awaywhy did you bruise the earthyour mind c...chisel away<br>why did you bruise the earth<br>your mind crashes to ground<br>we both burst into the sky<br>wreck my working week<br><br>Loved the poem, these lines most of all.ninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35405820209111977062012-06-05T06:41:05.579-07:002012-06-05T06:41:05.579-07:00A beautiful capturing of the pain of conflict....g...A beautiful capturing of the pain of conflict....great writing Gautami! :-)Carrie Burtthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31614454509498675392012-06-04T16:14:15.724-07:002012-06-04T16:14:15.724-07:00Wow! One of the harshest accusations I've ever...Wow! One of the harshest accusations I've ever read... It is your life's mission... Well done!Kim Nelsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48769620619963234192012-06-04T15:48:26.927-07:002012-06-04T15:48:26.927-07:00What a crashing sound to the ground ~ I would st...What a crashing sound to the ground ~ I would stay away from him or her ~Heavenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62029214511926990282012-06-04T15:25:47.138-07:002012-06-04T15:25:47.138-07:00A beautiful piece...so moving.A beautiful piece...so moving.Susie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17499785483942276262012-06-04T13:51:02.268-07:002012-06-04T13:51:02.268-07:00I just love this stanza:"the ground splits yo...I just love this stanza:<br><br>"the ground splits <br>you crumple that paper in your palm<br>drop it into that slit<br>why did you bruise the earth?"<br><br>Excellent poem!!Hannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69668182108262889662012-06-04T10:13:56.936-07:002012-06-04T10:13:56.936-07:00I can feel the emotions in this poem~The dance of ...I can feel the emotions in this poem~<br>The dance of intrusion...powerful and painful...<br>Well DoneEllahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71736952018161310832012-06-04T09:58:56.052-07:002012-06-04T09:58:56.052-07:00This is nice!:)This is nice!:)Tarang Sinhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63929961780147377492012-06-04T04:17:48.641-07:002012-06-04T04:17:48.641-07:00beautiful, your words dig into the heart of the re...beautiful, your words dig into the heart of the reader.Laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56179920201920383452012-06-04T00:17:27.287-07:002012-06-04T00:17:27.287-07:00There're people who thrive doing nasty things ...There're people who thrive doing nasty things to other people. This is part of life's drama. Great write Gautama!<br><br>Hankkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75134879676091502172012-06-03T22:40:18.951-07:002012-06-03T22:40:18.951-07:00Inriguing.Inriguing.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32418699374196657042012-06-03T17:58:43.138-07:002012-06-03T17:58:43.138-07:00I tight well-written poem, interesting and engross...I tight well-written poem, interesting and engrossing. Thank you.<br><br>http://leapinelephants.blogspot.ca/2012/06/deep-tissue-bruising.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25090647599707734332012-06-03T16:24:45.853-07:002012-06-03T16:24:45.853-07:00This tells a story very well. One can imagine the ...This tells a story very well. One can imagine the facial expressions. The closing lines are so poignant.Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17490395373620452932012-06-03T13:29:16.300-07:002012-06-03T13:29:16.300-07:00Awww... I hope this is all poetic licence and not ...Awww... I hope this is all poetic licence and not your reality. <br>Sometimes people do take great delight in crushing us.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23872464338496883292012-06-03T12:25:41.692-07:002012-06-03T12:25:41.692-07:00I love the progression of this poem, Gautami. Well...I love the progression of this poem, Gautami. Well done.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64388762220710590602012-06-03T11:54:49.968-07:002012-06-03T11:54:49.968-07:00The struggles of life are truly challenging, good ...The struggles of life are truly challenging, good write.paulo guimaraeshttp://thewaytoshaolin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com