tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1947373897839400730..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: slowly building it upgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90918825746205553142009-02-05T19:29:00.000-08:002009-02-05T19:29:00.000-08:00Hi Tami,I enjoyed your haiku collection.Hi Tami,<br>I enjoyed your haiku collection.Tammyhttp://mylifeasawarrior.blogspot.com/2009/02/osi-slowly.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64439515704709651192009-02-03T16:32:00.000-08:002009-02-03T16:32:00.000-08:00All are lovely word pictures, My favourite was the...All are lovely word pictures, My favourite was the second one...I think many aliens have inhabited us in the winter :)Marianne H. Nielsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14053011503400018095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70087970148696387392009-02-03T15:16:00.000-08:002009-02-03T15:16:00.000-08:00I like all of these, many intriguing images. Perha...I like all of these, many intriguing images. Perhaps my favorite is the one that least fits the overall arc -- "dracula's daughter" such a fun nonsequitur.Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14057449282030290872009-02-03T15:05:00.000-08:002009-02-03T15:05:00.000-08:00Wow this is neat Guatami. Like how you created thi...Wow this is neat Guatami. Like how you created this delightful winter journey. I'm honored to be on your list. Thank you.Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50175193062239079082009-02-02T10:24:00.000-08:002009-02-02T10:24:00.000-08:00Clever, I like the way you used others' inspir...Clever, I like the way you used others' inspiration to write a series that so aptly describes a journey!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20891415195605538652009-02-02T10:11:00.000-08:002009-02-02T10:11:00.000-08:00..(i had to warn my inspiration not to pour itsel.....(i had to warn my inspiration not to pour itself out here)..many thanks for sharing these..zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.com/2009/01/slowly-osiprmpt-49.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61388352147248919222009-02-01T21:09:00.000-08:002009-02-01T21:09:00.000-08:00Such mystery, I like! Reminds me of the Perils of ...Such mystery, I like! Reminds me of the Perils of Pauline.fourwindshaigahttp://fourwindshaiga.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46197771184232356962009-02-01T14:11:00.000-08:002009-02-01T14:11:00.000-08:00i like your interpretation of the prompt! my favor...i like your interpretation of the prompt! my favorite is:<br>knives of icicles<br>cannot prick into<br>my sandcastle dreamsfloretahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59484822154813543942009-02-01T10:02:00.000-08:002009-02-01T10:02:00.000-08:00What a fun progression and collection of haiku!What a fun progression and collection of haiku!terichttp://teric.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28075844959813924692009-02-01T09:21:00.000-08:002009-02-01T09:21:00.000-08:00it's nice to see you get inspired by others. a...it's nice to see you get inspired by others. and these short responses appear to even have a common theme :)polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84842879197368227692009-02-01T08:22:00.000-08:002009-02-01T08:22:00.000-08:00That first one is a seamless, complete image in it...That first one is a seamless, complete image in itself. I really enjoyed all of these small breaths inward...Quiet Pathshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89053016902950257442009-02-01T08:07:00.000-08:002009-02-01T08:07:00.000-08:00'that' precipice...got me to thinking.Than...'that' precipice...got me to thinking.<br><br><br>Thanks for the progression of precipices, or is that precipii?Beth P.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-121727759064726132009-02-01T07:51:00.000-08:002009-02-01T07:51:00.000-08:00I love the progression. Nicely done!I love the progression. Nicely done!Leatherdykeukhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71957172455375736302009-02-01T07:49:00.000-08:002009-02-01T07:49:00.000-08:00Enjoyed all these little "slow" momentsEnjoyed all these little "slow" momentsDeborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69168835296709315462009-02-01T05:39:00.000-08:002009-02-01T05:39:00.000-08:00I really enjoyed the first haiku-- very meditative...I really enjoyed the first haiku-- very meditative. Some of the others show great humor. Nice progression.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/02/01/lull/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26616211395325646782009-02-01T05:23:00.000-08:002009-02-01T05:23:00.000-08:00still having fun, eh? :)nicely done!still having fun, eh? :)<br><br>nicely done!dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17977865193571866602009-02-01T04:41:00.000-08:002009-02-01T04:41:00.000-08:00These are delightful to read ... building the imag...These are delightful to read ... building the images slowly --- glad the log stopped your fall ...Amiashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39230141452685382032009-02-01T04:10:00.000-08:002009-02-01T04:10:00.000-08:00I enjoyed this progression of imagse and was glad ...I enjoyed this progression of imagse and was glad we were saved by a log in the end. Snow has a way of insisting on itself; thank goodness for the chance objects that keep us from falling into it!SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33130072094984272412009-02-01T02:58:00.000-08:002009-02-01T02:58:00.000-08:00Well aren't you fabulous! Look at that, they&#...Well aren't you fabulous! Look at that, they're delicious...good girl ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77922098553807050842009-02-01T02:01:00.000-08:002009-02-01T02:01:00.000-08:00A great selection.A great selection.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85112152186997627862009-02-01T01:22:00.000-08:002009-02-01T01:22:00.000-08:00Much inspiration is seen here.Much inspiration is seen here.Maggiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46212429243738300812009-02-01T01:12:00.000-08:002009-02-01T01:12:00.000-08:00Very Good girl.......Very Good girl.......Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32933420473870173212009-02-01T00:40:00.000-08:002009-02-01T00:40:00.000-08:00Nicely down, Guatami. I did follow your inspiratio...Nicely down, Guatami. I did follow your inspiration!WillThink4Winehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16660942367303941481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67962591896463152602009-01-31T23:51:00.000-08:002009-01-31T23:51:00.000-08:00Strong immagery.Excellent poetry.Strong immagery.<br>Excellent poetry.Edward S Gaulthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29574045961397904852009-01-31T23:33:00.000-08:002009-01-31T23:33:00.000-08:00Very nicely put.Very nicely put.venus66http://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.com