tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2340369391464505813..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: the air hisses and cracklesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68603290862161589462009-06-04T18:51:33.712-07:002009-06-04T18:51:33.712-07:00..intense & thought provoking ..many thanks .......intense & thought provoking ..many thanks ..zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.com/2009/05/denouementosi.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59735711412143253172009-06-04T06:42:43.823-07:002009-06-04T06:42:43.823-07:00I can relate. Good job.KatI can relate. Good job.<br><br>KatPoetikathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10562467283123909892009-06-03T03:21:31.405-07:002009-06-03T03:21:31.405-07:00You write harshness, you write cold and dark, so b...You write harshness, you write cold and dark, so beautifully...Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68919499803207823832009-06-02T19:45:39.087-07:002009-06-02T19:45:39.087-07:00Fire can be cleansing. Water extinguishes. Two ve...Fire can be cleansing. Water extinguishes. Two very powerful elements at play.<br><br>Nothing but hard ground. What happened to the anger?gabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78766164831664920122009-06-01T19:35:15.304-07:002009-06-01T19:35:15.304-07:00Love that brilliant ending Guatami.Lots of ways to...Love that brilliant ending Guatami.<br>Lots of ways to read this. Excellent.Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24279335368984174152009-06-01T10:15:13.387-07:002009-06-01T10:15:13.387-07:00Strong write - nothing but hard ground is a fine e...Strong write - nothing but hard ground is a fine ending -Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23494715264452439612009-06-01T08:00:53.104-07:002009-06-01T08:00:53.104-07:00I love the acetylene fire of these words! But you...I love the acetylene fire of these words! But your summary in the last lines is really beautiful. It resolves the anger and highlights its pointlessness.MichaelOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89746181107939767772009-06-01T02:22:58.163-07:002009-06-01T02:22:58.163-07:00such strong words, "my anger pours forth veno...such strong words, "my anger pours forth venom" a great way to begin and an amazing ending.Destineehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11579580954567322817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39649064420494732472009-06-01T00:27:42.250-07:002009-06-01T00:27:42.250-07:00Wow!Who rattled your cage?Wow!<br>Who rattled your cage?Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31494090156057911282009-05-31T19:12:41.648-07:002009-05-31T19:12:41.648-07:00Excellent way to express your anger. Hope the rai...Excellent way to express your anger. Hope the rains doused and refreshed your mind. If not, time can proceed to heal.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50066364085031391352009-05-31T17:07:09.330-07:002009-05-31T17:07:09.330-07:00Hi GT, this is another one (I counted 32 posts) us...Hi GT, this is another one (I counted 32 posts) using the 'hated fire.' If your friend did indeed burn in the car crash then I don't blame you at all. <br>One can never forget a death like that, of burning to death. Way back when I was young a friend of mine died in a gasoline station fire. <br>He worked there. A customer lit a cigarette and the whole station went up in flames.<br>I don't know if the customer survived or not. All I remember is that I lost a very good friend all for the ignorance of one.<br>I will never forget or forgive.<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81167336147947759542009-05-31T16:17:13.417-07:002009-05-31T16:17:13.417-07:00Indeed! Such fires do bake the earth.Indeed! Such fires do bake the earth.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9930737864343639832009-05-31T13:02:04.316-07:002009-05-31T13:02:04.316-07:00My goodness,you sound cross!Brilliant poem.My goodness,you sound cross!Brilliant poem.roseyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12593480630933210147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30853822918641160482009-05-31T10:58:32.534-07:002009-05-31T10:58:32.534-07:00sounds like a angry sky or a person lashing out, j...sounds like a angry sky or a person lashing out, just like weather, we release our emotions and sometimes clears out what makes us unhappylissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/2009/05/memory-of-today.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69360163789100483262009-05-31T09:04:58.481-07:002009-05-31T09:04:58.481-07:00Wow, are you writing for Zeus--or one of the light...Wow, are you writing for Zeus--or one of the lightning gods?sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26089452817198967952009-05-31T07:14:33.900-07:002009-05-31T07:14:33.900-07:00really thought provoking, gautami. If the fire is ...really thought provoking, gautami. If the fire is allowed to burn out rather than doused prematurely, then the ground might be cracked and fallow and ready for seed and new growth.Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60907497888440155052009-05-31T02:32:34.274-07:002009-05-31T02:32:34.274-07:00Woo! What an extended metaphor linking fire and an...Woo! What an extended metaphor linking fire and anger! But "hard ground", insensitive and impenetrable, is like the final, powerful "crunch line". Dynamic!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75710173812442457842009-05-31T01:29:45.872-07:002009-05-31T01:29:45.872-07:00Rain can make a nice denouement, washing everythin...Rain can make a nice denouement, washing everything away.<br>Excellent poem!Edward S Gaulthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32845575534372775622009-05-31T01:28:34.475-07:002009-05-31T01:28:34.475-07:00Wow. This touched me.Wow. This touched me.Jeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23918174117718867772009-05-31T00:47:22.167-07:002009-05-31T00:47:22.167-07:00An angry poem today. It's good.An angry poem today. It's good.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com