tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1511732228842299353..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: tumbled thoughts in a silver tumblergautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14428498537161460972010-08-23T23:28:12.708-07:002010-08-23T23:28:12.708-07:00I don't know what to say except that I have en...I don't know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading.The poems and stories are simply superb,Nice blog.Devanandhttp://sajeevnair.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44910789035010448432010-08-17T08:33:02.445-07:002010-08-17T08:33:02.445-07:00Beautifully emotive in its sadness, this was a won...Beautifully emotive in its sadness, this was a wonderful read, G'tami!MichaelOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31703705503830254442010-08-16T15:46:03.206-07:002010-08-16T15:46:03.206-07:00it is hard to be separated from a brother...it is hard to be separated from a brother...ms piehttp://www.pieceofpie.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82703731872587721952010-08-14T04:00:16.842-07:002010-08-14T04:00:16.842-07:00This is truly sad. Well done.This is truly sad. Well done.Tilly Budhttp://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70723535774085458212010-08-13T10:09:38.760-07:002010-08-13T10:09:38.760-07:00I don't have anything to say either...silent a...I don't have anything to say either...silent and speechless....thanks for sharing your wonderful poem GautamiWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81537481798171829002010-08-13T07:36:14.963-07:002010-08-13T07:36:14.963-07:00This is...sensational...a real heartbreaker, bravo...This is...sensational...a real heartbreaker, bravo GautamiLorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-92070151730127801942010-08-12T20:35:30.488-07:002010-08-12T20:35:30.488-07:00This was beautiful and moving. It flowed so smoot...This was beautiful and moving. It flowed so smoothly and stirred my emotions. Incredible piece!Scribblerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09693402306029886703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65654158880203751212010-08-12T17:14:01.783-07:002010-08-12T17:14:01.783-07:00very good even if it does twist the heart a little...very good even if it does twist the heart a little.. so many families now a days are estranged one from another.. makes me very sad!<br><br>Thanks for visiting my blog.<br>PatsyPblacksawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16959380392842211295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7826707107303813502010-08-12T16:08:59.955-07:002010-08-12T16:08:59.955-07:00tender & sad - that's all I can think oftender & sad - that's all I can think oflissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77322977186534213552010-08-12T16:03:40.585-07:002010-08-12T16:03:40.585-07:00I like the way a simple childhood object evoked so...I like the way a simple childhood object evoked so many feelings and memories. Life is funny that way.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14885916388283659272010-08-12T11:38:41.820-07:002010-08-12T11:38:41.820-07:00Beautiful and sad poem!PamelaBeautiful and sad poem!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23390844833878837712010-08-12T10:35:10.581-07:002010-08-12T10:35:10.581-07:00am speechless !!am speechless !!Nimuehttp://ladynimue.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45639482045437713482010-08-12T09:14:42.005-07:002010-08-12T09:14:42.005-07:00Gautami,It is always a pleasure to read you. Read ...Gautami,<br><br>It is always a pleasure to read you. Read all pending poems and post on comment box. I fully am with you on Half-way Throgh and this one is so touching and sad fact of life. I agree with you on comment box. How I wish I could have your views on my posts too!<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90804339118632037042010-08-12T06:47:11.792-07:002010-08-12T06:47:11.792-07:00Very emotional and reflective poem Gautami. Nicel...Very emotional and reflective poem Gautami. Nicely done.Jay Thurstonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8851627924728011582010-08-11T17:19:34.569-07:002010-08-11T17:19:34.569-07:00You sure have tumbled your feelings into it.You sure have tumbled your feelings into it.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21527162443318692002010-08-11T17:16:41.908-07:002010-08-11T17:16:41.908-07:00Beautiful use of symbol and detail to convey emoti...Beautiful use of symbol and detail to convey emotion. This level of love will draw him back to you eventually.naramalone.comhttp://naramalone.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64717575485009556212010-08-11T16:12:25.785-07:002010-08-11T16:12:25.785-07:00Very evocative! Leaving the particulars of the est...Very evocative! Leaving the particulars of the estrangement out allows this poem the flexibility to call forth all manner of conflicts that rend relationships. Moving!Paul Oakleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47525696067540030472010-08-11T14:12:46.797-07:002010-08-11T14:12:46.797-07:00A strong and sad poem. Makes my heart break.A strong and sad poem. Makes my heart break.Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8209019502364065952010-08-11T14:02:23.909-07:002010-08-11T14:02:23.909-07:00Oh how sad -- such a beautiful poem, and speaks so...Oh how sad -- such a beautiful poem, and speaks so eloquently to how painful it is to be estranged from a person we deeply love.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10978788703721023272010-08-11T13:58:46.031-07:002010-08-11T13:58:46.031-07:00I too, hope it is just a poem and not real life. I...I too, hope it is just a poem and not real life. I don't know what I would do if my brothers and sisters were estranged from me, it would make me very sad in deed.Gramma Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38761010624600038782010-08-11T13:41:49.627-07:002010-08-11T13:41:49.627-07:00i hope it's just a poem... if not, I hope you...i hope it's just a poem... if not, I hope you and your brother reconnect.<br><br>I like the way you wrap the poem around the tumbler and how the poem circles back to it and how a little object like that holds hope.sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23745252048704417662010-08-11T12:36:06.500-07:002010-08-11T12:36:06.500-07:00the same one who is estranged from us nowThis is h...<i>the same one who is estranged from us now</i><br><br>This is heartbreaking. This and the last line, especially.Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42292439733491751162010-08-11T09:19:16.711-07:002010-08-11T09:19:16.711-07:00Sad story about your estranged brother. Maybe you...Sad story about your estranged brother. Maybe you should give him a phone call sometime? Things can work out. A very poignant story.Diane Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32167114969378860542010-08-11T07:49:49.161-07:002010-08-11T07:49:49.161-07:00Gautami, This is filled with longing. It is lovel...Gautami, This is filled with longing. It is lovely in its sadness. May your brother read this whereve he is, and open his heart.<br>~Brendabrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30221334919059145932010-08-11T07:45:57.217-07:002010-08-11T07:45:57.217-07:00Raw and emotional, thanks for sharing this. (And a...Raw and emotional, thanks for sharing this. <br><br>(And as for taking a leap of faith soon, go do it.)ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.com