tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2301843033682064956..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: deathly adventuregautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25031520413572875142009-11-07T06:03:56.271-08:002009-11-07T06:03:56.271-08:00Love the perfect harmony with hallpween!Love the perfect harmony with hallpween!Pattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87930077871347832522009-11-05T17:28:58.424-08:002009-11-05T17:28:58.424-08:00you barely notice the shift in time...I really enj...you barely notice the shift in time...<br><br>I really enjoyed the portayal of Death as a woman, in her twirling skirts, beguiling, seductive, playful and very deadly.<br><br>A great piece! Thank youendurogirlhttp://endurogirl.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23764039388609729522009-11-04T19:24:58.731-08:002009-11-04T19:24:58.731-08:00Tami, you have a thriller here! Reading it I didn...Tami, you have a thriller here! Reading it I didn't think of Halloween but surely it fits.<br><br>I liked the last verse, throughout the others I was thinking your writer would escape death. Now after the dripping and soul escaping all that will be left on the road is a little white cross.<br><br>Sorry I am so late in coming. I celebrated my Birthday four days this weekend and only posted. Now I have the Dickens to catch up. I may not. My birthday running away adventure is being posted on my other blog.<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22677485742447768032009-11-03T09:59:17.977-08:002009-11-03T09:59:17.977-08:00lovely post!!i love all the halloween posts..lovely post!!<br><br>i love all the halloween posts..Shraddha@theselfloveprojecthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03301797813495991554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12892347200158455092009-11-03T09:13:18.563-08:002009-11-03T09:13:18.563-08:00Oh Tami, this is really very powerful. A wonderful...Oh Tami, this is really very powerful. A wonderful take on the prompt.<br><br><br><br>love,MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79512492396029666902009-11-02T22:39:44.806-08:002009-11-02T22:39:44.806-08:00Oh wow, this is intense.I hope finally for me it w...Oh wow, this is intense.<br>I hope finally for me it will be a gentle voice... ;)indicaspecieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22591817198140736442009-11-02T19:17:23.460-08:002009-11-02T19:17:23.460-08:00your words always leave their mark !your words always leave their mark !PS : De-abbreviate as you like ;)http://www.blogger.com/profile/03244361418371176194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85713901222369886132009-11-02T18:48:29.797-08:002009-11-02T18:48:29.797-08:00me thinks this is a bit intense,it twas the last l...me thinks this is a bit intense,<br>it twas the last line that made me feel so.Perfect for Halloween and shift of time....Tammie Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37763989734241172462009-11-02T13:26:17.268-08:002009-11-02T13:26:17.268-08:00BTW, I've been reading you regularly again and...BTW, I've been reading you regularly again and posting very often for poetry train and Sun. Scribblings. I miss your comments.Gelhttp://soulcrayons.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15265411794160821632009-11-02T05:51:23.920-08:002009-11-02T05:51:23.920-08:00original way to say that....!!original way to say that....!!ifhttp://www.wordiminuta.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6192403023232039812009-11-01T20:34:28.832-08:002009-11-01T20:34:28.832-08:00This certainly fits the Halloween time shift.Gave ...This certainly fits the Halloween time shift.<br><br>Gave me bits of shivers reading it.Maggiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61747946211094903562009-11-01T20:08:11.010-08:002009-11-01T20:08:11.010-08:00Death as the feminine . . . simply delightful. My...Death as the feminine . . . simply delightful. My first time here, but I'll be back.<br><br>Miss DMiss Demure Restrainthttp://missdemurerestraint.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51710461959995463402009-11-01T19:28:32.183-08:002009-11-01T19:28:32.183-08:00That last stanza jabbed me hard. Haunting writing....That last stanza jabbed me hard. Haunting writing.Gelhttp://soulcrayons.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82371456363103407002009-11-01T19:27:01.395-08:002009-11-01T19:27:01.395-08:00I like how you portrayed the randomness of it - de...I like how you portrayed the randomness of it - death dancing through the streets and pointing a finger. this one, that one. Very dark.Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48515151413453932332009-11-01T18:08:04.426-08:002009-11-01T18:08:04.426-08:00I was particularly drawn to the permanence of: It ...I was particularly drawn to the permanence of: It happens this way. Leaves no room for a question. Very penetrating!Jukotahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00103565958637835237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70421412333352318922009-11-01T15:38:38.000-08:002009-11-01T15:38:38.000-08:00From the cauldron to the fire - wonderful!From the cauldron to the fire - wonderful!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63200153756160722322009-11-01T14:02:58.492-08:002009-11-01T14:02:58.492-08:00Spooky good. PiratesSpooky good. <br><br><a href="http://thomg.blogspot.com/2009/11/sunday-scribblings-adventure.html" rel="nofollow">Pirates</a>ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46472779371216934572009-11-01T10:38:37.201-08:002009-11-01T10:38:37.201-08:00Wonderful! You made death so sinister and calculat...Wonderful! You made death so sinister and calculating...I loved this one.Sweetest in the Galehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52832793028059788792009-11-01T09:14:39.306-08:002009-11-01T09:14:39.306-08:00This gave me the chills... what great description ...This gave me the chills... what great description throughout. So many good lines (I see some of my faves already mentioned!).Shadowplayhttp://shadowplay1.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29521635661261595042009-11-01T07:41:17.075-08:002009-11-01T07:41:17.075-08:00ooooooh, shiverd the woods I live in. Old Grizz c...ooooooh, shiverd the woods I live in. Old Grizz crawled into his cave and will stay there all winter.gs battyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32033116538887005942009-11-01T05:24:43.935-08:002009-11-01T05:24:43.935-08:00As I read the conclusion, I thought such deaths ar...As I read the conclusion, I thought such deaths are not always physical. This is tantalizing.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50755034931218120902009-11-01T05:01:17.883-08:002009-11-01T05:01:17.883-08:00Great post for Halloween. Vivid images too. We s...Great post for Halloween. Vivid images too. We should not taunt the immortality of death. It comes when we least expect it.Loch Robhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13182946114194323952009-11-01T04:24:38.521-08:002009-11-01T04:24:38.521-08:00eerie rendition of the prompt but it's timely ...eerie rendition of the prompt but it's timely as it is Halloween!<br><br>sudden death is a real shift in time, from life to death it is!Amity Mehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71093131235448220132009-11-01T01:35:36.966-07:002009-11-01T01:35:36.966-07:00Ouch! This was a good scary post, and death as a w...Ouch! This was a good scary post, and death as a woman, now that's truly scary.<br><br><br>Join the fun at <a href="http://acrosticonly.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Acrostic Only!</a>Amiashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24111370098112761522009-11-01T01:08:19.286-07:002009-11-01T01:08:19.286-07:00i like this portrayal of death!eerie, yet that per...i like this portrayal of death!<br>eerie, yet that perfect piece! :)<br><br>good one! belated happy halloween! :)Leohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09351446518713188860noreply@blogger.com