tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1704049797912595456..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Waiting......[Fiction] Fridaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41821054965642302982007-08-17T22:04:00.000-07:002007-08-17T22:04:00.000-07:00After the first few lines, of course I knew what w...After the first few lines, of course I knew what was coming... until the end. What a great stark image to have her with a knife under her pillow. And her favorite knife at that. I've missed your previous entries, but I look forward to future Fridays!pjdhttp://cornerkick.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71457512565094448222007-08-17T16:02:00.000-07:002007-08-17T16:02:00.000-07:00Sounds like how you would behave!Ok maybe not, put...Sounds like how you would behave!<br>Ok maybe not, put down that knife.... come on be a good girl!<br>:-)Stevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82537714761730303202007-08-17T13:45:00.000-07:002007-08-17T13:45:00.000-07:00Nice job...and I love the fact that we have a poet...Nice job...and I love the fact that we have a poet participating...d.challener roehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04605721172822135196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74914359977560391912007-08-17T13:40:00.000-07:002007-08-17T13:40:00.000-07:00You put so many of the childlike habits into such ...You put so many of the childlike habits into such a small space! Very clever...Yeah, I wouldn't want to make her mad.Tammihttp://tamrey.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71602909064963569072007-08-17T12:41:00.000-07:002007-08-17T12:41:00.000-07:00I had thought to combine them all, but didn't....I had thought to combine them all, but didn't. You blew it out of the water, it worked so well, like it was meant to be.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)http://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-523370456963203952007-08-17T11:19:00.000-07:002007-08-17T11:19:00.000-07:00I loved it!I loved it!Ingridhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10408201125366918838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61035035918362261482007-08-17T09:55:00.000-07:002007-08-17T09:55:00.000-07:00I really love how you rolled all of the traits int...I really love how you rolled all of the traits into one character. Wonderful piece of prose.<br><br>:),<br>Jenjenihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04510876745659994876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58587632547530452922007-08-17T09:40:00.001-07:002007-08-17T09:40:00.001-07:00Enjoyed this and I am glad to have found your blog...Enjoyed this and I am glad to have found your blogYolandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10135944573305009556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69975067713812936392007-08-17T09:40:00.000-07:002007-08-17T09:40:00.000-07:00ooops.......Michele says hello and so do i!ooops.......Michele says hello and so do i!Awarenesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3014290900139706412007-08-17T09:39:00.000-07:002007-08-17T09:39:00.000-07:00Hey Gautami.......the intensity increases as you r...Hey Gautami.......the intensity increases as you read along.....<br><br>I love your word tripping here....great work!!Awarenesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9945678744201083682007-08-17T09:38:00.000-07:002007-08-17T09:38:00.000-07:00Very enjoyable read. I'm sure it was as much f...Very enjoyable read. I'm sure it was as much fun to write.Paulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08136225187552117043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68652899544918890072007-08-17T09:12:00.000-07:002007-08-17T09:12:00.000-07:00Excellent imagination, Guatami. You write so well....Excellent imagination, Guatami. You write so well.<br><br>Michele sent me here.Jean-Luc Picardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01689798190618944262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54550823219614167892007-08-17T08:46:00.000-07:002007-08-17T08:46:00.000-07:00Great! It's a nice continued piece from last w...Great! It's a nice continued piece from last week.lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64978534698087294132007-08-17T08:41:00.000-07:002007-08-17T08:41:00.000-07:00these are wonderful, gautami. they will be nice ad...these are wonderful, gautami. they will be nice additions to your book...Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84369202150332035812007-08-17T08:33:00.000-07:002007-08-17T08:33:00.000-07:00wow! more great stuff!wow! more great stuff!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40849441757776695342007-08-17T07:58:00.000-07:002007-08-17T07:58:00.000-07:00That writing has a nice energy to it! Lots of pen...That writing has a nice energy to it! Lots of pent up aggresion in many of those actions which is a nice contrast to them being associted with more child-like things.<br><br>I think we all display child-like behaviours sometimes. Michele sent me over to admit to liking too much ketchup and chocolate milk!Bob-kathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11842625953465490864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23065527791666723852007-08-17T07:57:00.000-07:002007-08-17T07:57:00.000-07:00HEY! you are having WAY too much fun with the lang...HEY! you are having WAY too much fun with the language. <br>my compliments on your playfulness.Davidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02690273066219097101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-264850988048620162007-08-17T04:50:00.000-07:002007-08-17T04:50:00.000-07:00Whoa, Gautami! I wouldn't want to be her enemy...Whoa, Gautami! I wouldn't want to be her enemy. I like the flow of your story. Good job!lizhttp://soul5spiral.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com