tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post1017910684704405483..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: picking up the ladle, I smile at you------Sunday Scribblingsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88026013312673792582008-07-06T11:03:00.000-07:002008-07-06T11:03:00.000-07:00You can always try again!You can always try again!Noah the Greathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31007934031356416912008-07-01T06:26:00.000-07:002008-07-01T06:26:00.000-07:00Hold within me? Taste good?? Jeez, don't tell ...Hold within me? Taste good?? <br><br>Jeez, don't tell me it's what I think it is..argh!<br><br>Vivid and graphic, and the end knocked me off my chair!indicaspecieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67107736611879164402008-06-30T17:57:00.000-07:002008-06-30T17:57:00.000-07:00Ohhhh expertly done ... please send the list of in...Ohhhh expertly done ... please send the list of ingredients!Rednesshttp://over-it.blogspot.com/2008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68863840440280726072008-06-29T16:20:00.000-07:002008-06-29T16:20:00.000-07:00lol! Well done! Lots of horrific fun!lol! Well done! Lots of horrific fun!texasbluhttp://texasblu5.blogspot.com/2008/06/sunday-scribbles-vision.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44777904907465792122008-06-29T10:09:00.000-07:002008-06-29T10:09:00.000-07:00how oddly delicioushow oddly deliciouspolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3849942598273241922008-06-29T10:02:00.000-07:002008-06-29T10:02:00.000-07:00That's one way to wash a man away. lol Well do...That's one way to wash a man away. lol Well done, especially that last line. ;) xxooTammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40692878197130567342008-06-29T07:12:00.000-07:002008-06-29T07:12:00.000-07:00dark,dark.i like. :)dark,dark.<br>i like. :)dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88221802984287302422008-06-29T07:06:00.000-07:002008-06-29T07:06:00.000-07:00Wicked! I love it.SeerWicked! I love it.<br><br><a href="http://www.thomg.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Seer</a>ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56058409897694087582008-06-28T21:10:00.000-07:002008-06-28T21:10:00.000-07:00So ya house trained then?So ya house trained then?Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55593778722336264962008-06-28T17:56:00.000-07:002008-06-28T17:56:00.000-07:00What was it about this post that made us see "...What was it about this post that made us see "dark" visions? Me too.<br><br>bbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89973775806212386242008-06-28T09:59:00.000-07:002008-06-28T09:59:00.000-07:00very quirky - very good!!!very quirky - very good!!!dannihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14675797306131871129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70485567775042378832008-06-28T05:23:00.000-07:002008-06-28T05:23:00.000-07:00You've conveyed similar thoughts as Tweeny Tod...You've conveyed similar thoughts as Tweeny Todd. I conclude that we do taste good whether it's soup or pie if the secret is not revealed. I like the part on the smile before revealing the truth. Well Done!ratanaongnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44163239283542205312008-06-28T02:49:00.000-07:002008-06-28T02:49:00.000-07:00Oh, I do like that character. A storyteller's ...Oh, I do like that character. A storyteller's dream.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7877220730085011942008-06-27T20:55:00.000-07:002008-06-27T20:55:00.000-07:00ooh. how wonderfully evil. its really not related ...ooh. how wonderfully evil. its really not related but for some reason it reminds me of this story by roald dahl. the wife kills her husband with the leg of a lamb she was going to cook for dinner. and then she feeds the lamb to the cops when the come over to investigate; destroying the evidence.Sanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13459272427622582627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49235320976343766782008-06-27T20:07:00.001-07:002008-06-27T20:07:00.001-07:00I love how the photo of this sweet looking little ...I love how the photo of this sweet looking little old lady and the sinister goings on your poem implies compliment each other! Lovely work...if not a little horrific!fearfullymadehttp://fearfullymade.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85161213416996235232008-06-27T20:07:00.000-07:002008-06-27T20:07:00.000-07:00ooooh You little sweeny todd you!ooooh You little sweeny todd you!Lucyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17059977174027781082008-06-27T19:03:00.000-07:002008-06-27T19:03:00.000-07:00Funny, I was taking this more metaphorically. Me, ...Funny, I was taking this more metaphorically. Me, who sees the literal in everything. <br><br>And to think I was grossed out yesterday by a discussion of turtle soup (still am, come to think of it)!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31202879053637820162008-06-27T17:49:00.000-07:002008-06-27T17:49:00.000-07:00that was terrific.. love stinks..that was terrific.. love stinks..one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2008/06/27/yield/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58279505184769161902008-06-27T16:57:00.000-07:002008-06-27T16:57:00.000-07:00(well, I must agree, you do taste good)...i had to...(well, I must agree, you do taste good)...i had to read this twice to make sure i read right....and then, i continued reading and, yes i did!<br><br>oh, my...dark and extremely good.rebeccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77375549420964538122008-06-27T16:56:00.000-07:002008-06-27T16:56:00.000-07:00This is like an insidious, flash-fiction horror st...This is like an insidious, flash-fiction horror story! Very clever!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84476373052505676622008-06-27T13:52:00.000-07:002008-06-27T13:52:00.000-07:00gag. cough. sputter.Nice little mystery story ther...gag. cough. sputter.<br>Nice little mystery story there.Lilibethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45966795300672592242008-06-27T12:39:00.000-07:002008-06-27T12:39:00.000-07:00Vivid, beautiful, and sad. You are expert at usin...Vivid, beautiful, and sad. You are expert at using the everyday concrete images to convey a larger meaning.Granny Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17267634023908682082008-06-27T12:38:00.000-07:002008-06-27T12:38:00.000-07:00Oh No! How horrid this seeminglysweet old lady is...Oh No! How horrid this seemingly<br>sweet old lady is - could it be-<br>has she murdered her partner?<br>Excellent writing, you kept this<br>reader unaware until the end.Cynthiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.com