tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1102079033357108396..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Menhir-----Totally Optional Promptsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10509692985339142182008-01-17T17:27:00.000-08:002008-01-17T17:27:00.000-08:00Like some of the others, I am a bit perplexed abou...Like some of the others, I am a bit perplexed about the meaning here, but it's so well written that it'll be a pleasure to reread it!Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45547445502590388082008-01-17T14:30:00.000-08:002008-01-17T14:30:00.000-08:00this piece is excellent!this piece is excellent!Kai C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23648551963871616402008-01-17T10:09:00.000-08:002008-01-17T10:09:00.000-08:00Ponderable, for sure...Ponderable, for sure...tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76806562882977470072008-01-17T09:59:00.000-08:002008-01-17T09:59:00.000-08:00"he laundered himself of his thoughts"As..."he laundered himself of his thoughts"<br><br>As the others, this line caught me the most.<br><br>But also, the last two lines -- so much to carry, so many burdens, that one large standing stone would hardly be noticed... <br><br>?SBhttp://www.sbpoet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26566951877217277612008-01-17T09:19:00.000-08:002008-01-17T09:19:00.000-08:00I guess I'm the only one who doesn't under...I guess I'm the only one who doesn't understand this. :(<br><br>Rose<br><br>xoRose Dewy Knickershttp://dewyknickers.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30533035567701697232008-01-17T08:52:00.000-08:002008-01-17T08:52:00.000-08:00yes laundered himself of his thoughts is very good...yes laundered himself of his thoughts is very good......an interesting take, Gautami.Johttp://florescence.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70509777146362733662008-01-17T08:20:00.000-08:002008-01-17T08:20:00.000-08:00"Laundered himself of his thoughts" beau..."Laundered himself of his thoughts" beautiful thread of words! But yes it would alleviate his burdens to have something to believe in! Enjoyable read!<br><br>Hugs Sherriegiggleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29645567343487796792008-01-17T05:52:00.000-08:002008-01-17T05:52:00.000-08:00well i am wondering why a huge monolithic stone wo...well i am wondering why a huge monolithic stone would ease his burden,, is it that it would make his weight tangible??? i am unsure... but i will continue to think on it...paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22255721131037610542008-01-17T04:23:00.000-08:002008-01-17T04:23:00.000-08:00I, too, like "laundered himself of thoughts&q...I, too, like "laundered himself of thoughts" and "who else would clean the doormat?" <br><br>And the idea of the menhir both making his burden easier to carry and being another burden in the process is intriguing.Paulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28130004089002645712008-01-17T03:58:00.000-08:002008-01-17T03:58:00.000-08:00particularly liked "laundered himself of his ...particularly liked "laundered himself of his thoughts"<br>wish i could learn how to do that<br>thank youflootshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86437643853253508312008-01-17T03:34:00.000-08:002008-01-17T03:34:00.000-08:00I always wonder how those abecediary stones beyond...I always wonder how those abecediary stones beyond the Hebrides were erected .Alanhttp://cornfedtrouble.blogspot.com/2008/01/playing-low-card-too-soon.htmlnoreply@blogger.com