tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1770695033216370697..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: patronising darkness weakens megautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55692315096016745822009-08-02T08:51:18.643-07:002009-08-02T08:51:18.643-07:00I see someone who's lost, trying to escape lif...I see someone who's lost, trying to escape life's hurt and the solution not necessarily the one which will bring salvation. Well written.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78097854570181294312009-08-01T07:00:49.605-07:002009-08-01T07:00:49.605-07:00Dark and ghostly..Dark and ghostly..Meghahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69806552177306186552009-07-31T16:55:51.736-07:002009-07-31T16:55:51.736-07:00I tried to see this the way Michael saw it.. after...I tried to see this the way Michael saw it.. after all I love to see the positive in things.. BUT 'flitting from body to body seeking oblivion' I only see darkness there and the imagery of a beautiful high heeled woman consumed with pain. <br>I imagined a very long tale in a few perfectly chosen words.Lucyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14285972464999953002009-07-31T10:35:00.630-07:002009-07-31T10:35:00.630-07:00Well, G'tami, I appear to be in the minority w...Well, G'tami, I appear to be in the minority with this. I don't feel the darkness. In fact, this is more celebratory to me. The infection of the evening drawing us away from the practicality of our daily struggles in search of some respite. I find nothing scary in Piscean indulgence and mingling on the dance floor. I rather enjoyed that!MichaelOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26070155247539322722009-07-30T19:02:45.216-07:002009-07-30T19:02:45.216-07:00Drink to forget - and remember!Drink to forget - and remember!Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12761043074928016312009-07-29T22:03:39.531-07:002009-07-29T22:03:39.531-07:00Dark, dark!!Very good oneDark, dark!!Very good oneJeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7908274859357402102009-07-29T22:02:21.296-07:002009-07-29T22:02:21.296-07:00Dark and intriguing. This left me wondering if th...Dark and intriguing. This left me wondering if the narrator was speaking with intent or just out of drunken illogic, soon forgotten. I guess I won't get to find out.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31970888775660365792009-07-29T21:51:29.628-07:002009-07-29T21:51:29.628-07:00I love something about the "on my way home&qu...I love something about the "on my way home" part. As in, "On my way home, I'll pick up some bread for toast in the morning." "On my way home, I'll fill the gas tank." "On my way home, I will steal the kids."<br><br>Uh huh.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19713143850100420802009-07-29T20:28:41.975-07:002009-07-29T20:28:41.975-07:00The end left me hanging - seeking for maybe someth...The end left me hanging - seeking for maybe something more? <br><br>Awesome... like others say, dark, but still great!Just someonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23992844749308307362009-07-29T20:03:22.454-07:002009-07-29T20:03:22.454-07:00excellent...excellent...quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10774349801631837542009-07-29T19:52:11.687-07:002009-07-29T19:52:11.687-07:00So there! Showing your stuff - I don't get the...So there! Showing your stuff - I don't get the part about the kids, though...hmmm. Nice work! Hope you're feeling well.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69742442836964571072009-07-29T19:20:31.744-07:002009-07-29T19:20:31.744-07:00Leave 'em wanting more. Good call on ending t...Leave 'em wanting more. Good call on ending this in such a mysterious fashion.<br><br>Well done!Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79800476032925869772009-07-29T17:47:01.317-07:002009-07-29T17:47:01.317-07:00Dark and yet wonderful! I like how it builds. :)Dark and yet wonderful! I like how it builds. :)Bobbiehttp://constantcurrent.blogspot.com/2009/07/red-dress-3ww.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62754800920595968982009-07-29T13:49:09.621-07:002009-07-29T13:49:09.621-07:00Love how it builds up to the end--and very darkLove how it builds up to the end--and very darkpiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84588819674467033412009-07-29T13:40:07.591-07:002009-07-29T13:40:07.591-07:00Wow, G, this really is most powerful. It does pain...Wow, G, this really is most powerful. It does paint a picture, but it sets a mood, too.<br><br><a href="http://thomg.blogspot.com/2009/07/wednesdays-three-word-wednesday_29.html" rel="nofollow">The Path</a>ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27964513426144205212009-07-29T13:39:43.389-07:002009-07-29T13:39:43.389-07:00Interesting, but I'm still pondering the last ...Interesting, but I'm still pondering the last line.sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49940662993959798922009-07-29T13:25:39.065-07:002009-07-29T13:25:39.065-07:00"I pirouetteaway my sorrows"Awesome line..."I pirouette<br>away my sorrows"<br><br>Awesome line! <br><br>You paint quite a picture here! I love it even though it makes me sad.Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34372863129514264252009-07-29T10:33:59.095-07:002009-07-29T10:33:59.095-07:00Yikes! Something to be said about heels :).Hope yo...Yikes! Something to be said about heels :).<br><br>Hope you are feeling better.Missyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10572512831301719991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17920174413624587812009-07-29T08:59:25.028-07:002009-07-29T08:59:25.028-07:00you call mine scary?this is scrayyy!!!i shuddered!...you call mine scary?<br><br>this is scrayyy!!!<br><br>i shuddered!<br><br><a href="http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/07/29/i-still-dream" rel="nofollow">Click Here For My WW</a>Americanising Desihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85207802538807240722009-07-29T07:17:09.705-07:002009-07-29T07:17:09.705-07:00Very dark. Nicely done.Very dark. Nicely done.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51084715944672546482009-07-29T07:07:19.824-07:002009-07-29T07:07:19.824-07:00dark...painful and excrucifying..dark...painful and excrucifying..Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.com