tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1839590473622132105..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: let him grab the worldgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60508310988443300242013-11-30T09:32:03.365-08:002013-11-30T09:32:03.365-08:00Breaking bad habits is sometimes very hard to do, ...Breaking bad habits is sometimes very hard to do, Gautami. Beautifully written.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15334715623521107752013-11-26T18:13:50.705-08:002013-11-26T18:13:50.705-08:00Love your word play and the unique way you express...Love your word play and the unique way you expressed the creative struggle.Nara Malonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69395715120632919542013-11-26T12:03:48.782-08:002013-11-26T12:03:48.782-08:00I love your unique take on this!I love your unique take on this!Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4164963545309752902013-11-25T13:50:58.817-08:002013-11-25T13:50:58.817-08:00Breaking a harmful cycle isn't easy...such a b...Breaking a harmful cycle isn't easy...such a beautiful pieceSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81508192901411712062013-11-25T12:50:38.992-08:002013-11-25T12:50:38.992-08:00hard not to long to float away at times… can be a ...hard not to long to float away at times… can be a difficult habit to release.Laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46405454306355287492013-11-25T12:34:07.418-08:002013-11-25T12:34:07.418-08:00Beautiful piece reflecting on the difficulty of br...Beautiful piece reflecting on the difficulty of breaking the cycle of bad habits. Nicely done.razzamadazzlehttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23578982142326016272013-11-25T09:05:36.297-08:002013-11-25T09:05:36.297-08:00A habit is a sheer convenience. But a bad habit is...A habit is a sheer convenience. But a bad habit is difficult to control and can be damaging. Nicely gautami!<br><br>Hankkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11352066813452304352013-11-25T08:41:33.376-08:002013-11-25T08:41:33.376-08:00"Let him grab the world" whether on a bl..."Let him grab the world" whether on a black wall or on an open pathway. It won't be easy to stop seeking approval from the tradition, but the narration in this poem shows a choice on the verge of being made for the sake of LIFE. I like how it eases into the spoken word at the end. It is unclear to this reader whether it is on the wall, aloud, or a quote from a reading, but the ambiguity works for me.Susanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57488142167985001472013-11-24T15:59:06.704-08:002013-11-24T15:59:06.704-08:00It is so difficult to go against that which we hav...It is so difficult to go against that which we have learned from those around us, but the pain itself is a part of the lesson.<br><br>Elizabeth<br>http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/11/24/in-regards-to-this-waiting/in-regards-to-this-waitinghttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/11/24/in-regards-to-this-waiting/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7562205553511399822013-11-24T15:45:30.359-08:002013-11-24T15:45:30.359-08:00It's good desire to open up, but not enough......It's good desire to open up, but not enough...one must act. ~ Love your use of quotes at the end of the poem. Nice.humbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41725026016895206662013-11-24T14:06:03.795-08:002013-11-24T14:06:03.795-08:00Humans are blessed and cursed with such thinking b...Humans are blessed and cursed with such thinking brains. We use it not just for survival by to ask the unanswerable "Why?" And so we suffer.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37958259915966911062013-11-24T12:33:27.702-08:002013-11-24T12:33:27.702-08:00I hope he does break the cycle! I hope he does break the cycle! Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62694975495815330882013-11-24T12:31:48.442-08:002013-11-24T12:31:48.442-08:00wonderful wordling.wonderful wordling.vivinfrancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34127649354086837312013-11-24T11:01:42.666-08:002013-11-24T11:01:42.666-08:00better to grab the world than continue the cycle o...better to grab the world than continue the cycle of bad habits!Robyn Greenhousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18207192314012470792013-11-24T09:17:50.639-08:002013-11-24T09:17:50.639-08:00The desire to break the cycle is perhaps more impo...The desire to break the cycle is perhaps more important than what we find to write on..Jae Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com