tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post2200795923890814154..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: echoes reverbategautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38179798297126720482008-10-29T21:18:00.000-07:002008-10-29T21:18:00.000-07:00I didn't see it "before" but I like ...I didn't see it "before" but I like the "after" a lot. The echo/repeat of words and phrases seems apropos of an inability to express oneself - sort of getting stuck on an idea and not getting past it.sister AEhttp://havingwrit.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60496641348403392952008-10-27T07:12:00.000-07:002008-10-27T07:12:00.000-07:00By echoing "when you least expect it" yo...By echoing "when you least expect it" you reinforce the feeling of vulnerability.yuzublizzardhttp://yuzublizzard.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39726048688191315452008-10-25T03:54:00.000-07:002008-10-25T03:54:00.000-07:00It is surprising...how the poem seems so beautiful...It is surprising...how the poem seems so beautiful both ways. You do have a exquisite way with words. You have me hooked to your blog now!Shravyahttp://www.theviewspaper.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38307871403732474182008-10-25T03:10:00.000-07:002008-10-25T03:10:00.000-07:00oh man...now i can have another hundred reverse po...oh man...now i can have another hundred reverse posts :)<br><br>thank you Gautami! and where did u disappear uh? :(<br><br>hugs.Ghost Particlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61844357269703719082008-10-24T17:25:00.000-07:002008-10-24T17:25:00.000-07:00yeah, that describes how my life was behaving a fe...yeah, that describes how my life was behaving a few weeks ago...Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40178023017053270092008-10-24T15:43:00.000-07:002008-10-24T15:43:00.000-07:00Hi Gautami, I see you've reversed the order of...Hi Gautami, I see you've reversed the order of lines so they meet in the middle, I think it's quite a creative attempt but I still think it might work better to simply repeat the first half in the second half. But well done, at least you've got your full poem.Sweet Talking Guy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35864592178047922832008-10-24T14:15:00.000-07:002008-10-24T14:15:00.000-07:00me likey!me likey!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70611443279872926122008-10-24T09:45:00.000-07:002008-10-24T09:45:00.000-07:00Unusual and rather unsettling. good work and great...Unusual and rather unsettling. good work and great ingenuity.<br>A.- A - C -http://www.blogger.com/profile/04450741254982411491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87763458128327870022008-10-24T08:47:00.000-07:002008-10-24T08:47:00.000-07:00This is a really cool idea, switching things aroun...This is a really cool idea, switching things around like this. I'd like to try this with one of my own poems.Nathanhttp://disorder1313.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54041870692083418352008-10-24T07:35:00.000-07:002008-10-24T07:35:00.000-07:00You are playing with the stanzas. Beautiful, da.You are playing with the stanzas. Beautiful, da.cyclopsevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9028834949365668962008-10-23T22:46:00.000-07:002008-10-23T22:46:00.000-07:00Super. I love how you took the concept internally...Super. I love how you took the concept internally - you're a poet of my own heart.Lisa G.http://www.thebirdsings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34563894149967819192008-10-23T19:42:00.000-07:002008-10-23T19:42:00.000-07:00Trying to get the words out, but they stick; you&#...Trying to get the words out, but they stick; you're left with a staccato stutter of repeated syllables - only half-said words that ring and resonate.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5995664645950130892008-10-23T16:28:00.000-07:002008-10-23T16:28:00.000-07:00Hi Gautami, I agree with you, this is only half a ...Hi Gautami, I agree with you, this is only half a poem. What you shoud do is take the forty-nine words and repeat them and then just like the title says it will echo!<br><br>Two halves make a whole (poem)!Sweet Talking Guy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13711854804288452392008-10-23T15:58:00.000-07:002008-10-23T15:58:00.000-07:00You have a great way with words!sometimes we all s...You have a great way with words!<br>sometimes we all say the wrong words but it is are intentions that is important are they good or bad.Art and Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59978439393091869182008-10-23T14:58:00.000-07:002008-10-23T14:58:00.000-07:00Interesting how aphasia is set in contrast to echo...Interesting how aphasia is set in contrast to echolalia.Philip Thrifthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66396440192235251042008-10-23T10:56:00.000-07:002008-10-23T10:56:00.000-07:00Vivid imagery - I like this one, for sure!Vivid imagery - I like this one, for sure!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19533033284145915662008-10-23T10:52:00.000-07:002008-10-23T10:52:00.000-07:00I second Annamari - love that ending. Are you sure...I second Annamari - love that ending. Are you sure this is half a poem? Feels full to me...!!!poetwithadayjobhttp://poetwithadayjob.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74500017422548689982008-10-23T10:23:00.000-07:002008-10-23T10:23:00.000-07:00Very accurate description. The words cut you but y...Very accurate description. The words cut you but you can never fling a sword back.<br><br>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33663368807445039292008-10-23T08:33:00.000-07:002008-10-23T08:33:00.000-07:00"aphasia sets in whenwords gets stuck in the ..."aphasia sets in when<br>words gets stuck in the throat<br>neither going in nor coming out"<br><br>it is a great final...I like itAnnamarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24900481658928765432008-10-23T07:43:00.000-07:002008-10-23T07:43:00.000-07:00Who was it? I'll put them straight!Who was it? I'll put them straight!anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5483145310400243752008-10-23T06:13:00.000-07:002008-10-23T06:13:00.000-07:00Really really like your poems!!!Really really like your poems!!!Jeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.com