tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1931462348000973743..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: slumber: haiku-letsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83548648839665805592010-03-06T21:17:17.948-08:002010-03-06T21:17:17.948-08:00lovely:)lovely:)Yellow Tuliphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01976804180920335379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19985548300942070602010-03-03T18:45:57.477-08:002010-03-03T18:45:57.477-08:00Wonderful as always, Gautami. Triggers so many tho...Wonderful as always, Gautami. Triggers so many thoughts in my mind.Andreehttp://meeyauw.blogspot.com/2010/03/haiku-bones-sleep.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78908300071064269832010-03-02T16:28:43.943-08:002010-03-02T16:28:43.943-08:00Hiya, Dee!Hiya, Dee!Jeri Lewishttp://percybisque.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69597774566162128152010-03-02T04:01:15.708-08:002010-03-02T04:01:15.708-08:00I especially like that last one. Solitude is one ...I especially like that last one. Solitude is one of my favorite things. I confess to sighing in deep pleasure when my kids and husband head off to their school/work. Naughty me. Thank you for sharing this.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40505264179667819122010-03-02T03:30:18.440-08:002010-03-02T03:30:18.440-08:00Loved the last one the most - pursuing dreams ofte...Loved the last one the most - pursuing dreams often means aloneness :)Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61041401016048453382010-03-02T02:08:34.830-08:002010-03-02T02:08:34.830-08:00But he does comment! Nevermind. That Surpy gets ...But he does comment! Nevermind. That Surpy gets everywhere.<br><br>Haikus are an art form that has eluded me but I am happy enough that you are so skilled at it.J Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89671788090778894392010-03-01T18:57:32.894-08:002010-03-01T18:57:32.894-08:00C. Rises: It reminds me of my Seth Thomas clock to...C. Rises: It reminds me of my Seth Thomas clock too! What year is yours?Percy Bisque Silleyhttp://percybisque.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6018109262329979472010-03-01T16:11:54.241-08:002010-03-01T16:11:54.241-08:00i like this sorta writing...it is as our mind thin...i like this sorta writing...it is as our mind thinks and like the rawness of our thoughts on paper....one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/02/28/satori/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85575058342995091442010-03-01T09:39:29.755-08:002010-03-01T09:39:29.755-08:00Your poem reminds me of my kitchen clock(old Seth ...Your poem reminds me of my kitchen clock(old Seth Thomas). Ticktock. Image lets us see the next beat of your words, Well done.Cassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59865515872310233582010-03-01T06:39:21.555-08:002010-03-01T06:39:21.555-08:00Great work. Really well connected, and great cont...Great work. Really well connected, and great content.Robinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21199164318559454312010-03-01T02:49:49.679-08:002010-03-01T02:49:49.679-08:00These are woven together deftly. The last is my f...These are woven together deftly. The last is my favorite. Nice work.madelinehttp://shemakespoems.blogspot.com/2010/03/simple-machine-humming-women.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7929617468733589962010-03-01T02:28:15.931-08:002010-03-01T02:28:15.931-08:00You have created a kind of metronome effect by thr...You have created a kind of metronome effect by threading pulses from one haiku into the next! Beautiful and fascinating!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75241688949861649962010-02-28T21:07:20.537-08:002010-02-28T21:07:20.537-08:00Your expression "an ignorant mind is deliriou...Your expression "an ignorant mind is delirious in itself" is so true of life and our enjoyment of it. If only we could leave it well alone!<br><br>Lots of good stuff in here.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47757560757214934342010-02-28T19:45:40.535-08:002010-02-28T19:45:40.535-08:00it was really fun..it was really fun..shraddhahttp://www.theselfloveproject.com/2010/02/28/haiku-bones-poetry-prompt-sleep/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7560048300381441722010-02-28T19:37:03.576-08:002010-02-28T19:37:03.576-08:00I really like the way you linked these haiku toget...I really like the way you linked these haiku together, both with words and thematically.<br><br>Well done!Beccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7093612928752020332010-02-28T19:00:00.454-08:002010-02-28T19:00:00.454-08:00I like the way this series relates and circles bac...I like the way this series relates and circles back. Nice!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52978190576312177322010-02-28T18:35:37.938-08:002010-02-28T18:35:37.938-08:00Oooh, Gautami -- I like these very much. They'...Oooh, Gautami -- I like these very much. They're poetic and thought-provoking, and I enjoyed how you come full-circle back to dreams and dreaming.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23891240455230077132010-02-28T18:00:22.846-08:002010-02-28T18:00:22.846-08:00what a river you've named!what a river you've named!Beth P.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59906436247753282162010-02-28T17:08:12.528-08:002010-02-28T17:08:12.528-08:00The last two are my faves! Nice work...The last two are my faves! Nice work.<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29424374869353138642010-02-28T16:41:05.164-08:002010-02-28T16:41:05.164-08:00Nice "haiku-lets"!Nice "haiku-lets"!sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74132621964805873652010-02-28T16:07:32.749-08:002010-02-28T16:07:32.749-08:00Well done, I enjoyed it start to finish.Well done, I enjoyed it start to finish.Alone on the Islehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13986440177795939001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23078133930632137372010-02-28T07:49:38.576-08:002010-02-28T07:49:38.576-08:00Ah, sleeplessness, I know it well--and apparently ...Ah, sleeplessness, I know it well--and apparently so do you! Well done!<br><br><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2010/02/28/haiku-bones-sleep/" rel="nofollow">Rattling sleepy bones</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73906030943189154532010-02-28T05:26:00.104-08:002010-02-28T05:26:00.104-08:00This captures it perfectly! I like the overlappin...This captures it perfectly! I like the overlapping words because dreams are like that--blending from one image to the next.Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91241351110972907372010-02-27T23:22:08.111-08:002010-02-27T23:22:08.111-08:00Thanks Stan. I corrected. I posted it in a haste w...Thanks Stan. I corrected. I posted it in a haste without editing. Moral of the story: edit, edit, edit!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68352039788773257292010-02-27T21:46:34.881-08:002010-02-27T21:46:34.881-08:00I like them - they're like tose 'snapshot ...I like them - they're like tose 'snapshot ' dreams we often have.<br>There are 2 or 3 words that may need editing/correcting.<br>from - OF<br>misnoner - misnoMer<br>a - AN<br>What do you think?Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.com