tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1409192675617687973..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: a gift for yougautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21429235224241111072010-09-29T13:49:38.603-07:002010-09-29T13:49:38.603-07:00Excellent 160, Gautami!! You say so much with thi...Excellent 160, Gautami!! You say so much with this.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28851849147966200112010-09-29T11:32:55.995-07:002010-09-29T11:32:55.995-07:00My great grandmother used to snuff.My great grandmother used to snuff.Nessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18083461638127050502010-09-29T09:19:14.498-07:002010-09-29T09:19:14.498-07:00Tami, nothing wrong with this poem Sad can be fill...Tami, nothing wrong with this poem Sad can be filled with whimsy too. Great read.<br><br><br>MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51464853432190173212010-09-28T16:41:54.675-07:002010-09-28T16:41:54.675-07:00You write about a sad feeling, but I think the cre...You write about a sad feeling, but I think the creativity powering the thoughts ends on a sign of hope.Nara Malonehttp://passionatereads.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70153338499200425452010-09-28T11:21:02.791-07:002010-09-28T11:21:02.791-07:00I like that you include the note of hope, tarnishe...I like that you include the note of hope, tarnished though it may be.<br><br>Poignant.Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27983830755453240282010-09-27T21:52:00.967-07:002010-09-27T21:52:00.967-07:00Fine blend of feelings and expressionFine blend of feelings and expressionnimaruichihttp://nimaruichi.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79810380488066341692010-09-27T13:20:24.000-07:002010-09-27T13:20:24.000-07:00A complete story told so sparely - lovely work!A complete story told so sparely - lovely work!This Girl Remembershttp://thisgirlremembers.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53596202073764869082010-09-27T03:37:36.416-07:002010-09-27T03:37:36.416-07:00Thought its sad, its still beautiful to be complet...Thought its sad, its still beautiful to be completed in 160 words. Gr8..:)<br><br>www.sajeevnair.com/blogSajeevhttp://www.sajeevnair.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65165480742546835182010-09-26T18:37:07.474-07:002010-09-26T18:37:07.474-07:00Very emotive Gautami, and I like the word picture ...Very emotive Gautami, and I like the word picture you paint. You capture the moment and all those feelings in so little space. Wonderful job,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://claudetteellinger.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85269654266037130102010-09-26T16:34:00.588-07:002010-09-26T16:34:00.588-07:00Like the language of flowers, a victorian whimsy.Like the language of flowers, a victorian whimsy.pwfhttp://wysfool.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20154614835374788192010-09-26T15:13:04.466-07:002010-09-26T15:13:04.466-07:00very good!very good!Catyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60553131358965919222010-09-26T14:27:18.948-07:002010-09-26T14:27:18.948-07:00Short and very whimsical!-Weasel =)Short and very whimsical!<br><br>-Weasel =)Systematic Weaselhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55278417434839958762010-09-26T13:24:24.232-07:002010-09-26T13:24:24.232-07:00Oh wee of little faith!Oh wee of little faith!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56993341355196473252010-09-26T13:08:20.621-07:002010-09-26T13:08:20.621-07:00Woeful, like word pun (flee) which seems to unders...Woeful, like word pun (flee) which seems to underscore state of events.happyflowerwordzoo002http://happyflowerwordzoo002.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19401716655675369842010-09-26T12:33:05.795-07:002010-09-26T12:33:05.795-07:00A full range of emotions well-expressed.A full range of emotions well-expressed.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83929493927038739672010-09-26T11:39:26.759-07:002010-09-26T11:39:26.759-07:00I love "flee" market - fits perfectly wi...I love "flee" market - fits perfectly with the rest of the story... Nice 160!gospelwriterhttp://turtlememoir.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63187205686173435392010-09-26T11:21:35.301-07:002010-09-26T11:21:35.301-07:00Very good, should it be "Flea" market th...Very good, should it be "Flea" market though.<br><br>Hey, who let the spelling monkey in? Sorry like I know how to spell!<br><br>It's okay you can slap me up the side of the head.Mikhttp://miksplace.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66997033056404069492010-09-26T10:29:26.779-07:002010-09-26T10:29:26.779-07:00Nicely described but sadNicely described but sadSagehttp://www.sagecoveredhills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71263374183501330172010-09-26T09:17:58.856-07:002010-09-26T09:17:58.856-07:00Beautiful and sad Gautami!PamelaBeautiful and sad Gautami!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73516271638372599682010-09-26T08:39:25.293-07:002010-09-26T08:39:25.293-07:00How could such a creative concept not tug at the h...How could such a creative concept not tug at the heart strings of its recipient. Great Sunday 160. Thank you for playing and hope to see you again.Monkey Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2042248617159158852010-09-26T07:54:41.070-07:002010-09-26T07:54:41.070-07:00nice..little and beautiful.By the way, i have trie...nice..little and beautiful.<br><br><br>By the way, i have tried to write poem in 14o letters.:<br><br><br>How wonderful it is;<br>When a long forgotten name brings<br>a smile,<br>On the other wise deserted lips.Tarun S.Khttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18384437719833202863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7980291237710017392010-09-26T07:07:03.380-07:002010-09-26T07:07:03.380-07:00So sad but very well done!So sad but very well done!Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73180145450503648862010-09-26T07:06:15.571-07:002010-09-26T07:06:15.571-07:00At least there is some tarnished hope.Nicely wrapp...At least there is some tarnished hope.<br><br>Nicely wrapped 55<br><br>Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77768603493653865632010-09-26T05:34:14.609-07:002010-09-26T05:34:14.609-07:00You'll have a good sneeze and get over the who...You'll have a good sneeze and get over the whole sad episode!Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55602717936428079762010-09-26T05:19:59.624-07:002010-09-26T05:19:59.624-07:00Wonderfully but sadly whimsical!Wonderfully but sadly whimsical!Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com